Kabeer and Ananya ~ The First Meeting (COMPLETED) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
hi
i like the way the story develop
so ananya is going for her interview and he r goal is to work for kkn and also to meet and work under her Kabir sharma
great one
the nervous the expression is apt

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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ronojoy_ria Thank you 😊 I am glad that you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 15:

Getting back to his cabin, he quickly collects the car key and other necessities and leaves to search Ananya. As he reaches his car and was about to open the door, his phone rings, looking at the screen and discovering that it's Lakshman's call, he quickly receives it and says "Kuch pata chala Miss Kashyap ka?" without giving him moment to say anything."Ji Sir unhe Mohan Brijesh ke addey ki aur jatey hue dekha gaya hai" informs Lakshman. "Unn dono ke paas kuch tha apni safety k liye?" asks Kabeer, praying under his breath that he gets a positive answer but on the other hand, fully sure that he'll get a negative reply."No Sir!" The audible release of breath was enough for Lakshman to give him the idea that how much angry Kabeer is right now."Theek hai. Main tumse baad mein baat karta hoon" saying this in a hurry, he ends the call.

Ananya reaches the place where Mohan Brijesh and his gang stay. Touching the brown brick, surrounding the place which is almost like any 'kidnappers ka adda', her heartbeat starts racing. "No I won't get scared! Itni door akar main haar nahi manne wali". As she was about to step into the place, someone covers her mouth with his hand from her behind. She tries to get out of the hold, but something stops her from doing so. She closes her eyes, feeling relaxed, she sighs.

Feeling that she is not trying to fight to get out of the hold, he removes his hand from her mouth. "Kabeer Sharma tumhe yahan nahi aana chahiye tha", the roaring voice of Mohan Brijesh catches their attention. Without turning to look at Kabeer, she declares "Main ander ja rahi hoon" and starts moving forth. Grabbing her by her hand, Kabeer turns back to hide behind a wall. She creases her brows out of failure to withstand. She tries hard to get out of his hold.

Soon reaching a safer place, bit far from the haveli Kabeer releases her hand and drags her in front of him. "Main..." as Ananya starts saying something, Kabeer puts his index finger on her lips and warns her, "Main yahan tumhari baatein sunne nahi aaya hoon, agar tumne mere khilaf jane ki koshish ki..." Ananya interrupts him by removing his finger from her lips, "to? to kya karenge aap?" Smiling he comes closer to her and whispers into her left ear, forcing her to hold her breath "tumhe saza dunga! Aur tumse baat karna band kar dunga", he looks deeply into his eyes. She whispers, but confidently "Aur aapko lagta hai mujhe isse koi farak padhega? Ya main apki baat manungi?""Farak bhi padhega aur baat bhi manogi!" he says, giving emphasis to each word, giving her time to consume each word, giving himself time to consume her each expression she gives after listening to his words.

Gaining back her equilibrium and clearing her mind, she says "Pehle hum yahan se to nikal jayein". Smiling, he sets her free. Turning back he pays his attention to the area, making strategies in his mind. "Waise Miss Kashyap apko kya aadat hai aise jagahon par jakar picnic manane ki?" he asks jokingly. Observing the place, still standing behind him Ananya says "Dekhiye aap mujhse faltu baatein mat kariye". Then she whispers to herself "ek to pehle hi main nervous hoon".Catching her each word, Kabeer smiles, fully aware that in case she catches him smiling at her, it could turn out to be a heated discussion. Walking ahead he says "Oh haan! Main tumse baat kar raha hoon iska matlab ye nahi ki maine tumhe maaf kar diya hai!" As soon as she hears this line, she gets nervous, reminding herself 'the punishment' thing still persists.
Edited by Sterolinelover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
hi
the up is really a gripping one
so kabir is worried for Ananya as she went for for a dangerous mission
but thank god before she could step inside kabir reached there and saved her
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Very good!
Excited to read more!
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
hi
the ups are getting interesting
so kabir and Ananay both tangled into an argue

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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
wowww...
amazing part.
kabir's punishment is really sweet. seems he have kind a special softness for her.
he is angry as well as worried.
it will be intresting to watch how they will escape and what will happen after that.
lovely part.
awsome.
thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice concept Dear
Read all parts in one goo
Plz update soon
Tysm for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Nice stort but I don't watch reporters so pls don't PM me fr it in future.
Hope u don't mind.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ -Sunkissed No problem! 😊

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