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Part 7

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Diya enters the villa.. She was visible so happy right now, after spending those beautiful moments with the Ratan.. It was the best night she had experienced till now.. She was with the love of her life.. Yes, it was indeed a memorable night for her, and for Ratan as well.. She is still able to feel his scent around her.. And she had just kissed Ratan, few seconds back and she can't stop blushing, thinking about that.. She is still experiencing that pleasant feeling, when her lips kissed his cheek... A lot has changed today for her, and it is visible on her face.. She, along with Ratan, had taken their relationship, a step forward... And this feeling is heavenly for her.. She has never been so happier, never been so much in love, till now.. And she is also glad, as Ratan didn't show signs to rush..

She enters the main hall of villa, where Massa sees her.. Masaa is able to notice the difference on her face, it looked radiant.. Diya is looking so happy and content today. Masaa is happy to see such a good change in her daughter.. She asks- Diya baisaa, aap, itni subah subah, bahar se kaise aa rahi hain? Diya (trying to think of an excuse)- Masaa, woh... Woh, humaari balcony se, baahar ka itna achcha nazaara dikh raha tha, to socha khud baahar jaa ke mausam ka mazaa le, thodi sair bhi ho jayegi... Bas isliye, baahar gaye they... Masaa- oh achcha kiya.. lagta hai, kafi achcha mausam hai aaj.. aapke chahre ki khushi bata rahi hai.. Diya haan, Masaa.. Aaj ke mausam ki baat hi kuch aur hai..(thinking abt the unforgettable time spent with Ratan)

Masaa- Idhar aaiye, Diya.. She holds diya's face with her one hand and says- Pata hai, jab se aap kesar mahal chod kar aayi hain, tab se humne aapko sirf dukhi hi dekha.. Aaj itne dino baad, aapko yun khush dekh kar, humara mann halka ho gaya.. Chalo achcha hua, hum aapko Mumbai le aaye.. Diya- Haan, Masaa.. Hum yahan aakar bahut khush hain.. Masaa- Hum aapko, hamesha yun khush hi dekhna chante hain, Diya.. Masaa kisses diya's forehead and blesses her- Kalkaa maa, aapki khushi yunhi banaye rakhe..

Diya goes to her room, where Esha has been waiting for her.. Esha- kahiye diya baisaa.. kaisa raha? Diya- kya kaisa raha? Esha- chaliye baniye mat.. Hume jaldi se sab bata dijiye, nai to hum.. Diya- nai to hum, kya? Esha- datahukum se puch lenge.. Diya woh aapko kuch nai batayenge..

Esha- achcha ji, to hum masaa ko bata denge, ki aap kal kahan thi.. Diya- Nai nai, jijisaa... Hum bataaten hain.. She tells Esha how Ratan had planned everything for her, how he made her last night so memorable.. Esha is happy to know that finally, they have confessed their love for each other.. Esha- Diya baisaa, hum aap dono ke liye bahut khush hain... hume achcha lag raha hai ki, hum aap dono ki kuch madat kar sakey.. Diya- Nai jijisaa.. Aapka saath nai hota to shaayad, se sab possible hi nai hota.. Thank you jijisaa, aap iss duniya ki best jijisaa hain.. Ayush jijusaa ko bhi hamara thank-u kah dijiyegaa.. Esha - haan haan, bol denge... Waise ek baat kahen, aap aaj bahut hi blush kar rahi hain.. Kuch aur bhi hua hai kya wahan? She pokes Diya.. Diya is embarrassed to hear this.. nai, jijisaa. Hona kya hai.. kuch khaas nai.. Esha- Hume to kuch khaas waale symptoms lag rahen hain.. Diya- Aisa kuch nai hai, jijisaa. Esha- Chaliye, koi baat nai.. aap to nai batayengi, hum khud pata kar lenge.. Diya- Aap bhi na jijisaa.. Esha- Diya baisaa, ab hume chalna hoga.. Aapke jijusaa, gusaa naa ho jaye humse.. Diya - theek hai.. After, Esha leaves, Diya gets lost in her thoughts again, thinking about last night..

Meanwhile, after that unexpected kiss by diya on his cheek, Ratan is completely lost in that moment.. That spike in his hormones, caused by that kiss, takes long time to settle down.. But still that feeling of love and so much closeness, kept coming back in his mind, desiring for more, even after the initial surge had worn off.. He is struggling to slow down his thoughts, but he isn't able to get her, her kiss, her hug out of his head. Somehow he reaches back to his room, where he lies down flat on his bed (lost in Diya's thoughts, diya's love).. After some time, Ayush and Esha enter his room.. Ayush- gud morning datahukum, kahiye kaisi rahi? Ratan- hum.. Sach kahun to... Bahut khaas... Bahut khoobsurat... Bahut yaadgaar..Bahut lajawaab.. Ayush- bas, bas.. datahukum.. aap to shayar ban gaye... Ratan- haan, pyaar ne shayari bhi sikha di, Ayush banaa... Waise, thank u so much, Ayush banaa and esha bhabhisaa.. Aap dono ke bina, main yeh sab nai kar pata.. Diya se kabhi apne pyaar ka izhaar, aise nai kar pata.. So thank u so much..

Esha- koi, nahin.. datahukum.. Yeh to humara farz tha, aapke aur diya baisaa ke liye... Waise kal kuch bahut special bhi hua hoga, tabhi to aaj aap bahut laal laal lag rahe hain... Ratan- laal laal lag rahe hain, matlab? Esha- jaiye, mirror mein apne aap ko dekhiye.. esp aapka left gaal.. Ratan goes to see himself in nearby placed mirror. He sees Diya's lipstick mark on his left cheek.. He feels little embarrassed but then smiles thinking abt that kiss.. Ayush- arey, aap bhi nai, Esha.. Datahukum ko pareshaan karna band kariye.. Hume bahut proud feel ho raha hai, ki aap, apne pyaar ke izhaar ka inaam, apne saath laaye hain.. m proud of u... u r my real brother... He hugs him and pats on his back.. All three r happy that things are falling on correct places, as was planned and hoped..

In the afternoon, Esha goes to meet Masaa and says- Masaa, dekhiye naa.. Humara bag, jisme humne shaadi aur reception wali dresses rakhi thi, woh bag to hum wahin kesar mahal mein hi bhool gaye, ab hum kya Karen? Masaa- koi baat nai, Esha baisaa.. Agar aapko diya ki dresses fit aati hain, to aap unki dresses mein se koi choose karke pahan lijiye, function mein.. Esha- Nai masaa, diya baisaa to bahut mann se apne liye dresses layi hongi, hum unki dress nai pahan sakte.. Aisa karte hain, diya baisaa ke saath shooping jaa ke, hum apne liye nayi dresses le aaye hain... Haan, yeh theek rahega.. Masaa, kya hum diya ko apne saath le jaye? Masaa- haan,le jaiye.. par, aap dono akele, Mumbai mein, shopping? Esha- Aap chinta mat kariye, Masaa.. Hum ayush ji ko apne saath le jayenge.. theek hai? Esha informs Diya that she has to accompany her for shopping.. Diya agrees. She gets ready and comes out of villa with Esha.. A car comes, Ayush banaa is driving that car.. Esha goes and sits on the front seat.. Diya also moves forward to open the back seat door..

Esha- arey, Diya baisaa. Aap kahan aa rahi hain? Aap humare saath nai ja rahi hain.. Diya- Kya matlab? Diya is shocked to hear this.. Esha- Aap yahin wait kariye.. Hum jaa rahen hain.. Before Diya cud understand/react to what Esha said, their car leaves... Just 5 seconds later, another car comes and stops just in front of Diya... Window glass retracts down.. And here, she sees him.. Diya's handsome Ratan is here to pick her up... Ratan looks at his gorgeous Diya and smiles.. That lovely smile on Ratan's face brightened Diya's mood.. Ratan gets out of the car and gifts her a big bouquet of beautiful red roses and says- For my one and only love... Diya is surprised and asks him- Ratan, aapko to aise khule-aam pyar ka izhaar karna pasand nai hai, to aaj aap yeh sab..? Ratan- Pyar aapko badal deta hai, Diya.. Iss pyaar mein bahut taakat hoti hai, aisa hi kuch kaha karte hain log.. Correct? Diya- Correct.. Aapka yeh badlaav waise hume bahut pasand aa raha hai.. I must say- I m very impressed.. Ratan- yehi to chahiye tha.. ab chalen? Diya- sure.. Diya sits in car... She sees two big bags on back seat.. Diya- Ratan, yeh do bade bags mein kya hai? Kuch surprise hai? She is anxious to know abt any more suprise..

Ratan was about to answer but then suddenly, his wicked mind gets an idea.. He smiles and says- nahin Diya.. Par waise surprise kah sakti hain... Aapne kaha tha na, ki agli mulakaat mein.. Diya doesn't quite understand what he means and asks- agli mulakaat mein, kya? Ratan- oh fo Diya, itni jaldi bhool gayi? Aapne kaha tha na, agli mulakaat mein, aap mera mood aur bhi achcha kar dengi.. To bas wahi sab ki taiyaari.. Diya (still not getting it)- wahi sb ki taiyaari, matlab? Ratan- meri jaan, Diya.. Ab mood theek karne ke liye, kuch samaan to chahiye hoga na.. Aap nai samjhi? Diya- nahin.. She is still very confused, she doesn't understand about wat Ratan is talking abt.

Ratan- Inn dono bags mein, kaafi sari durex, aapke liye kuch emergency contraceptive pills (agar aap lena chaahe to), kuch CDs (waise unki zaroorat nai padegi), aapke liye ek bahut hi sexy night dress, jo maine khud aapke liye select ki hai.. aur aisi hi, kuch aur choti moti cheezen.. Diya is hell-shocked to hear all this... Her heart starts beating at a great pace.. She doesn't know how to react to this.. She is so nervous as well as scared, right now.. She gulps visibly.. She didn't know Ratan would say all this or want to do THAT, so soon.. Seeing Diya so shocked, Ratan is not able to control his laughter for one more second... Ratan- oh god, Diya.. Apna chehra dekhiye... OMG, aapne sach me, meri baat ko sach maan liya.. Oh, I can't believe this.. Main sirf mazaak kar raha thaa, Diya.. Yeh bags Ayush banaa aur Esha bhabhisaa ke hain, car se nikaalna bhool gaye the woh.. Cant tell u, Diya is so much relieved to know that this was a joke.. She is able to breathe now.. She knows Ratan well, but she was yet to experience his love.. The extent and power of his love for her... Ratan- aap mujhe zara bhi jaanti, Diya...? Diya- (trying to get back to normalcy)- nahin, Ratan.. Aisi baat nai hai.. Ratan- par aapke expressions se to, yehi laga.. He cups Diya's face in his hands and says- Diya, main aapse bahut, bahut zyaada pyar karta hun... Main aapko apna banana chahta hun.. I know, Mera yeh pyar, meri kamzori ho sakta hai.. Par main apne juzbaato ko, apni feelings to kaabu karna jaanta hun.. Diya, main kabhi aisa kuch nai karunga, jiske liye aap taiyaar na ho.. Samajh gayi aap?

Diya feels so relaxed hearing this- Ratan, hum bhi aapse bahut pyar karte hain.. Agar aapke liye hume kuch aisa karna bhi pade, jis-se shayad hum comfortable na ho, hume vishwaas hai ki, aapka pyar hume itni himmat de dega ki hume kuch bhi uncomfortable na lage.. Hume aap par pura bahrosa hai... Aap ke pyar mein, hume kuch bhi kar jaane se koi dar nai.. Aapke pyar ne hume nidar bana diya hai. Bas ab hum aapke saath rahna chahte hain.. Aapko bahut pyar karna chahte hain.. Hum aapke saath ab kahin bhi jaane ko taiyaar hain, Ratan..Chaliye.. Ratan is so happy to hear that Diya trusts him, believes in him.. They share a sweet hug.. Later, they have their lunch in a 5-star restaurant and then go for shopping, as Ratan wants to gift a gorgeous dress to Diva.. Diya goes to women's section.. Ratan asks her to select a beautiful outfit for the evening function.. Diya tells him that she already has got dresses for the functions, but Ratan insists.. Diya agrees and starts selecting. Ratan is helping her. After some time, Ratan's eyes find a very beautiful dark green colored lehangaa-choli with light peach colored dupatta, displayed on another corner of the shop.. He shows that dress to Diya, she also finds that dress very pretty... Shopkeeper brings that dress to show it to them.. Both of them really like that dress.. Diya takes the dupatta.. She tries it on herself and shows it to Ratan.. He likes it too.. Later, Diya picks the choli, which has a heavily embroidered high neck.. Both like it.. Diya then checks the backside of the choli and finds that it's backless choli, with just two doris in its upper and lower part... she is now looking little hesitant, and Ratan is able to notice this..

Ratan tells that shopkeeper- Nahin, bhaiyaa.. Yeh theek nai hai.. Hume kuch aur dresses dikhaiye.. Diya, isse waapis kar dijiye, hum kuch aur dekh lenge.. Diya knows- Ratan has seen that this dress is having backless choli and he feels that she will be uncomfortable wearing it, becoz she is always worn dignified clothes, and she never believes in exposing. But Diya wants to wear this for Ratan, as he really liked this dress..

Diya- Nai bhaiyaa ji, hume yeh dress hi pasand hai.. Hum yehi lenge.. isse pack kar dijiye.. Ratan- Diya, aap isme comfortable nai hongi. Isse rahne dijiye... Diya- Aapko yeh dress pasand aayi thi? Ratan- haan.. par.. Diya- par-war kuch nai.. hum yehi dress lenge.. no more discussion.. Ratan- aap sure hain? Diya- haan.. They both smile and ask shopkeeper to get the dress packed. They get up and start going towards billing section. Suddenly, Ratan holds Diya's hand and pulls her close to him...

Ratan- diya.. ! Diya- humm? Ratan (whispering in her ears)- mujhe abhi aapko hug karna hai.. Diya- kya? (in a little louder voice, as she is little shocked to hear this demand, at this moment, right in the middle of a over-crowded shop). Ratan- Diya, dheere boliye... Mujhe abhi hug karna hai, issi waqt..!! Diya (speaking in low voice tone)- Ratan, yahan? Ratan- Haan, aur abhi... kar lun? Diya- Aap pagal ho gayen hain kya? Yahan, sab ke saamne? Ratan- I don't care... I just want to hug u right now... Diya looks around and says- Achcha to, aap wahan, trial room ke paas jaiye, hum bhi wahan aate hain.. ok? Ratan- ok, par jaldi.. I cant wait.. Diya- ok baba.. aap jaiye..

Ratan goes near trial room.. one min later, Diya also reaches there.. She is standing there, looking for Ratan, suddenly she is pulled inside the trail room.. Door is closed.. Ratan hugs her tightly, very tightly... Ratan applies the right amount of pressure. Both cud feel shivers down their spines and lower abdomen quiver.. That closeness starts driving them crazy.. Very clearly, Diya can smell his scent which is so insanely good. They cud feel the synchronized rhythms of their heartbeats and breathing.. The joy and excitement of this hug is indescribable. Ratan's arms are completely encircling Diya... She is liking the feel of his hands around her, holding her, caressing her.. It feels like home to her, she feels safe in his tight embrace.. That wonderfully warm and intimate closeness is making Ratan, go weak in his knees. His face slowly moves down and is now touching the delicate skin of her neck. Her innocent neck, her sloping shoulder are turning him on.. Diya is also losing control on herself. Her toes are tingling. His touch is so comforting for her.. Their eyes are closed and both are so lost in each other's love, at this moment that they didn't notice that somebody had been knocking the door for long... Suddenly, diya hears the knock and moves her body back, to break the hug.. Ratan pulls her close to him again...Diya- Ratan, koi door knock kar raha hai...

Ratan is not listening to Diya and is still hugging her tightly.. Diya- Ratan... Ratan? She pats on his shoulder and Ratan opens his eyes. Ratan wanted this for some more time.. Diya- Ratan, koi bahut der se door knock kar raha hai.. Hume ab, bahar chalna chahiye.. Ratan- itni jaldi? Diya- bahut der ho gayi hai, ratan... humara mazzak ban jayega.. Ratan- Ab iss pyar mein mazaak ban bhi jaye to, koi baat nai.. Main taiyaar hun.. Diya- aap bhi na... chaliye... Ratan- ok chaliye..

As they come out, they find a long queue of people waiting outside the trial room.. Everyone is staring at them angrily. They look at each other and start laughing on themselves, thinking what they had done.. Ratan goes to billing counter and pays the bill. Both sit in their car and then leave for a beach-side resort.. Car stops in the resort.

Diya- ab yahan? Ratan- haan, diya.. kuch relaxation aur ek cup coffee? Diya- ok.. hum bhi thoda thaka-thaka mahsoos kar rahe they waise... They check into their room, which has a beautiful view of the private beach... Ratan orders for coffee and some snacks.. After 10-15 mins, room service sends their order.. Ratan gets a call, its call from kesar mahal.. He attends the call and finds out that it is regarding the project. Ratan- Diya, aap coffee start kijiye, project se related call aaya hai, main bas abhi baat larke aata hun.. bas 2 min.. Diya- haan, aap jaiye, baat kar lijiye.. Hum yahin hain..

It takes Ratan some time and Diya has already finished her coffee.. She is waiting for Ratan.. She then goes near the door, which leads to nearby beach... It's a picturesque view for there... Very calm and pleasant evening. Cool refreshing breeze.. Sun is finishing its evening ritual.. Sunset is painting beautiful colors of dusk that is compelling Diya to go out and enjoy this beautiful scenic view.. Ratan returns to room and is not able to find Diya in the room.. He looks around and finds the other door open. He sees Diya standing near the beach.. Ratan goes near Diya..

She is facing the beach, when he hugs her from behind.. Diya turns her head to find Ratan holding her.. His hands are softly encircling her stomach.. His face is resting on her right shouder.. They both are enjoying that beautiful view.. He gently turns his head and looks at Diya.. Diya's face is shining in that sunlight.. Her shiny cheeks, her rosy lips are inviting.. Her unbelievably beautiful eyes are mesmerizing.. Ratan moves even closer.. Now, they both are gazing into each other's eyes. His face is almost touching hers.. Diya's heart is also melting due to the Ratan's love, that passionate hug and warmth of his body.. Her heart starts bumping very fast and she cud feel the heat going up her face.. Ratan is also feeling helpless due to that impulsive desire to love her.. He is softly pressing his body into hers.. That loving touch was making her crazy.. He lets his cheeks brush hers gently. They both take a deep breath. Her velvet soft skin is doing magic on him.. That sensual touch of Ratan is sending shivers of ecstasy in Diya's body.. Ratan slowly moves his lips even closer and gently kisses her right cheek.. Diya suddenly perceives a thrilling fear within heart when he kisses her cheek. Her body gets enveloped numbingly in goose bumps, that kiss had created. Kissing diya, ignites a feeling within Ratan's heart too, which is so intense that it is making him dizzy. This was the effect, that kiss had on both of them.. They are experiencing a tornade of emotions.. The overpowering passion, Ratan is generating, is well sensed by diya.. They are moving close and closer with every passing second.. Ratan is not able to control the growing hunger of loving Diya more and more, his eyes are now fixed on her lips, her mouth.. His lips move closer or hers.. As their lips touch, it evokes an extreme pleasure, they cud dream of. Before they cud enjoy this special moment together, Ratan gets a call on his mobile, the very next moment.. It was Esha bhabhisaa' call... It was really very hard to break their first kiss (actually, before it cud even start properly). Ratan is feeling so helpless at this moment, but he had to pick up the call.

Ratan- haan, esha bhabhisaa? Esha- datahukum, kahan hain, aap dono? Masaa kab se hume phone karke pooch rahin hain ki, main aur diya kab lautenge? Main kya kahun unse? Aap dono jaldi wapis aa jaiye.. plz.. Ratan- Esha bhabhisaa, kya hum kuch der baad aa sakte hain? Esha- nai datahukum.. masaa bahut baar phone kar chuki hain.. plz aap dono jaldi waapis aa jaaiye.. nai to hum pakde jaayenge.. Ratan -ok, theek hai.. hum dono aate hain.. Ratan is visible so upset now and Diya knows the reason.. Diya- Ratan, koi baat nai.. Chaliye, apna mood mat kharab kariye.. Fir kisi aur din sahi.. Ab hum aapse jyada dur to nai jaa rahen naa.. Ratan- kitni bad timing thi, esha bhabhisaa ki call ki.. dekhiye naa. Diya- hum jaante hain.. fir kisi aur din sahi.. Ratan- Ab, fir kisi aur din tak, kaise ruk paunga main.. Diya, Aapke itna kareeb aane ke baad, ab aapse zara bhi dur nai rah paunga, main.. Kya abhi jaana zaroori hai? Plz stay with me, for some more time..

Diya holds him softly and says- Ratan, aap bhi jaante hain, abhi humara jaana zaroori hai.. Aap ek baat achche se jaan lijiye that I am yours... Aur aap se dur hum bhi, ab nahin rah sakte.. Par abhi haalaat aise hain ki, hume ek dusre se kuch dur rahna padega.. Bas kuch din aur.. Waapis surajgadh jaakar, hum dono papasaa se baat karenge.. Fir sab theek ho jayega.. chaliye ab, apna mood theek kar lijiye, plzzz. Ratan is still upset thinking that diya has to go back now, but it can't be helped.. They both leave and reach Diya' s villa.. Diya is about to step out of car, when Ratan holds her hand.. Ratan doesn't want her to go.. Diya knows it.. He wants to be with her, love her endlessly.. Ratan- Diya..! He doesn't say one more word but his eyes are filled with desire to finish that first kiss.. Diya is able to read his mind.. Diya replies- hum jaante hain, Ratan.. Function mein milkar, okay.. Ratan is glad that Diya cud understand wat he was asking for - humm,.. Okay.. See u, there.. Diya starts moving towards the gates of villa. Ratan- Diya..! Diya turns back and says- Haan, Ratan..? Ratan- Aapki dress.. Diya- Arey, haan.. hum to bhool hi gaye they.. Thanks for reminding.. Ratan- Aaj aap yehi dress pahan kar aana, function mein.. Diya- okay.. Ratan- I will be waiting for u.. Diya- ok, bye.. Ratan- diya..! Diya- Ab kya ratan? Ratan- I love u, diya.. Diya is happy to hear that.. She smiles and goes inside the villa..

Ratan is happy to know that Diya understands him so well.. Same time, he is now excited to meet her again in function, so that he can finish that unfinished job (of kissing her passionately)..

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To be continued

Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Another beautiful update 👏👏👏
Oh My DiRa ❤️☺️
Eagerly waiting for next update
Edited by -Nags- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: -Nags-

Another beautiful update 👏👏👏

Oh My DiRa ❤️☺️
Eagerly waiting for next update


Thank you 😊😊
Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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Thank you dear😊
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Ohhh yum!!!! 😃 What an absolutely delicious update... 😳😃
Their passion, their emotions...all the scenery...everything is beautifull described.. 👏👏
Excellent ff... 👏⭐️
Ratan sa k sath even i am impatient to see/ read Diya in that backless choli..I wonder what Daatahukum will do to her in the function!😉 Abhi trial room tha, function mien washroom, bridal room ya kitchen use ker lien ge!😆😆😆
Extremely anxious to read the next update buddy..
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Awesome, beautifully written. Their emotions and scenery are described beautifully👏. Excellent update⭐️. Eagerly waiting for next update
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Ohhh yum!!!! 😃 What an absolutely delicious update... 😳😃

Their passion, their emotions...all the scenery...everything is beautifull described.. 👏👏
Excellent ff... 👏⭐️
Ratan sa k sath even i am impatient to see/ read Diya in that backless choli..I wonder what Daatahukum will do to her in the function!😉 Abhi trial room tha, function mien washroom, bridal room ya kitchen use ker lien ge!😆😆😆
Extremely anxious to read the next update buddy..


Thank u so much dear for liking the update...😆😆
I was thinking in the same line (abt where shud they hav their kiss).. Lets see, how it goes..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doreman

Awesome, beautifully written. Their emotions and scenery are described beautifully👏. Excellent update⭐️. Eagerly waiting for next update


Thank u.. Happy that u liked the update.. 😆😆
Will finish the next part soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ratan thinking about Diya, finding chance how to meet her, Diya blushing, their first kiss - I like each an every part. My most favorite part was when Ratan joked about condoms and contraceptive pills 😆

Awesome dear, Eagerly waiting for your next update. The way Ratan is waiting for Diya 😉

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Originally posted by: nancy505

Ratan thinking about Diya, finding chance how to meet her, Diya blushing, their first kiss - I like each an every part. My most favorite part was when Ratan joked about condoms and contraceptive pills 😆

Awesome dear, Eagerly waiting for your next update. The way Ratan is waiting for Diya 😉


Thanks Nancy dear, for ur lovely comments..😊😆
That section was my fav too...😉

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