DIRA (FF)- HUMAARI AJAB KAHAANI- All parts (1-13) on Page 35 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update

Love it


Thanks for liking the update, Dear..😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow arulya! 👏
Such a super awesome update!! ❤️
DiRa's super lovely moments 😡
Kya killer scenes likhe hai boss, majjo aagyo 😉 😆
The dressing room scene, the car scene, the hotel room scene, woaahh!
They all were hotness! Sheer hotness!
Can't wait to read the next!
Keep writing, you are fabulous!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Wow arulya! 👏
Such a super awesome update!! ❤️
DiRa's super lovely moments 😡
Kya killer scenes likhe hai boss, majjo aagyo 😉 😆
The dressing room scene, the car scene, the hotel room scene, woaahh!
They all were hotness! Sheer hotness!
Can't wait to read the next!
Keep writing, you are fabulous!


Thanks surbhi dear, for ur lovely comments 😊😆
M glad that u liked the scenes... 😃😃
Actually, show ke off-air jaane ki khabar ne mood itna kharaab kar diya ki, aage likhne ka mann hi nahin ho raha tha😭... but kal waala episode dekh kar mann khush ho gaya.. Bahut Majjo Aagayo.. They both were just superb, y'day... So today, i have started writing the next update, hope u will like that too...
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Part 8

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Diya enters the villa and goes to Masaa's room to meet her.. Masaa- Diya baisaa, hum kab se, aapka wait kar rahe they.. Bahut der ho gayi aapko aur esha baisaa ko shopping karte karte.. Hume darr lagne laga tha.. Woh to achcha hua ki Ayush banaa bhi aap logo ke saath they, warna aap to jaanti hain, anjaan shahar mein yun itni der... Diya interrupts and says- Masaa, aap bhi naa... Hum jahan bhi they, bilkul safe they.. Aap yun hi ghabara rahin thi.. Chaliye, hume function ke liye bhi to jaana hain, aap taiyaar ho jaiye.. Masaa - Achcha theek hai... arey yeh kya hai, aapke haath mein? (pointing towards the bag, diya was carrying) Diya- Masaa, Esha jijisaa ke saath shopping karte hue, hume bhi apne liye ek dress pasand aa gayi, to humne le li... Humne theek kiya? Masaa- Bahut achcha kiya, aapne.. Chaliye ab, aap bhi jaake ready ho jaiye.. Diya- ji masaa..

Diya enters her room.. She goes to washroom to freshen herself up.. She comes out and takes the dress (gifted by Ratan) out of the bag.. It looks so beautiful.. She wears the lehangaa and choli. She looks at herself in mirror, turns around to check if that backless choli is looking okay or it is too revealing (actually, It was..) But she wants to wear it for Ratan, bcoz in a way, she is trying to woo him by doing this.. And this feeling is making her feel comfortable in this dress.. She finishes her make up.. Her lips are coloured red, and eyes are smoky black. She puts a shiny small red bindi on her forehead.. Today, she has filled her hairline with kumkum as well.. Her face is looking so bright with joy and glow of Ratan's love.. She has fixed the dupatta over her left shoulder..She has left her hair open, which is covering her seductive back, for the time being.. She just checks herself in the mirror finally, before she gets going to reach the venue (by mistake, she leaves her mobile phone on the table, in her room).. She leaves along with Masaa

Meanwhile, Ratan has already reached the venue, as he is too eager to meet Diya and he was not able to wait in his room.. He wants to see her again, hold her, kiss her and love her.. He tries Diya's mobile to check if she has started or not.. But she is not picking up her mobile.. He tries again and again, but no response... He is looking restless now, and this is easily noticeable to Ayush and Esha.. Esha- Datathukum, thoda sabr kijiye, Diya baisaa aa jayengi... Ratan- dekhiye na, Esha bhabhisaa.. Main kab se diya ko phone laga raha hun, woh hain ki calls nahin uthaa rahin.. Shayad unke phone mein kuch problem ho gayi hogi.. Aap kaakisaa ko phone try kariye naa, plz.. Esha- Datahukum, hum 10 min aur wait kar lete hain, agar woh fir bhi nai aaye to, hum masaa ko call karte hain, ok? Ratan- 10 min? Mujhse nahin wait hoga... Aap, plz kaakisaa to abhi call kariye naa, nahin to main abhi unke villa chala jaungaa, check karne ke liye.. Esha- Arey, baba...! Itni baichaini..!! Dekh rahen hain, Ayush ji.. aapke bhai saheb ko... Aap bhi inse kuch seekh lijiye.. Waise maan gaye datahukum aapko, pyar ka bhoot aap par achche se chadh gaya hai... Ratan- bhoot wooth ko chodiye, Esha bhabhisaa, aap jaldi se call kariye na.. Esha- ok ok, karte hain.. She goes to one side and calls her masaa..

Ratan- kya hua? Kab aa rahe hain woh? Esha- Woh Diya baisaa, apna phone room mein hi bhool gayi hain.. Masaa se humari baat ho gayi hai.. Woh dono bahar tak pahunch gaye hain, entrance par hain.. Abhi andar hi aa rahe hain.. Ratan- oh good... aap dono yahin rukiye, main uss taraf jaata hun.. Ayush- kyun, aap yahin humare saath rukiye na?Ratan- nahin, kaakisaa ko achcha nai lagega, mujhse mil kar.. Woh bhi to kaakusaa ki tarah mujhse gusaa hongi na.. Koi baat nahin, aap dono mil lijiye, main yahin aas paas hi hun..

Diya and Masaa come inside and find Esha and Ayush waiting for them.. They greet each other.. But Diya's eyes are searching for Ratan who isn't with them right now.. She looks around, but isn't able to find him... All four then, leave for the main area, where sangeet and mehandi ceremonies are about to start.. They meet few others guests, who are from surajgadh.. Mehar (bride) also comes and meets them..

Mehar- Sabko humara , khamaghani. Khamaghani- replies everyone.. Mehar- Arey wah, Diya.. aaj to aap kahar hi dha rahin hain.. Kya baat hai? Really, aaj aap bahut hi zyada sundar lag rahi hain.. Diya - Par aapse kam... Iss khoobsurat dulhan ka koi mukabalaa nai.. Aapko kisi ki nazar na lage.. Mehar- kaakisaa, kya hum thodi der ke liye, diya ko apne saath le jayen, plz.. Esha jijisaa, aap plz kaakisaa ka khyaal rakhiye na.. Esha- Haan, haan, kyun nai.. aap diya ko saath le jaiye..

Diya goes with Mehar.. Both of them are chatting.. Mehar is then called for mehandi.. Diya is standing near her.. Mehar asks her to sit, but Diya says that she is comfortable standing there and she asks Mehar to carry on with her mehandi... Soon, Diya finds her heartbeat getting fast... She is able to sense Ratan's presence near her.. She turns around and finds him just behind her... Seeing Ratan, her eye sparkle in joy and her happiness is visible on her face, as Ratan's looking so handsome and dashing in that black suit.. Ratan is also totally smitten by Diya's beauty tonight... She is looking so gorgeous today, so perfect from head to toe.. An unearthly beauty.. Even thousands of orchids can't compare to her beauty.. Her mesmerizing eyes are hypnotizing.. Her graceful facial features are uncomparable.. Ratan is feeling so lucky to have her in his life, and his face is rightly expressing what he is feeling right now, for her.. And nothing is hidden from Diya, as well.. She can see immense love for her, in his eyes.. Ratan comes closer to her, increasing her heartbeat.. He stands next to her.. Ratan- Lagta hai, aaj to aap, kai saare katle-aam karne ke mood mein hain.. Diya- Aur sabse pehla number aapka.. Ratan- Hum to kabse taiyaar baithe hain, aapse ghaayal hone ke liye.. Diya- sach mein? Ratan- haan... Diya- theek hai, fir...

Diya goes near Mehar and tells her- Mehar, shayad humari dress mein, koi chinti (ant) chali gayi hai.. hume bahut takleef ho rahi hai.. Hum zaraa check karke aate hain.. Mehar sees Ratan standing near Diya. The way, Ratan is looking at Diya so lovingly, she cud guess which chinti is troubling Diya.. Mehar- Arey, Diya.. Aisa kijiye, upar, first floor par mera room hai, wahan jaake apni dress theek karke aa jaiye.. Yeh rahi mere room ki keys.. lijiye.. Room number 101. Ok? Diya- Oh thank you, Mehar.. par iski zaroorat nai hai.. Mehar- Aise kaise, nahin hai.. Bilkul zaroorat hai.. Lijiye room ki keys.. Diya- theek hai, hum dress theek karke jaldi aate hain.. Mehar- Aaram se Diya, koi jaldi nai hai.. Aap jaiye.. hume abhi apne room mein koi kaam nai hai, aur agar hota bhi to, abhi hum nahin jaa sakte, bcoz humari abhi dono legs ki mehandi baaki hai..

Diya takes the keys. As Diya turns around to go, Mehar tells Ratan- arey, jijusaa.. aap bhi jaiye na.. Diya ko help bhi to chahiye hogi na.. Jaaiye, aap bhi.. She winks.. Ratan cud understand Mehar's intensions to give some privacy to them..

Diya is heading towards Mehar's room, Ratan is following her.. She opens the room and waits near door.. Ratan comes inside and she locks the room.. They are now alone in that room.. They stand near each other.. When Diya's eyes meets his, she feels an overwhelming emotion.. Ratan moves little closer to her.. Her heart starts beating very fast with that increasing closeness.. Ratan comes even closer.. Now, his passionate expressive eyes are making her very nervous. He grabs her one hand and plants a soft, gentle kiss on back of her hand.. That kiss is filled with so much love and it makes her heart flutter..

Ratan is continuously looking at her and his loving stare is making her weak. She is blushing and is falling short of breath.. She turns around and goes near window to catch some fresh air.. She looks outside the window.. It's a breathtaking clear view, with beautiful, crescent moon and so many shining stars in the dark night sky... She gently moves her left hand to bring her hair in front of her left shoulder, thus showing off her backless choli.. Ratan, who has been controlling himself till now, isn't able to do so after seeing Diya in that choli. He is not able to take his eyes off her seductive back. Ratan comes and stands near Diya.. As his hand slowly slides over gentle curve of her back, Diya shivers in pleasure. She feels a sudden rush of extreme excitement at the very first touch of Ratan's hand on her back. She literally gets goose bumps. That smooth, creamy touch of diya's back is sending an electric feeling inside Ratan. He is enjoying touching her velvety skin and she is loving his slow, gentle caresses.. Later, he starts writing something on her back, while applying slight pressure with his fingertips..

Ratan- Diya, bataiye, Maine kya likha? Diya- humm.. fir se likhiye?Ratan- theek hai, dhyaan dijiye... he starts to write something again.. Diya- Ratan, hume nai pata chal raha? Aap hi bata dijiye.. Ratan turns her around so that he can see her face.. He looks into her black smoky eyes.. Ratan- Maine likha.. You are mine.. Diya slowly leans over his strong chest with her forehead resting on his shoulder and says- Ratan, hum sirf aapke hain.. Udhar dekhiye, aasmaan mein.. Jaise, inn jag-magaate sitaaron ki roshni aur iss chaand ki chaandni par sirf raat ka haq hai, waise hi hum par sirf aapka hi haq hai..

Ratan puts his arm around her which gives the most comfortable and safest feeling to Diya. They both gaze up at the stars and moon.. It's a pleasant view.. He then looks at diya and says- Diya, aap ke saamne yeh chaand aur tare, kuch bhi nahin.. Aap jitna khoobsurat koi bhi nahin.. Diya- Khoobsurat to, aapki yeh pyaar bhari aakhen hain, jo hume yun dekh rahin hain.. humari dil ki dhadkane badha rahi hain.. hume bechain kar rahi hain.. Hearing this, he pulls her closer and hugs her tightly.. His tight and warm embrace is so comforting for her and he is smelling so delicious.. Ratan's heart is also racing very fast with that intimacy and he is finding it difficult to control.. He finally asks what he was longing for- Diya, I want to kiss you, Can I..?

Diya isn't surprised to hear this request from Ratan and replies- Ratan, I am all yours.. Ab aapko iski izaazat lene ki zaroorat nai hai.. She moves closer to him to give wat ratan wants.. This is wat Ratan was desiring.. His lips move closer to hers. Both close their eyes. Then ratan's lips touch her plump juicy lips and he kisses her. This experience is hugely thrilling for both of them... Both are feeling butterflies in their stomachs. And that kiss gets deeper in intensity, with every passing second of their pleasure. He is holding her face firmly in his hands and keeps kissing her, Diya is also reciprocating well with the same affection. Diya's hands are in Ratan's hair. Their tongues gently start exploring their mouths. Both are riding high in the wave of loving emotion. They both moan in pleasure of those intense moments. The way Diya is reacting to his hot steamy kisses, it is making him go crazier and wilder.. Even for diya, this is like a totally dreamy experience. Ratan is breaking through so many of her walls that nobody had ever been able to. Their bodies are becoming warmer with that surreal pleasure.. Suddenly somebody knocks at door.. And It is Esha bhabhisaa again..

Esha- diya baisaa, aap andar hain kya? Ratan wanted this for some more time, but he now has to pull himself away. He breaks the kiss and lets diya answer to esha. Diya- haan, jijisaa.. hum andar hain.. Esha- Diya baisaa, masaa aapko dhoondh rahi hain.. Jaldi aaiye.. Shayad woh waapis jaana chahti hain.. Diya- Haan, hum aate hain.. She starts moving towards the door.. Ratan holds her hand and stops her... Diya- Ratan, hume ab jaana hoga.. hum aapse baad mein milte hain.. Ratan- diya, kissing you was this best feeling I have ever experienced...Diya smiles and says- I felt the same Ratan... She then opens the door.. Esha finds Diya and Ratan together in the room, she isn't surprised though..

Esha- hume pata tha, datahukum bhi yahin honge.. Aajkal agar kisi to, unka pataa jaan-na ho to, diya baisaa ke as paas dhoondh lijiye, yeh wahin milenge... Diya- kya, jijisaa, aap bhi na.. Esha- haan, diya baisa.. datahukum to pyar ke pagalpan ki saari hade paar karte jaa rahen hain.. Woh to aapka phone aapke paas nai hai, isliye hume aana pada, nahin to hum aap dono ko iss tarah yun disturb nahin karte.. Ab Aap Chaliye, masaa aap ko bula rahi hain.. Unko thoda headache ho raha hai, woh waapis jaana chahti hain.. Ratan- itni jaldi? Esha- datahukun, aapko shayad pata nai, par kaafi der ho chuki hai.. ab aapko diya baisaa ko jaane dena hoga..

Diya looks at Ratan and her eyes are seeking his permission.. He doesn't want her to leave, but he can't ask her to stay longer now.. He nodes his head and lets her go. Diya leaves with her masaa and returns to their villa.. Diya gives some painkiller to Masaa and asks her to take some rest and sleep.. She stays with her for some time and later returns to her room.. She changes her clothes. Then, she checks her mobile, as she had left that in her room by mistake, before going for function.. She finds 30 missed calls from Ratan (some calls were missed earlier and some just 15 min back).. She smiles, thinking about how crazily ratan is behaving, after their love confession.. May be that's what magic of love does to everyone.. She thinks of calling Ratan back.. She lifts her mobile and goes to the balcony to get a good signal... As she reaches balcony, she looks outside.. Its beautiful, calming view from there.. Its so dark and quiet.. She is loving that cold, soothing night breeze.. She unloosens her hair and let it flutter in the gentle wind.. She is about to call on ratan's number, then suddenly, she hears her name.. Diya..!!!

She looks around and finds no one there.. Diya, yahan neeche... Diya looks from balcony and finds Ratan standing down. Diya- Ratan, aap? Aap abhi yahan kya kar rahen hain..? Ratan- Sawaal jawaab baad mein.. chaliye zara dur hatiye, mujhe yeh seedhi balcony tak laane dijiye.. He places the ladder properly and comes up.. Diya- Aap yahan kya kar rahen hain..? Ratan- kya kar raha hun, matlab? Diya- matlab, aap yahan ISS WAQT, kya kar rahen hain..? Ratan- oh, iss waqt.. Main yahan kya karne aaunga? Aap itni bhi bewkoof nai hain, Diya.. Aap samajh jaaiye, Na.. Diya- very funny, hume kuch nai samajhnaa.. Agar kisi ne aapko yahan dekh liya to, gadbad ho jayegi, Ratan..

Ratan- mujhe kisi ne nai dekha.. aap chinta mat kariye.. Par agar hum dono yun hi, iss tarah, balcony mein bahas karte rahe, to pakka, koi na koi hume zaroor dekha lega.. chaliye, andar chaliye.. Diya- aap bhi naa. Ratan.. aaiye... They come inside the room. As soon as Diya shuts the door of balcony, Ratan pulls her close to him. Ratan- Ab aap se dur rahna bahut mushkil hai, Diya.. Aapko puri tarah se apna banana chahta hun.. Diya slowly slides her one hand, in his hair and says- Ratan, humare liye bhi, ab aapse dur rahna bahut mushkil hai, par aap jaante hain na.. Ratan- haan, Jaanta hun.. Woh sab kuch, jo main karna chahta hun, abhi nai kar sakta..Lekin main abhi aapko kiss to kar hi sakta hun, na.. Diya- haan, par.. Before she cud say one more words, Ratan's lips were kissing hers.. [People say- When love strikes you, it blooms so many emotions within you and makes you crave for it more and more, until you are fully immersed in it. That's wat is happening to both of them..] That desire for physical closeness is so intense, right now, that they both lose control and unknowingly fall on bed.. His body is now on hers.. His passionate kisses are driving Diya crazy and the soft supple touch of diya's lips is doing magic on Ratan as well.. Both are enjoying this intimacy.. But the very next moment, Ratan stops, he pulls himself away and gets up. It surprises Diya.. Ratan- I m sorry..Iske aage main, khud ko nai rok paaunga.. mujhse control nai ho payega.. It's really difficult for me to hold back my love for u.. Diya, You know that I want to make love to you. But I think, I will lose control over myself in the heat of this moment, if I don't stop right now.. I m sorry. Diya understands Ratan's situation. She gets up and says- I m sorry too, Ratan.. Hum bhi apne jazbaat kaabu nai rakh paye.. Aap humse jyaada strong nikle waise, iss maamle mein.. hume pata nai tha, aap mein itna self control hai.. Ratan- Sab aapke liye.. aapke liye jo mera pyar hai, uske liye.. Bas Ek baar, kaakusaa maan jaye, to fir jaldi se, aapko kesar mahal laake, aapne room mein le jaake, aapko itna pyar karunga, ki aapne soch abhi na hoga...

Diya's heart melts hearing ratan's wish and how he is controlling himself for her.. She hugs him, he hugs her too, tightly.. Ratan- ab mujhe jaana chaahiye, diya.. Diya is actually feeling so comfortable in his arms, that she is not willing to let him go.. Ratan- diya? I think I shud go now.. Diya- ratan? Ratan- haan? Diya- kya aaj aap, yahin ruk sakte hain, mere paas, plz.. mujhe apni baahon mein yun hi bhare rakh sakte hain? Ratan- haan, diya par.. Diya- plz ratan.. I will make sure that we stay in our control... kal subah hone se pahle aap chale jaaiyega.. ok?

Ratan too is not really willing to go, so he agrees to stay.. They both are just hugging each other, chatting, and enjoying their moments together.. Later they fall asleep in their cozy embrace.. Next morning, someone knocks the door.. Its Masaa..

Masaa- Diya baisaa? Uthiye.. bahut der ho gayi hai.. diya baisaa...? Diya opens her eyes and is shocked to know that its 9 o'clock in the morning.. Masaa is outside the room, calling her.. She wakes up Ratan.. Diya (in low voice tone)- ratan..! ratan..! uthiye.. masaa baahar hain, mujhe bula rahin hain... Ratan wakes up and is hell shocked to see the time and to know that masaa is waiting outside to get the door opened.. Ratan- ab kya Karen, diya? Main, iss waqt balcony se bhi neeche nai jaa sakta, aapke security guards mujhe pakad lenge.. ab kya karun? Diya- aap aisa kijiye, washroom mein chup jaiye.. Hum masaa ko sambhaalte hain tab tak.. Jaaiye.. jaldi jaaiye.. He goes inside the washroom and hides himself.. Diya opens the door..

Masaa- kya diya baisaa.. itni der ho gayi.. Aaj aap bahut der tak soti rah gayi..? Diya rubbing her eyes- Haan, masaa.. kal bahut der baad neend aayi, isliye kab subah ho gayi, pata nai chala.. Ratan can hear all the conversation from the washroom Masaa- Chaliye, jaldi se fresh ho jaiye.. Nashtaa taiyaar hai.. Masaa turns around to go, but then, suddenly she stops and says- Aur, diya baisaa.. datahukum ko bhi washroom se baahar bula lijiye, woh bhi humare saath naashte kar lenge..

Both Diya and Ratan are like- WHAT???? MASAA KO KAISE PATA CHALAA???

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To be continued..

Edited by arulya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh My God...Oh My God...😆😆😛
Fabulous update Arulya, very beautifully written.👏👏
DiRa first kiss ☺️❤️
The surprise moment was DiYa's mom aware about DiRa😉
I am so excited and eagerly waiting for next part.😉
Edited by -Nags- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hahahaha!!! I knewww that Maasa must have known! 😆😆
What an amazing update Arulya.. Ghanro majoo aagiyoo.. 😆😆
yaaar please post the next update soon.. Its such a beautiful ff.. 😳❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update
Beautifully written
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nags-

Oh My God...Oh My God...😆😆😛

Fabulous update Arulya, very beautifully written.👏👏
DiRa first kiss ☺️❤️
The surprise moment was DiYa's mom aware about DiRa😉
I am so excited and eagerly waiting for next part.😉


Thanks Nags for ur positive comments...😊😊
M pleased that u liked the update and the surprise element...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb👏 . Shortage of words to express👏👍🏼.. Waiting for next update.
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hahahaha!!! I knewww that Maasa must have known! 😆😆

What an amazing update Arulya.. Ghanro majoo aagiyoo.. 😆😆
yaaar please post the next update soon.. Its such a beautiful ff.. 😳❤️


Thanks ayesha Dear... M glad that u liked it.. 😃😃
Really appreciate ur positive comments for the update..😊😊
Ya, Masaa knew it all..😉 Masaa knows her daughter so well, the state of her heart. Nothing is hidden from her, be it the slightest change in diya's facial expressions, her behavior or her emotions.. Mummies se kuch nahin chuptaa...😃😃

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