DIRA (FF)- HUMAARI AJAB KAHAANI- All parts (1-13) on Page 35

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PART 1

Hi, guys, this is first time, I m writing. Have enjoyed reading many of the posts (OS/FF) earlier written on DIRA on India-forums. And those encouarged me to write this.. Hope u like it..

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This FF starts from the point when Ratan had got to know about Diya's feelings for him. Diya had confessed her love for him but Ratan told her that he doesn't love her the way she does. Diya was very hurt but somehow she was able to control her emotions. She holds back her tears and doesn't cry, as she knew her tears will break Ratan. Ratan wanted Diya to speak her heart out and scold him as he wasn't able to fulfill his promises he made to her during their marriage. In fact Diya says - Its okay Ratan, both of us knew this marriage was a mismatch. You were not happy in this marriage, since the beginning. Aur isme aapki koi galti nahin hai, galti to hamaare haalato ki hai. Zabardasti aap humse pyaar Karen, yeh hum nahin chahenge... Hum achche se jaante hain, jis cheez ko karne ka aapke mann nahin hota, woh aap agar karna bi chahen to, aap nahin kar paate... So, Lets not take drag this relationship further and inform everyone at home that we will not be able to continue in this FORCED marriage any longer and we want to separate.

Ratan was shocked to hear this, but Diya meant everything she said. She holds his hand and starts walking towards Kakimasaa's room. She informs Kaakimasaa about their decision. Kakimasaa knew the truth of their marriage and she actually wanted them to separate. But she asks them to continue living together; atleast till Yash banna's marriage, becoz news of their separation may affect Yash's marriage. Ratan and Diya agree to kakimasaa's advise (Esha baisaa overhears all the conversation).

Staying together after all what happened, was actually very awkward for both Ratan and Diya now. They were not able to behave either as husband and wife or as best friends. Diya was however emotionally and mentally stronger than Ratan and was somehow able to act normally in front of other family members. But Ratan was not okay and looked disturbed, he needed emotional support from his fren, his best fren Diya. But Diya was trying to avoid Ratan as she felt that she would not be able to control her tears, her emotions in front of Ratan. And she knows Ratan cares a lot for her and seeing her cry will make Ratan even weaker and she didn't want that.

Though for other family members, Diya looked absolutely normal, Esha baisaa cud see how sad her sister really is. She knew how much Diya loved Ratan. Esha tells Diya that she had heard their discussion with Kakimasaa. Esha tells her that living with Ratan like this, is gonna hurt her only, as there are still few months for yash's marriage.

Diya says- Koi baat nahin jijisa, Agar humme aise kuch maheene aur bitaane hain, to hum manage kar lenge. Haan, humme bahut takleef ho rahi hai aise, par hum yeh takleef bhi sah lenge, Ratan ke kiye, humare pariwar ke liye... Aap chinta mat kariye..

But Esha can see that Diya is in great sorrow and pain and she can't see her sister like this. She decides to inform their father about this. Sajjan Singh gets furious to know the truth of Ratan and Diya's relationship. He knew that Ratan may take time to adjust but he hadn't thought that he will think of separation so soon (he didn't know that it was Diya who actually asked for it). He decides to go to kesar mahal.

That morning, Diya was having a very strange feeling, since she got up.. Her heart was beating very fast and she was having palpitations. She felt as if something very wrong is gonna happen.. She didn't look fine.. Ratan could seen tension on her face and asked her - Diya, kya hua, aap theek to hain na? Diya- haan, hum theek hain.. Woh humme, apna dupatta nahin mil raha tha, wahi dhundh rahen hain (she just gave a silly excuse for her behavior) and started acting as if she is really searching for sumthing.. She started throwing her clothes out of wardrobe trying to search some dupatta.. Seeing Diya throwing everything out of wardrobe and making their room messy, made Ratan little angry. He asked if he cud help her, for which Diya refused straight away.. Ratan felt bad and preferred to stay silent and walk out of the room.

As Ratan came down to main hall for breakfast, he sees Kaakusaa (Sajjan Singh) coming, who looked very angry. Ratan pays regards to him and says- Kaakusaa, aap..? Aap yahan, achaanak..? I mean aapne bataya nahin... Sajjan Singh-Bataya to aapne nahin, Datahukum... Ratan- kya..? kya nahin bataya humne, Kaakusaa.. ? Sajjan Singh- Sachchayi... ! Ratan- kaisi Sachchayi...? Sajjan Singh- Aapke aur Diya baisaa ke rishte ki sachchayi... Yahi ki aap Diya baisa se pyar nahin karte... Aur yeh khush-haal shaadi, bas ek dikhawa hai, jo aap sab ke saamne bahut achche se karte hain... Par woh sab waade jo aapne Diya se kiye, the iss shaadi lo lekar, kya woh sab ek jhooth tha, dikhawa tha? Aapne humse kaha tha ki aap diya ka khyaal rakenge.. Usey kabhi bhi dukhi nahin hone denge, uska saath zindagi bhar denge, kabhi unhe akela nahin chodenge.. Kya hua unn sab waadon ka, datahukum.. ? Aapko to apne waadon ka pakaa hona chahiye, datahukum. Fir kya hua? Aaj aap fir se, meri beti ke dukhon ka kaaran ban gaye.. Par ab bas, bahut ho gaya.. Main abhi issi waqt diya ko yahan se le jaunga.. (Diya was standing upstairs and heard everything. She makes a phone call to Yash banna)

Ratan- Kaakusa.. main aapko bataane hi waala tha, par haalaat aise the ki main... Sajjan Singh- Bas datahukum, bas... Ek aur shabad nahin.. Bulaaiye Diya ko.. Hum abhi usey yahan se le jayenge..

Diya comes. She prefers to stand a little away from Ratan as she knew that time has come for their separation. Kakimasaa (choti thakraanisaa) comes and tries to console Sajjan Singh.. Sajjan sa, please shaant ho jayiye.. Humme bhi abhi pata chala se.. Hum bhi bahut dukhi sain.. Par thode thande dimaag se kaam lijiye.. Abhi aise Diya Thakraanisaa ko mat le jaayiye.. Yash banna ki bi shaadi paas aa gayi sai, log kya kahenge.. ? Baatein bannyenge aisi waisi.. Sajjan Singh- Nahin choti thakraani sa.. Humme kuch nahin sunna.. Logon ne to pahle bhi bahut baaten banayi thi, jab hamari 18 saal ki masoom, kunwari ladki aapke ghar, ek pahredaar ki tarah aayi thi.. Kitni baaten suni, diya ne aapke pariwaar ke liye- Ki, kyun, ek kunwari ladki 12 saal tak ek ajnabi ghar mein, ek ladke ki pahredaari kar rahi hai... Par inn sab ke bawzood diya ke logon ki parwah kiye bina, apna wachan poora kiya.. inn 12 saalon mein, diya baisaa par kitne jaanleva hamle hue, pur unhone kabhi bhi iski parwaah nahin ki, aur datahukum ki raksha puri nishtha se ki, aur kabhi unhe koi aanch tak nahin aane di... Itnaa sab kuch, iss pariwaar ke liye karne ke baad bhi, kya diya aap sabne humari beti ko.. Kahiye datahukum..? Ratan cudnt say anything. Kakimasaa- dekhiye Sajjan saa, yash ki shaadi tak rukne dijiye, Diya ko. Fir le jaayiye unhe. Hum kuch koni kahenge.. Humare pariwaar ki izzat ke baare to mein sochiye.. Sajjan Singh - kya? Aapko abhi bhi apne pariwaar ki izzat ki padi hai.. yash ki shaadi mein, logon ko Ratan aur Diya ke tute rishte ke baare mein kuch pataa nahin chale, nahin to aapke pariwaar ki be-izzati hogi.. shaadi mein jhoote khushhaal jode ki tarah diya aapke ratan se saath kadi rahen, bas iss liye diya yahan ruke?.. kya diya koi cheez hai, jiski zaroorat aapko yash ki shaadi tak hai, uske baad aapko diya ki zaroorat nahin hai.. diya ko iss kesar mahal se hamesha dukh hi mile hain, bas ab aur nahin.. bahut sah liya humari beti ne.. chaliye Diya, aap apna saaman pack kar Lijiye, hum abhi yahan se aapko le jayenge..

Diya starts walking towards her room.. Diya looks into Ratan eyes as if she wanted to say her final Good Bye. Ratan cud understand that Diya is trying to say something to him.. But Diya's lips didnt utter a word and Diya started walking.. Ratan started feeling restlessness within and he wanted stop to Diya, but now he had no right to stop her.. Ratan goes to Sajjan Singh and asks him to sit and have some water.. He tries to console him but Sajjan Singh is not willing to listen even a single word.. Ratan cud understand his concern for Diya.

Now Ratan knew that Now its time, time to separate.. Ratan started feeling heaviness in his heart and he was able to feel his own heartbeat.. He wanted to meet and talk to Diya one last time, before she leaves (they hadn't spoken to each other properly in last few days).. He starts walking towards his room to meet Diya.

Yash banna stops him and tells him- Kaakusaa.. Ek minute rukiye.. Abhi ke abhi aapko hotel aana padega.. Kuch problem ho gayi hai, project ki files main... plz chaliye. Ratan- Par yash banaa... abhi? Main kuch der mein aata hun.. Aap chaliye.. Yash- Nahin kaakusa.. Aapko abhi chalna hoga, hamare saath.. Bas ek baar, project ki files check kar lijiye, fir aa jayiye wapis.. Yeh thoda important hai. Woh upcoming Vivah project ki files waala folder, aapne computer ke desktop mein hi rakha tha na, ab woh files nahin mil rahi hain...Please Kaakusaa, aaiye. Its urgent... Ratan cudnt say no, as it is indeed an very important project for him.. He thought he will finish that files' work and come back soon, to meet Diya before she leaves kesar mahal. He thinks- Waise bhi, Diya jaane se pehle mujhse ek baak zaroor milengi, he was sure.. He goes to his hotel office and finds that files are not in the folder he had saved.. He tries searching in other folders.. It takes him some time to retrieve those files again. Ratan informs Yash and says.. Yash banna maine files ka folder desktop mein fir se save kar diya hai, aap plz check kar lejiye, aur ek copy apne paas bhi rakh lijiye.. Par mujhe abhi jaldi se wapis ghar jaana hai.. Ok bye.. Yash felt bad as he was just acting in front of Ratan.. He himself had changed the location of files, on Diya's request, so that Ratan leaves for hotel and she doesn't have to face Ratan while she is leaving Kesar Mehal.. She didn't want to see or speak to Ratan at this moment, bcoz she knew that today, she wud not be able to hold back her emotions or act strong in front of Ratan.. And she is aware that Ratan can't bear the sight of her crying.. She packs only few of her belongings and hurriedly makes the room tidy (she knows that messy room makes Ratan angry). Then, she comes downstairs. Diya tells her father- Papasaa, chaliye... hum taiyaar hain. Chaliye, jaldi..

Sajjan Singh takes her suitcase and then, they come out of kesar mahal where car is waiting for them. Diya turns back and gives a final look to kesar mahal, as if she wanted to seal this image of kesal mahal in her heart, forever. They sit in car and driver starts the car.

Ratan hurriedly reaches kesar mahal and is surprised to see that kakusaa is not in main hall. Then he thinks that Kaakusaa wud be with diya in her room. He heads straight away towards the room. He is shocked to see no-one there.. Room is neat with no mess around (totally opposite of how it was when Diya was searching for her dupatta, an hour back). He starts calling Diya's name.. Diya, diya...? Kahan hain aap? Diya? Diya? Kaakusaa? Kaakusaa? Kaakimasaa comes and Ratan asks her-kaakimasaa, Diya kahan hai? Kaakusaa kahan hain? Kab se awaaz de rahaa hun, kahan hain woh ? Kaakimasaa - Datahukum, Diya thakraanisaa wahin chali gaye sain, jahan unhe hona chahiye.. Ratan - kya, kya matlab? Kaakimasaa - Diya baisaa chali gayi sain, apne papasaa ke saath.. Ratan - itni jaldi...? Main mila bhi nahin unse? Itni jaldi kaise jaa sakti hai who, mujhse mile bina..? Kaakimasaa - shayad woh milna hi nahin chahti ho... Ratan - No I don't believe this. Diya mujhse mile bina nahin ja sakti.. Kab, kab gaye woh yahan se? Kaakimasaa- bas abhi.. 2 minute pehle...

Ratan goes out running, hoping to see Diya.. When he goes out of main entrance door, he sees that car is about to leave the gates of kesar mahal.. He calls out Diya's name.. Diya!! Diya...! But car doesn't stop.. Diya sees Ratan in rear-view mirror and she turns back to see him.. But Sajjan Singh stops her and asks her to look ahead.. Diya baisaa, ab aapko, piche mudd kar nahin dekhna hai. Iss kesar mahal ko apni yaadon, aur apni zindagi se hamesha ke liye nikaal fekiye... yahan se appko sirf or sirf takleef hi mili hain.. Ab aap apne aage ki aane wali zindagi ke baare mein sochiye, bas..

Deep in her heart, Diya wanted to ask driver to stop the car so that she cud meet Ratan and hug him one last time. But she decides not to say anything and agrees to her father's advice and says - Ji, babasaa..

(Dream sequence- Car stops and Diya comes out of it. Ratan runs towards her and hugs her tightly. Ratan- Aap mujhse mile bina hi jaa rahi thi, Diya.. Aap aise kaise jaane ki soch sakti hain.. Bataaiye..? Diya- Sorry Ratan, humme maaf kar dijiye... apni best fren ko maaf nahin karenge, aap? Ratan- Nahin, bilkul nahin..! aapne aisa karna ka socha bhi kaise? Mere baare mein ek baar bhi nahin socha aapne, aapse mile bina, aapse baat kiye bina, mera kya haal hoga? Aap janti hain na, aap mere liye kitni important hain.. Diya- haan, hum jaante hain, aur aap bhi humaari life ke sabse important insaan hain, kya yeh aap jante hain...? Ratan- haan..! They both just start smiling, listening to their claims of each other's importance. Diya- chaliye Ratan, ab humme chalna hoga, papasaa wait kar rahen hain humara. Ratan - aapko rokne ka haq kho chuka hun main, par aap mujhse waada kariye ki -humari frenship kabhi nahin tutegi... Diya - I promise, hum humesha best frens rahenge... Par aap bhi humme promise kijiye, ki aap apna khyaal rakenge..Ratan- I promise, aur aap bhi waada kariye ki humesha yun hi hasti rahengi...Diya thinks- humaari hasne ki wazah to aap the Ratan, aap se juda hone ke baad, ab kaise inn hothon par hasee aayegi.. Ratan- Diya? Promise kijiye, aap humesha kush rahengi..Diya - haan, hum waada karte hain.. Ok, ab humme chalna hoga, take care Ratan, bye.. Ratan- Bye Diya... They both kept looking at each other, as if they didn't want this to happen)

In reality, Car doesn't stop and it goes out of kesar mahal. Ratan gets restless, and calls on diya's mobile but she doesn't take his calls and puts her mobile on silent mode as Sajjan Singh will get upset if she talks to Ratan now.. Ratan calls multiple times, but diya doesn't reply.. She knew what ratan would be going thru, as she didn't meet him before leaving kesar mahal.. And not replying to his calls, wud make Ratan even more upset and disturbed. So she decides to switch off her mobile so that Ratan stops trying to call her... Ratan was in tears.. His best fren had gone... He was feeling so incomplete.. Yash banaa comes and tries to console him, but in vain... Ratan keeps asking Yash that how can diya leave without meeting him... Is this the end of their frenship as well? Yash had no answer to this question. He somehow manages to bring Ratan back to his room.. But Ratan is very very upset and is no mood to calm down..

Ratan- Yash banaa, galti meri hai, main hi yahin nahin thaa, jab diya yahan se jaa rahi thi. Ho sakta hai, ki unhone meri wait ki ho, aur main unse milne nahin aa paya? Yash- nahin kaakusaa, isme aapki koi galti nahin hai, aapko zaroori kaam aa gaya tha, bas isliye.. Ratan- nahin yash banaa, saari ki saari galti meri hi hai, Main diya ka khyaal theek se nahin rakh payaa.. Main agar unki zindagi nahin aaya hota, to woh aaj bahut khush hoti... 12 saal pahle, main aur papasaa hukum unse nahin mile hote to, unhe meri pehredaari ke wachan mein nahin bandhna padta.. Aur ab 12 saal ke baad, maine hi, unse bina puche, abhaysa se unka rishta pakka karwa diya.. Theek se abhaysaa ke baare mein, unke gande iraado ke baare mein pata kiye bina... Meri wajah se unki shaadi mein itna bada hungama hua, abhaysa ne Diya ke character par ungali uthaayi, sirf meri wajah se.. Aur fir, diya se unki marzee puche bina, maine un haalaton main unse zabardasti shaadi kar li.. Maine, unka zindagi bhar saath dena ka waada kiya... Aur ab jab woh mujhse itna pyaar karne lagi, to maine kya kiya? Unka dil tod diya... Main bahut bura hun, yash banaa.. Mujh jaisa insaan, diya ka husband hona to dur, unki zindagi mein hona bhi deserve nahin karta... He is so angry at himself right now.. and Yash is not able to console him..

Yash - kaakusaa, aap plz shaant ho jaaiye..dekhiye aise khud par gussa mat kariye.. Aap ki koi galti nahin hai, inn sab main... plz apne aap ko sabhaaliye... Agar diya baisaa yaha hoti to, aapko achche se daant-ti, iss waqt...woh aapko bahut strong insaan maanti hain, aap ab aise kamzor pad jayenge to kaisa lagega unhe..? aapko iss waqt himmat se kaam lena hoga.. Aur aap bhi jaante hain, yeh to honaa hi tha, aaj nahin to kal... Ratan- haan yash banaa main jaanta hun, yeh honaa tha.. Par pata mahin, kyu mujhe kyun itna bura lag raha hai. Mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hai ki Diya yahin honi chahiye, mere paas, mujhe kyun sab adhoora sa lag raha hai.. kyun azeeb si baichani ho rahi hai.. kyun yash banaa? Bataayiye.. Yash - kaakusaa, aap plz, ab inn sab baaton ke baare mein mat sochiye.. Aap plz aaram kariye... Hum aapke liye paani laate hain...Yash goes to kitchen, to get some water for Ratan. When he comes back, he is not able to find Ratan in the room.. Ratan had left. He took his car and drove out of kesar mahal.. Heading where? Even Ratan doesn't know..

Yash calls Diya and informs everything wat happened with Ratan after she left. Diya requests Yash to keep a check on ratan. Yash asks diya- Diya baisa, aap kaakusaa ke phone calls ka to zawaab dijiye, atleast aapse baat karke woh thoda shaant ho jayen.. Diya - nahin yash banaa, abhi humse nahin ho payega.. Hum Ratan se nahin baat kar payenge, iss waqt.. Aur waise bhi, agar hum unse baat nahin karenge, unse nahin milenge, to unke liye aasaan hoga humme bhulana.. Yash- Aur kya aap unhe bhula payengi? Diya- Nahin, kabhi nahin.. Chaliye yeh sab chodiye.. Aap kuch der baad, plz jaakar Ratan ko dhundhiye.. Pata nahin kahan gayen honge, Ratan.. plz unka khayal rakhiye.. Ab hum unki zimmedari aapke upar chod rahen hain.. Yash- Aap chinta mat kijiye.. Hum unkaa dhyaan rakenge.. Aur aapko unka update dete rahenge.. Par waada kijiye ki aap bhi apna khyaal rakengi...Diya- haan, yash banna, hum apna khyaal rakhenge..

Part 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=2

Part 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=3

Part 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=4

Part 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=7

Part 6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=8

Part 7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=10

Part 8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=12

Part 9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=14

Part 10 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=20

Part 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=23

Part 12 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35?pn=27

Part 13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rishta-likhenge-hum-naya/4977906/dira-ff-humaari-ajab-kahaani-all-parts-1-13-on-page-35 (last part)

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Okay firstly super welcome to the RLHN forum! 🤗
It feels so great to have another talented writer here! Wow.
You wrote really amazingly man, kudos. I was feeling every single emotion coming out from DiRa.
The way he ran towards her car, the way she suppressed her feelings infront of everyone. Ahh brilliant writing. Loved the confrontation between sajjan singh and kaki ma sa! Beautiful and powerful dialogues! 👏

Cannot wait to read the next update.
Can we know your name?
Welcome to the forum again and hope to see you on other topics and AT too!! 😃
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Hiii.. first of all, welcome to the forum.. 😊😊
Secondly, what an awesome ff! 👏👏 Thank you so much dear for this write up. Please post the next part soon.. Its soo hard to wait.. 😆

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Hello @arulya !!! Welcome to the forum😆
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Thank you everyone for such a positive response to my first ever write up...

And such a warm welcome... feeling really very happy...

Ur likes and positive comments are really very encouraging...

So I am ready with the next part... Hope u like it too... plz correct me if m going wrong anywhere..

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Part 2

Yash kept trying Ratan's number for long time, but none of his calls were answered by Ratan.. Later Diya calls Yash to know whereabouts of Ratan. Diya- Yash banaa, kaise hain Ratan? Woh mile aapko? Batayiye na? Woh theek hain na? Yash- Diya baisaa, humne unko bahut calls kiye, par woh ek bhi call ka zawaab nahin de rahe.. Pata nahin kahan gayen hain..? I m sorry Diya baisaa.. Par aap chinta mat kariye.. Hum jald hi unhe dhundh lenge.. Humme thoda waqt dijiye... Unka pata chalte hi, hum aapko phone karte hain.. Diya- Yash banaa, kya aapne hotel ke presidential suite mein check kiya? Yash- nahin, Diya baisaa.. par, wahan? Diya- haan, Yash banna, plz jaaiye aur wahan check kijiye.. Aur wahan pahunch kar humme call kariye..

Yash leaves for hotel and is surprised to find Ratan in presidential suite, sleeping on the couch (in this room, Ratan had spent many memorable moments with Diya earlier). Yash calls hotel manager and enquires - when did Ratan come there and if he had eaten anything. Manager- Datahukum to kaafe time se yahan hain. Jab humne unse pucha ki, aapke liye kuch khaane ke liye le aaye kya, to unhone humme bahut buri tarah daant diya ,aur kaha ki agar maine unhe dobara kuch pucha, ya disturb kiya, to woh humme job se nikaal denge.. Yash calls Diya- Diya baisaa, aap bilkul sahi kah rahi thee.. Kaakusaa, yahan hotel ke suite room mein hain... Hum inhe ghar le jayenge.. Aap ab chinta mat kijiye.. Diya- ok Yash banaa.. plz take care of him, woh kabhi kabhi gusse mein, apne aapko hi takleef de dete hain, plz unka khyaal rakiye.. Yash- diya baisaa, aap dono, ek dusre ko itni achchi tarah se jaante hain, samajhte hain, aur aap Kaakusaa ko intna pyaar bhi karti hain.. Mujhe samajh nahin aata ki aap dono ka rishta aise kaise tut saktaa hai.. Kaakusaa, aapki kitni care karte hain, aapki har ek baat se unko kitna farak padta hai, aapse jaate hue baat nahin ho payi, to dekhiye kya haalat kar li hai, unhone apni.. Kuch khaya peeya bhi nahin hai tab se.. Pata nahin par, hume lagta hai ki Kaakusaa bhi aapse bahut pyar karte hai... Bas unhe iss baat ka ehsaas nahin hai..

Diya- nahin Yash banaa..Hum Ratan ki best fren hain, sirf isliye woh upset hain.. Ratan ke liye yeh sab pyaar nahin hai, sirf dosti hai. Unke liye to pyaar ki definition hi alag hai, aur humme nahin lagta ki humara yeh rishta uss definition main kahin bhi fit hota hai.. Chaliye chodiye, inn sab baton ko.. Aap ratan ko ghar le jayiye... Yash brings Ratan back home and helps him lie down on his bed. Ratan is still feeling dizzy and goes back to sleep again..

Its morning now and Ratan is sleeping in his bedroom. Bright sunlight coming thru the window, is disturbing him.. Ratan (with his eyes still shut)- Diya, plz curtain close kar dijiye, mujhe disturbance ho rahi hai..Ratan doesn't get any response.. he says it again- Diya, aap kahan hai, plz curtain theek kar dijiye.. Still no response.. Diya? Diya? Aap kahan hai...? He gets up saying that.. He looks around and doesn't find diya. He recollects what had happened yesterday and feels sad thinking abt Diya.. Now, He will not see Diya anymore in this room.. He looks at the dressing table and goes near it.. Diya's accessories are still there, as she had hardly taken anything back with her.. He recollects how she would be sitting in front of that dressing table while getting ready.. How sindoor had fallen unknowlingly, in her hairline two times, while he was combing his hair.. How he had helped her in making those fake rashes on her neck, with artificial color. He looks at all the things belongings of Diya and picks up one hairpin. He smiles thinking about their wedding night, when those hairpins had poked him badly, on his butts.. He then turns around and sees his neat room.. This reminds him of how sometimes Diya used to make this room so messy (like, when she was searching for her recipe book and while she was trying to irritate Ratan when he claimed that mujhe to gussa aata hi nahin).. Ratan smiles remembering those funny moments spent with Diya, but the very next moment , reality strikes him, he is sad again thinking that he will not have these moments again in his life.. He thinks of calling Diya and picks up his mobile..

Diya (in her house now) had been thinking about Ratan, the whole night.. She thinks - people say whatever happens, happens for the best.. May be, Ratan and I were not destined to be together, may be its god's wish... Ratan is young. This marriage had put unnecessary burden and responsibility on his shoulder.. This wasn't right time for Ratan to get married.. He himself would have never chosen me as his life partner, if given the choice.. He will choose some younger, hot and happening girl as his wife, not an old fashioned, boring person like me.. I think it's better that I have left kesar mahal, now Ratan will get some space, he can enjoy his life, live happily, and most importantly choose a suitable, age appropriate, beautiful life partner for himself.

Suddenly her mobile phone rings and its brings her out of her thoughts..She picks up her mobile. It was ratan's call. Yesterday she didn't take any of his calls, but this time, Diya gathers little courage in her heart and answers ratan's call. Ratan- hello, Diya, Diya? He sounded desparate to talk to her. Diya- Ratan, haan.. hum sun rahen hain... kaise.. kaise hain aap? Ratan- Diya, mujhe chodiye.. Aap kaisi hain? Aap theek to hain na? Aap mujhse gussa hain kya? Sach bataiye... I know, u r very angry with me... u should be.. I m such an idiot.. But trust me Diya, maine kuch bhi jaanbujhkar nahin kiya hai..Diya plz.. plz forgive me.. Diya- Ratan, stop.. Yeh aap kya kah rahen hain? Aap kis cheez ki maafi maang rahen hain humse? Ratan- Jab aap kesar mahal se jaa rahi thi, to main yahan nahin tha... aapko theek se ek baar mil bhi nahin paya.. Aapko bahut bura laga hoga, I know.. But trust me, hotel mein ek zaroori kaam aa gaya tha, bas isiliye mujhe jaana pada... Aur main jab wapis aaya to, aap aur kaakusaa dono ja chuke the.. Aapne fir mere calls bhi answer nahin kiye.. Ek baar bhi mujhse baat nahin ki... I know I have always disappointed u, but Diya u know, I never intend to hurt u, u are my best fren..Par, pata nahin, main aisi galti kyun baar baar karta rahta hun.. Diya plz mujhe maaf kar dijiye...

Diya- Ratan.. hold on... Relax.. plz relax... Mujhe aapki kisi bhi baat ka koi bura nahin laga, Ratan. I know u had some important work in hotel related to ur project files and u had to go, its ok.. (Diya herself had asked Yash to take Ratan to hotel)

Ratan- how do u know that I had to go for some urgent work, related to my project files..? Diya (ghabraayi hui, as if she is caught by Ratan)- haan, woh Yash banaa se baat hui thi hamaari, unhone hi bataya... Ratan- oh okay.. Par aap sach mein mujhse gussa nahin hain, na? Diya- nahin Ratan, bilkul nahin... Ratan is now little relaxed and he asks- Diya, kya aap, aaj mujhse mil sakti hain?

Diya had somehow gathered little courage to speak to Ratan over phone, but she still needed some more time to recover fully from this emotional low point of her life and to face Ratan again, so she refuses- nahin Ratan, hum nahin mil sakte... Ratan- kyun, Diya? R u still angry with me? Aap meri best fren hai, aur aap mujhse kyun nahin mil sakti.. Diya- Ratan.. aap samjhne ki koshish kijiye.. hum aapse aise nahin mil sakte.. Ratan- par kyun.. we are still frens, right? Diya- Ratan, hum aur aap, sirf dosti ke rishte main hi nahin, shaadi ke rishte mein bhi bandhe hue the.. Hum jaante hain, hum dono, shaadi ke rishte ko bhi, humaari dosti ke sahaare nibha rahe they.. par humari shaadi ki sachayi jaanane ke baad, humare papasaa bahut dukhi hain.. woh abhi aapse bhi bahut gussa hain, humme kuch dino ka time dijiye, Ratan, hum unhe samjha denge aur fir aapse milenge... Par abhi, woh mujhe aapse milne ki izaazat bilkul bhi nahin denge...plz try to understand.

Ratan- but Diya, I want to meet u, see u... aap humari dosti ke liye mujhse milne nahin aa sakti? Diya- plz ratan, forgive me.. I can't... yeh sab chodiye, aap bataiye.. aapne khana khaya? Ratan- nahin, aur main khaaunga bhi nahin, jab tak aap mujhse milne ke liye haan nahin kar deti... Diya- plz Ratan.. aap aise zid mat kariye...Aapko humaari kasam.. hum iske baare main aur kuch nahin sunna chahte... Ratan- par Diya...! Diya - Ratan, hume promise kijiye ki aap apna khyaal rakhenge, aur time se apna khana kha lenge.. Ratan- diya, aap bhi nahin.. aapko pata hai, main aapko kabhi bhi naa nahin kar sakta.. Ok I promise, I will take care of myself.. Diya- theek hain, ratan, shayad papasaa aa rahen hain, hum phone rakhte hain.. good bye.. Ratan- par, diya.. diya...! Call gets disconnected... Ratan wanted to talk more ... Diya had disconnected the call intentionally, as she thinks that she should now stay away from Ratan's life and let him head towards a happy, carefree life where Diya doesn't exist...

But Ratan was desperate to meet her (he himself didn't know why, he was restless with some strange feeling within his heart). Ratan thinks- agar Diya ziddi hai, to main bhi mahaziddi hun, unse to main mil kar hi rahungaa..He knew what he had to do to meet her..

He freshens up and gets ready.. He starts heading towards hotel.. Suddenly, Ratan remembers the promise he made to Diya, that he will take care of his health.. He finishes his breakfast hurriedly and then leaves for hotel...

Ratan calls Yash to hotel and informs him about his plan of action.. Yash is little reluctant to help him, as Yash will have to lie to Diya for execution of this plan. But Ratan keeps pestering him.. Finally Yash agrees and Ratan is super happy (Yash thinks - Diya baaisaa aur kaakusaa ke plans ne, humme, ek ex-police officer ko, achcha khaasa jhoota insaan banaa diya. Pehle Diya baisaa ne humse jhoot bulwaaya, kaakusaa ko unse dur le jaane ke liye, aur ab kaakusaa humse jhoot bulwaa rahen hai, diya baisaa ko paas bulaane ke liye. Pata nahin aage hume aur kitne jhoot bolne hain.. hey bhagwaanji, plz inn dono ke dilon ki confusions ko clear karo, aur hume iss jhoot bolne ke paap se bachao)

Plan execution: First, hotel manager calls Diya.. She picks up the call.. Manager tells her that there is some gross mistake in data of funds, which have been spent till now, on their upcoming Project (Vivaah Ek Atoot Rishta). Diya was heading the finance and funds department.. While manager is still talking to her, Yash takes the phone in his hand and tells her that, whatever manager is saying is correct only.. Yash- Diya baisaa, hume lagta hai, aapko yahan aana padega... saari details to aapko hi pata hai... Sorry, issue thoda serious hai, isliye aapko aane ke liye kah rahen hai.. plz diya baisaa, aap yahan aa jayiye aur sab check kar lijiye...

Diya- par Yash banaa. Ab tak jitney bhi funds kharch hua hain, uski sab details note ki hui hain.. humne humare assistant ko bhi kaha tha ki, details dhyaan se check kar le, aur uski ek copy humme email bhi kar de.. Yash (now sacred, thinking that diya will be having a copy of all the details in her email and she will clear all the doubts from home itself and will not come to kesar mahal)- Aap..? aapke paas sab details already hai, email mein?? Ratan is also scared as Diya is quite smart in all these matters...

Diya- actually, humare assistant ne abhi tak humme woh email hume bheja nahin hai.. so I don't hav the details right now, but u can take help from my assistant, she will clear all ur doubts... Yash - nahin diya baisaa, aap ko hi aana padega.. aapki assistant to 4 dino ki chutti par chali gayi hai (yash was feeling little bad for telling jhooth ke upar jhooth, but he really wanted to help Ratan meet Diya). Diya- kyaa? Usne humme bataya bhi nahin, chutti par jaane se pahle..

Yash- wahi to, Diya baisaa.. Hum usko achche se daant denge, baad mein, par abhi aap yahan aa jaaiye. Diya- Par main kaise aa sakti hun, yash banaa... papasaa ko achcha nahin lagega... Yash- agar aap chahti hain to, kya hum unse baat karen? Diya- nahin nahin. Uski zaroorat nahin hai.. I think, hum unko samjhaa lenge, woh samajh jayenge, waise bhi yeh bahut important project hai (for ratan, she says in her mind)... theek hai hum aate hain... (Yash signals a thump-up to Ratan, who is standing near him and is now on cloud 9) Aap manager ko kah dijiye ki woh sab files aur necessary data, nikaal kar rakh le, hum sirf thodi der ke liye hi aa payenge, aur jaldi se chale jayenge...

Yash- theek hai Diya baisaa, hum aapka zyaada time nahin lenge.. hum car bhijwa dete hai, aapko pick up karne ke liye.. Diya- nahin, iski koi zaroorat nahin hai... Yash- plz Diya baisaa, I insist.. Dost ki baat nahin maanegi aap? Diya- okay, yash banaa...She cudnt say no..

Yash disconnects the call.. Ratan starts jumping in joy, joy to meet his best fren (who is also the most important person of his life) AGAIN...

(to be continued)


Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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This story is getting amazing update by update! 😳
Wow man, really liked the scene where ratan was remembering diya in his room, all those moments came flashing, very well written. I like it. 👍🏼
I hope he realizes why he is missing her!
Poor diya is in a sad situation, her feelings were rightly expressed by you.
Yash is such a darling friend. Always there for DiRa!
Great update man 👏
Eagerly waiting to read the next part! 😃
Edited by surbhimathur - 7 years ago

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