Kaya TS - Hide & Seek Part 2 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends... I'm back with a TS again...

Many of them have been missing MY OS/TS..

so here is one... this is dedicated to my lovely Krazykaju...


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Part 1
"Lagtha hai yahi hotel hai..." she said checking the address given by her temporary boss..

"Chal dear... lag ja kaam pe... you have to get the details of this murder mystery... I know people will think I'm crazy to be here alone for my honeymoon... par kuch jugaad karlenge... acha hua my boss couldn't make it up... warna unke saath honey couple jaise act karna tho was disgusting..." she thought as she proceeded towards Reception

"Hello... wo hum honeymoon pea aye hai... humrahe naam pe room booked hoga... Mr and Mrs Ali ke..." she said...

Reception looked at the lady in burka standing in front of her alone...

"Wo aapke husband kahan hai... Samaan wo service boy leke jaayega.. don't worry..." Receptionist said thinking her husband must be getting luggage...

"Nahi.. wo hum apne honeymoon pe akele aaye hai... Humari shaadi nahi hui... wo ladka bhag gaya..." she said sadly...

"What..." Receptionist was shocked... "Aap akele honeymoon pe kya karenge..." she asked

"Arrey hum wahi karenge jo baaki log honeymoon pe karthe hai..."

"Kya... Madam aap kya bol rahi hai..."

"Aapka problem kya hai... me yahan apne honeymoon pe aayi hun... Mujhe Manali bachpan se pasand hai... Abba se kaha tha me honeymoon pe Manali jaungi... Tho Abba ne room book kiye... Ab agar mere hone wale shohar shadi se bhaag gaye tho isme meri kya galthi... me kyun apna honeymoon karab karun??? Mujhe Manali ghomna hai... tho me aagayi..." She asked Receptionist irritatedly...

"No madam... humhe koi problem nahi hai... ye raha aapke room ke chabhi... room no 304..." Receptionist handed over the keys hurriedly... she did not want to get into argument with this mad lady...

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"Excuse me pretty lady, can I have my room keys pls..." Receptionist turned back to her desk when she heard a male voice call her...

"Your name sir..." She asked him politely...

"Mr Fernandes... George Fernandes..." He replied as his eyes followed the burka lady...

"Sir... your keys... room no 305..." She handed him the keys...

He entered the room and locked himself... He called a number...

"Haan I reached Manali... I'm in hotel room now... will go out in sometime...

Yes... don't worry... I'll take care..." he replied and disconnected the call...

He removed important stuff from his bag and arranged them neatly...

It's going to be a long vacation... he thought...

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Next day morning she came out of her room checking her mobile... At the same time even he came out of his room and bumped into her... She almost fell back but he was quick to hold her be her...

She felt the same sensation run through her spine... how is that possible... he cannot be here...

"His cologne seems familiar..." she muttered

"Her eyes... do I know them..." he thought loud...

"Sorry..." he said helping her stand straight...

"Its ok,... humne bhi aapko dekha nahi..." she replied...

"Aap yahan akeli aayi hai..." he asked

"Haan wo hum apne honey... humara matlab Manali ghomne aaye hai..."

"Ok... by the way I'm George Fernandes..." he said bringing his hand forward...

"Hum Shabnam... She shoke his hand..." His hand was very cold... it made her shudder...

"Why do I get the same feeling..." she thought...

"Even I'm alone here... So I hope you don't mind accompanying you..." he asked her...

"Not at all... even I'll be bored alone..." she said...

She had to explore the place before investigating...

"Ok then lets go... "

"One min I'll be back..." he said as he rushed to his room...

He picked the sharp knife and hid it inside his pocket before joining her back ... both left the hotel to go around beautiful place called Manali...

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Was Danger following her... to know more pls wait for next update...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was pretty amazing!! I love your writing style. Im sorry reading this in process of my studies so my apologies for such a small comment. Just letting you know it great :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrInCeSs_dIVa

That was pretty amazing!! I love your writing style. Im sorry reading this in process of my studies so my apologies for such a small comment. Just letting you know it great :)



That's fine.. Studies come first... Keep reading my stories when time permits...

but only when u have free time...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one. Is the other person Kabir?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow I am second
Loved the update
Now whose who?
Shabnum and Mr. Fernandes ???
Pocket knife kyun?
I hope she is safe
Update soon
Pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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New ts... Wow...
Nc start...
Hm so ananya hiding its id nd othr.person mst be kabir..
He also hide his id...
Interesting...
Loved to read next part...
Update soon...
Nd ty for p.m me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic..the other person might be kabir. Right? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my god...
my romance queen turned a thriller story writer. itna suspense. its awsome.

waiting for next part eagerly.
update soon. plz

keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thry r must be kaya.wow nice concept.keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing story...hope shabnam is safe

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