DIRA (FF)- HUMAARI AJAB KAHAANI- All parts (1-13) on Page 35 - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such a fasntastic update arulya! 👏
You deserve all the appreciation and love for this FF man, its so well written ❤️
The way you write DiRa's monologues, its absolutely wonderful! One can feel it right through.
The way you described their meeting and diya's weird feeling whenever ratan is around and close...thats charismatic!
Ratan's helplessness to confess could be felt, the way he held her hand and wanted to talk, I was like awww! Cutie :*
You have explained everything here in such a detail, its easier to relate.
And the main thing, I am loving the plot! 😳 Superb story!
Keep writing and I am eagerly waiting for the next part man! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww Arulya... This was sooo beautiful! My God.. the way you describe both their emotions...their desire to be with one another... its just mind blowing!👏👏 Each and every scene was soo well written.. ⭐️👏
Majoo agiyooo... 😆😆
Please update soon buddy.. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fabulous update
Beautifully written
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Such a fasntastic update arulya! 👏
You deserve all the appreciation and love for this FF man, its so well written ❤️
The way you write DiRa's monologues, its absolutely wonderful! One can feel it right through.
The way you described their meeting and diya's weird feeling whenever ratan is around and close...thats charismatic!
Ratan's helplessness to confess could be felt, the way he held her hand and wanted to talk, I was like awww! Cutie :*
You have explained everything here in such a detail, its easier to relate.
And the main thing, I am loving the plot! 😳 Superb story!
Keep writing and I am eagerly waiting for the next part man! 😃


Thanks surbhi... Loved ur positive comments, like always
Will post next update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Fabulous update

Beautifully written
Love it
Continue soon


Thanks dear, for liking the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awww Arulya... This was sooo beautiful! My God.. the way you describe both their emotions...their desire to be with one another... its just mind blowing!👏👏 Each and every scene was soo well written.. ⭐️👏

Majoo agiyooo... 😆😆
Please update soon buddy.. 😳


Thank you so much... positive comments from u are really encouraging... I just love ur "Majoo agiyooo"..
Hope u like the next update too..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb...superb update arulya.👏🤗
Very well written and its more like watching the serial than reading. 👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Superb...superb update arulya.👏🤗

Very well written and its more like watching the serial than reading. 👏


Thanks... Happy that u liked it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 6

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Ratan holds Diya's hand and asks her - Diya, chalen?Diya tightens the grip on his hand and proudly says- hum taiyaar hain, Ratan.. Ratan- Diya, isse pahle ki hum chalen, mujhe aapse ek waada chahiye.. Diya- kaisa waada? Ratan- yeh waada ki- Aaj, mere saath biyaaye har pal mein, aap, khud ko, har ek bandhan se azaad kar dengi.. Har uss soch se, har uss dar se, jo aaj tak aapko iss rishtey ki manzoori nahin deta tha.. Aaj aap sirf apne mann ki sunegi.. Main aap par koi dabaav nai dalna chahtaa, par chahta hun ki, Aap aaj sirf aur sirf diya ki tarah mere saath chale.. Na to ek pahredaar ki tarah, na hi ek thakraani ki tarah, aur na hi Kaakusaa ki beti ki tarah.. I want u to be just DIYA... Kya mere liye, aap yeh kar sakti hain? Diya's heart started melting hearing this request from Ratan and she just cudnt refuse to this - Hum waada karte hain Ratan.. Aaj, aapke saath bitaaye her pal mein, sirf DIYA aapke saath hongi...

Ratan is happy to get this assurance from her, as he wanted her to express her thoughts and feelings wholeheartedly, without any reserve.. Ratan helps her get down from balcony and escape from villa.. Ratan's car is parked outside the villa.. He opens the car's door and says- Aaiye, Diya.. Baithiye, chalte hain.. While Diya is getting seated on the front seat, she cudnt stop herself from asking Ratan again - par hum jaa kahan rahen hain, Ratan.. bataaiye naa? Ratan- Kaha tha naa, surprise hai.. Surprise ka matlab nai jaanti aap.. ? Diya- Jaante hain, par? Ratan- Par-war kuch nai.. Chup chaap baithiye bas ab aap.. Diya sits quietly.. Now she knew Ratan is not gonna disclose any details to her.. She is excited as well as nervous, at the same moment.. Diya is able to feel butterflies in her stomach.. Ratan is actually enjoying seeing diya so impatient.. Diya-aapko bahut mazaa aa raha hai na, hume yuh sataa kar..? Ratan- Sach batau to, haan.. Mazaa to bahut aa raha hai.. par yeh expect mat kariyega ki main aapko kuch bataunga.. Diya makes an angry face and says- huunh..! Humne aapse kuch puchna bhi nai hai.. and she turns her head towards the window...

They reach airport.. Diya again cudnt resist and tries asking again- Ratan, airport? Yahan kis liye? Aap hume bhaga kar kahan le jaa rahen hain? Ratan- Aap kitne questions puchti hain.. Same question ki different tarike se puchegi, to kya main aapko jawaab de dunga.. Nahin..! To puchna band kariye.. aur chup chaap mere saath chaliye..A private plane was waiting for them and they left for a place, Diya wasn't aware of..

After the jet plane lands, Ratan blindfolds Diya so that she doesn't get to know where they really are.. Before Diya cud ask anything more- Ratan instructs her- Nahin.. kuch nahin puchengi aap.. bas kuch der aur.. Diya didn't say one more word and the curiosity kept building up in her heart, in her mind.. But she believed her Ratan that whatever it will be, it will be just GREAT.. Ratan knows her very well, he knows how to brighten up her mood, how to make her feel comfortable, how to make her feel special, VERY SPECIAL..

They reach their destination, Diya is still blind folded.. Ratan takes her to that special place.. And then, finally he asks her to open her eyes... Ratan is standing next to her...

It was a beautifully decorated area.. Lovely flowers... Addictive, sweet fragrance in the air.. Angel lights all around.. Whole place is sparkling.. Diya turns around to get a complete view of that lovely place.. Then, suddenly she just stops.. She cudnt believe her eyes.. It was the same hotel in Goa where they had come for their so-called honeymoon.. It was the same poolside area, where Ratan had told Diya earlier- Nahin nibha sakta main iss shaadi ko.. Iss rishte ko.. iss shaadi se mujhe ghutan hoti hai.. Main nahin sambhal sakta iss rishte ki zimmedariyon ko... Hume yeh rishta, yeh shaadi, yahin todni hogi... All those moment came flashing back in diya's eyes.. She cud feel the same pain again in her heart.. She closes her eyes, but she cudnt stop her tears from shedding.. It was like she was reliving those hurtful moments again.. Her heart was feeling so heavy. Ratan was standing there quietly besides her, he knew wat is going on in her mind, in her heart... Then Ratan comes closer to her and holds her hand... Ratan's affectionate touch brings Diya back to reality.. She opens her eyes.. Ratan looks into those teary, yet the most beautiful eyes.. He cud see agony of her heart, thru her eyes..

But before he says anything, he wanted to comfort her.. He lifts her other hand too and hold them together.. He plants a soft tender kiss on her hands... Diya badly needed this, right now.. But she is so overpowered by her heartache that the very next moment, she starts crying inconsolably, like a child... Ratan knew what major emotional setback she was going thru, at this very moment. But he had to do this, to get this pain out of her heart, to make her forget this agony, this grief.. Yes, this was needed to make this, a a very happy and memorable night for her..

She was vulnerable now, Ratan cud sense this.. He then hugs her.. His tight squeeze was easily noticeable to Diya. And it was actually soothing her aching heart, she found solace in his tight arms... Ratan gently moves his one hand over her head, slowly stroking her hair.. She was calming down with this slow comforting caress.. Till now, both of them, hadn't spoken a single word.. But their emotions spoke everything, in this stillness of night... Slowly, they break the hug but Ratan is still holding diya.. Ratan slowly bring his face closer to hers, their foreheads are touching. They look into each other's eyes..

Ratan says- I am sorry Diya.. Main jaanta hun.. Yahan fir se aake, aapko bahut dukh hua hai... Woh sab baatein jo shayad aap kabhi dobara yaad nai karna chahti hongi, maine unn sab yaadon ko dobara zinda kar diya.. Main jaanta hun, yeh wahi jagah hai- jahan maine aapni zindgai ka sabse galat faisla liya tha... Apni life ki sabse badi khushi ko khud thukraya tha.. Khud aapko meri zindagi se alag karne ka decision liya tha.. Par ab yahin, main apni life sabse khubsoorat faisla bhi lena chata hun..

Ratan- Diya, mujhe ehsaas hai ki, uss waqt maine kya kho diya tha... Diya, main tab jaanta nai tha, ki aap mere liye kya hain.. Main nai jaanta tha ki, aap to meri zindgai hain, aur aap se alag hokar to main jee hi nai sakta... Main nai jaanta tha ki pyaar kya hota hai... Nai jaanta tha ki, jab iss pyar ka ehsaas hoga to, aap mujhse dur ho chuki hongi... Diya was speechless, hearing his confession..

Ratan- Shayad log theek kahte hain ki- sache pyaar ki ahmeeyat aapko, apne pyaar se dur hokar hi pata chalti hai... Aur dekhiye, na.. Aapse sirf kuch din dur rah kar, meri kya haalat ho gayi hai.. Aapko apne paas nahin dekh pane se, dil me jo dard hua, main byaan bhi nai kar sakta.. Aapko apne aas paas nai paya, to itna baichain ho jata hun.. Diya, aap meri khushi hain.. Aap hi meri hasi hain.. Aap saath hain to, har jagah khoobsurat lagti hai, aur aap nahin hain to, har khoobsurat jagah bhi bejaan lagti hai...

Ratan- Jaanti hain, aapko hasta dekhta hun to, lagta hai ki, bas aur kuch nai chahiye.. Aap ko dukhi dekhta hun to lagta hai ki shayad sab kuch kho diya.. Diya, aap ke alawaa meri zindagi mein na to koi aur aaya tha, na hi aage koi aayega.. yeh dil, yeh zindagi, ab sirf aur sirf aapki hai.. Now I belong to you. I know, this love has made me crazy, but I can't help it.. You are on my mind and heart all the time. I just want to be with you always.. I want to love u till the end of my life.. Diya cud see his love for her in his eyes, as well as his helplessness in love... She cud feel that Ratan means each and everything he is confessing to her..

Ratan- main jaanta hun, main perfect nai hun..par aapke liye main puri koshish karunga ki.. Diya interrupts shsshsh... She cups his face in her hands and makes him meet her gaze. She says- Ratan, aap perfect hai.. Humare like aap bilkul perfect hain.. Humaari nazron mein, aap se behtar aur koi insaan nahin.. Ratan, humne soch samajh kar aapse pyar nai kiya.. Pata nahin, kab? Bas pyar ho gaya.. Aur aap jaise hai, hume waise hi bahut pasand hai.. Hum aapko, humaare liye, change karne ke liye kabhi nahin kahenge.. Na, hum yeh chahenge ki, aap zara bhi badle.. I love the way u are.. I love the way u have always made me feel special.. For me, u are so special.. And Ratan wat all u did and just said to me tonight- For me, it is very special, so precious.. I cudnt have asked for more..

Ratan- Diya, main ek baar aapko kho chuka hun, ab dobara aapko khone ki himmat nahin hai mujhme.. Main tut jaaunga.. Kah dijiye ki, aap hamesha mere saath rahengi.. Kabhi mujhse alag nahin hongi, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye... Aap kabhi mera saath nahin chodengi.. Aap hamesha mujhe... Diya- Main hamesha aap se behad pyar karungi...

This was all Ratan wanted to hear.. He feels so so happy and says.. Diya , Diya Diya... I love you.. I love u so so much... He is on cloud nine... He hugs her with such a force and so much passion, that they both fall down... They both start laughing...

But next moment they realized that his body was on hers.. His embrace was strong and Diya was buried in his arms.. Ratan's scent was now exciting diya.. Similar was the effect of diya's fragrance on Ratan.. Ratan cud feel tingling sensation as Diya's breast touched his strong chest.. Diya too was feeling shivers up and down her spine... Their lips were so close that they cud feel their warm breaths.. Their heart rates were rising to extreme levels.. This physical intimacy just created a high voltage current that had rammed up their inner cores.. Heat of their bodies was just kicking their hormonal levels to overdrive and the satisfaction of this physical intimacy was indescribable.. Truly speaking, this was their first true, intimate moment (after love confession) with such closeness, so much warmth and love. This experience was surreal. Both of them were vulnerable at this moment. But, Ratan knew his limits.. however, that warm and soft touch of Diya's body on his, was too irresistible, and he had to try really hard to control his impulses.. Diya too wanted to give their love its own time, to flourish...

Somehow, Ratan is able to lift himself up... He offers his hand to Diya, to help her get up.. Both of them feel little embarrassed with all the weird magic, that hug (their first official love hug) had created within themselves.. Ratan trying to make the situation lighter, says- Diya, waise to aap hi hamesha mujh par girti rahti hain, aaj chalo meri bhi baari aa gayi.. Diya laughs and says- waise , aap bhi kam bhaari nai hain, Ratan.. Ratan holds her hand again and pulls her close to him - Achcha, kitna bhaari hun? Aapko takleef hui? Diya- woh, hum to bas yun hi... She is feeling embarrassed as well as shy. Ratan is now in mood to tease her.. Diya tries to jerk away but Ratan is not letting her go.. He actually tightens his grip even more.. Ratan brings her closer, locking his eyes with hers.. And now, his eyes wanted answers from Diya- Bataaiye na Diya, aap ko takleef hui, yun aise.. Jab main aapke upar... He steps even closer that there is no gap between them..

Diya is losing control over herself and her breathing is much faster now - nahin, nahin.. mera woh matlab nai tha.. Ratan- to kya matlab tha? Huunh? His breath is mingling with hers.. Diya feels her heart is gonna beat its way out of her chest, any moment now - jab aap hum par, yun... yun... She is falling short of words.. She doesnt know wat to say, how to tell wat she felt like with him on her.. Her eyes are now downcast due to shyness and cudnt dare look up into Ratan's eyes. Ratan just breaks into loud laughter... diya, Relax.. Main mazaak kar raha tha... Rahne dijiye... Mujhe sab pata chal gaya, aapke bina bole hi... Waise ek baat kahun... Diya, now trying to recover from this emotional torture of Ratan- haan, kahiye.. Ratan- maine bhi wahi sab feel kiya, jo aapne kiya... He winks...

Ratan is now holding diya's hands.. He is feeling so relaxed, so happy tonite, after confession of his love for Diya and after she has finally accepted his love.. Diya too is feeling so relieved right now.. She is feeling free of all the mental burden, of holding back her feelings for Ratan.. She is now with her love.. Ratan moves his arms around her and gives Diya a lovely, warm side-hug.. She is loving this caress by Ratan.. She rests her head over his shoulder.. Ratan asks- diya, aap mujhe kabhi chod kar to nai jayengi na.. Diya- kabhi nai, Ratan... Hum aapke bina nai jee payenge.. Aap to humari saanse hain.. aur uske bina hum to mar hi jayenge.. Ratan suddenly puts his hand over mouth and says- Aisa dobara kahne ka sochiyega bhi nai... Hume saath mein bahut saare khubsoorat pal bitaane hain.. Aapko bahut, bahut saalon tak mere saath chalna hai.. Mera saath denna hai.. Aap, meri strength ho, meri lifeline ho.. Sirf aap hi hain jo, mujhe sambhaalna jaanti hain... Aapke bina, Ratan kuch bhi nai...Diya is flattered by this.. Any girl would actually, when her lover says this..

It was their moment of happiness and contentment and they were enjoying this together. They felt at peace.. They were not in hurry.. After spending some quality time together, they decided to leave for Mumbai, as it was quite late now.. They flew back in the private plane and soon reached Mumbai back.. Sun wud rise soon, anytime now.. Ratan drove Diya back to her villa..

Car stops.. They have to separate now.. Diya holds Ratan's hand and looks into his eyes.. They cud see immense love and passion in each other's eyes.. She says- Ratan, aaj, aapne yeh jo humare liye kiya hai, hum kabhi nahin bhula payenge.. Goa ke uss hotel mein bitaaye pal, pehle hume sirf dard diya karte they.. Par, aaj aapne ussi jagah ko humare liye sabse yaadgaar jagah bana diya.. Thank you Ratan.. Aap ke saath bitaaya har ek pal, humare liye bahut hi special hai.. Ratan- Diya, main aapke ke saath aise aur bahut saare pal bitaana chahta hun.. Aapko apne saath mahsoos karna chahta hun.. But Diya knew, its time, she has to go.. None of them want to this moment to end and Ratan isn't willing to let Diya go.. She cud feel this as Ratan's grip on her hand becomes even stronger... She cups his face with her other hand.. Ratan, ab hume jaana hoga...

Ratan- Humm.. He is feeling helpless now and is not able to say a word now. He looks down.. Diya-Ratan, humari taraf dekhiye.. Hum aapse jyada dur nai jaa rahen hain, yahin to hain, Bagal waale villa mein.. Shaam ko milege hum aapse.. Ratan- shaam ko? Diya, mujhse ek second bhi aapse dur nai raha ja raha, aap shaam tak ki baat kar rahi hain.. nai , main aapko kahin nai jaane de raha hun.. Diya- Ratan, plz try to understand.. Masaa ko pata chal jayega.. Ratan- To main, andar aakar unhe sab bata deta hun na, waise bhi ab unse kya chupaana. Diya- nai Ratan, yeh sahi waqt nai hai.. Hume sabse pahle papasaa se baat karni chahiye.. Papasaa, abhi yahan nai hain, Surajgadh jaake, hum unhe aapne baare mein sab bata denge.. Abhi, papasaa ki absence mein, baaki ghar waalon ko, esp masaa ko, hamare rishtey ke baare mein reveal karna, theek nai hoga.. plz samajh jaaiye na.. Ratan- humm, I understand..

Diya- to hum chalen? Ratan- theek hai, Diya.. aap jaiye.. Diya- ok bye.. They share a sweet hug.. She opens car's door.. Now, Ratan is not looking towards her, as he is visible very upset now, for letting her go.. Diya is also not able leave, seeing Ratan so sad.. She holds Ratan's face by her one hand and just plants a soft kiss on his cheek and comes out of the car...

What? What was that... ? Ratan's heart starts pounding wildly in his chest, this feeling was erotic.. Soft tender touch of diya's juicy lips created some electric current in his body and brightened his mood and face... Ratan suddenly comes out of his car and calls Diya (she had already reached the gates of villa)- Diya? Yeh kya tha? (pointing his one finger to his cheek, where her lipstick marks were visible). Diya (laughing)- Aapka mood theek karne ka tareeka.. Ratan- Diya, mera mood abhi bhi bahut kharab hai.. Thoda aur theek kar dijiye, plz.. Diya- Agli mulkaaat mein.. She smiles and goes inside the villa. But Ratan wanted it again... He thinks- agli mulakaat, huunh.. Theek hai, Diya.. Agli mulakaat mein, I promise, aap mujhse nahin bach payengi..

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To be continued.

Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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Wow, awesomely written such a lovey-dovey update.👏❤️
Edited by -Nags- - 7 years ago

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