Kabeer and Ananya ~ The First Meeting (COMPLETED) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 14:

The ringing of her phone diverts her mind "Madam ji aap ayi nahi?" asks Teenu, as soon as Ananya receives the call. "Aati hoon abhi". Ending the call she thinks what step should she take, "Maine nahi socha tha Sir ki pehle din hi aapke saath aise problems shuru ho jayenge mere". Grabbing a pen and a sheet from the notepad placed on the table she quickly writes down:

Sir
I know main apke khilaf ja rahi hoon. But trust me apko hurt karne ka mera koi maksad nahi tha. Par aap khud hi sochiye agar mujhe opportunity nahi mili to main kaise ye discover karungi ki main kis layak hun? Kaise ye KKN ko prove karungi ki main kuch kar sakti hoon? Aaj aapne mujhe ye to jata diya ki apko meri chinta hai! Shayad mere yakin par yakin bhi hai ki main kuch kar ke dikha sakti hun, par apka darr apko ijjazat nahi de raha ki aap mujhe ye karne dein. Aapka yahi darr mujhe rok raha hai. Main nahi chahti ki yahan tak pohnch kar main iss opportunity ko haath se jane dun. And I think mere boss hone k natey, aap bhi nahi chahenge ki main fail hoon. So please, I am sorry!
Ananya

Writing the note quickly and keeping it safely into a file placed in front of her, she leaves the cabin to meet Teenu.

"Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tu apne bhai se baat kyu nahi kar raha?" asks Trisha after sipping her coffee. "Yaar Bhaiya manenge tujhe lagta hai?""Par yaar main to abhi tak nahi samajh pa rahi ki aakhir problem kya hai?" asks Trisha, creasing her eyebrows."Dekh yaar main wahan nahi reh sakta. Unse meri banti nahi hai aur Ma mere bina nahi reh pa rahin"."Aur tere Bhaiya, wo kya keh rahe hain?""Unhe kya Papa ke saamne wo kuch nahi kehte! Yaar kabhi kabar lagta hai main anath hoon". Beating on his upper arm Trisha says "Oye Ronnie, ye sub faltu baatein na mere samne mat bola kar, samjha tu? Jab Trisha yahan hai to tension kya hai?" "Waah beta tu kahan se aise lines marna seekh gayi?" asks Ronnie. "Line? Main kis pe line maar rahi hoon?" asks Trisha, winking at Richa. "Acha yaar ye Ananya kahan hai?" asks Ronnie. "Arey usse koi lead mili hai, wahin gayi hai" answers Trisha. "Kamal hai mujhse mili bhi nahi!" "Wo kya hai na Ronnie Bhai wo jaldi mein thi isliye nikal gayi" says Sunny. "Arey fir tu yahan kya kar raha hai?" Sunny's answer makes Ronnie to realize that instead of being here, Sunny should go to her. "Oh ji main jaane wala tha par Ananya ne kaha wo abhi bus kisi se milne ja rahi hai, ussey meri zarurat nahi hogi." Sunny's answer makes everyone to wonder.

"Khalid main nahi chahta ki aen moke par koi bhi gadbad ho, isliye maine socha..." the knock at the door forbids Kabeer to complete the line. "Sir main ye chip lekar aaya hoon jo apne kaha tha Manav Sir se laane ke liye laane ke liye" says the peon. "Theek hai ek kaam karo ye Ananya ma'am ko de do aur unse kaho ki wo check kar de" orders Khalid. "Par Ananya ma'am to nahi hain!" As soon as Kabeer listens this line, he raises his head, then turning to address the peon, he says "nahi hai? Kahan gayi hai?" Sitting there Khalid gauges Kabeer's irritation and anger in his voice. "Wo kisi kaam se bahar gayi hain. Kafi pareshan lag rahi theen." saying this the peon leaves. Turning his hand into a fist he says "Main chalta hoon Khalid" and leaves the cabin in anger. He calls his stinger Lakshman. "Hello Lakshman mujhe janna hai Miss Kashyap aur uska stinger Teenu kahan hai" "Theek hai Sir, batata hoon abhi thodi der mei" ending the call he starts swinging his chair out of frustration. Getting up he goes to Trisha and asks her about Ananya. "Sir mujhe achi tarah se nahi pata. Par Sunny bhi nahi gaya uske saath. Mujhe uski bohot chinta ho rahi hai."


Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Nice update!
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awsome dear.
amazing update.
ananya was so clear with her feelings.
her lettr was really beautiful in words.
it will be really excting to see how kabir reacts on this.
mind blowing part.
update nxt part soon and pm me too.

one more request...
can u please make an index on page 1 and also mention the running chaptr in title??
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
@krazykaju thank you so much. Alright will PM you. 😊 Index, I'll try to do that. I don't think I would be able to give direct links, as I am new in using these stuffs, I lack in knowledge about many facilities of india-forums 😒 But will definitely try.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Ananya's in trouble..
Sunny k begair chali gayeee..
Awesome btw
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome! Completely flawless! ;)
Thanks a lot for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@xxSomeonesLuvxx Thank you sooo much. No problem about the PM. I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Darling why didn't you pm?
I didn't know you updated
just was going through forum and thought i should check your story if you updated
by saying (last comment) know her i meant personally or something
anyways coming to the update,
ananya was so good and clear
laxman is gonna be made her personal bodyguard soon i suppose
update soon
do pm me this time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@pd786 hey I am really sorry but I didn't PM anyone this time 😭 but will surely do it now onwards. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
plz update next part.
waiting. 😊

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