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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmyap03



Riya Darling... abhi tak neend me ho kya... yahan pe Kabir ne kuch nahi kiya... wo SS wala Kabir tha... Yahan ope abhi Kabir ki entry hui nahi hai...

Nahi actually SS ki comment hai...galati se yaha post kardi😕😆
Maine edit kardi...😳
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks all for lovely comments... as many guessed it was Kaya... well here comes the second and last part of this story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Hey both roamed around Manali, all through this journey they felt they knew each other very well...

Was there something between them...

"No I love him" she thought...

"How can I think of anyone else than her... She is my life..." he tried to convince himself...

Yet they were not able to understand the spark between them...

That night he felt some shadow move near his room window...

Does anyone know I'm here he thought...

The torch light passed his room and went towards to garden area...

He immediately followed the person going outside...

"Is this the person I'm looking for..." he thought as he slowly followed...

The person was wearing black jacket and a hat, so he couldn't see his face...

The person tried to open a room lock ... He saw the room no... its 310...

He knew a painter and his wife were staying in that room... So this person is here to kill that couple he thought... without wasting a second he jumped on the person and held him tightly from back...

Why is his body so soft he thought but the next moment he knew the reason..

The person was not him but her...

Same eyes... Shabnam...

He removed her mask immediately... and was shocked to see...

"Ananya tum..."

"Kabir sir aap..."

Both were shocked beyond limits...

"Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..."

She did not answer...

Miss Kashyap.. I asked you something..." he gritted his teeth...

"Wo me ... I came to work on story based on the murders that are happening in Manali Sir..."

"What... hmmm how does Manav get to know the same lead as me... even I have come for the same story..." he thought...

"Aur tum yahan kya kar rahi ho..." he asked seeing her near other room

"Wo.. Sir can we go that side... I don't want to discuss here..." She said pulling him to garden area...

They both sat on the chair in garden...

"Tho Miss Kashyap... you have not answered my qn yet... what were you doing near that room... I knw the couple staying there... Husband is a painter right..."

"Yes sir, but have you met his wife..."

"No, well I'm not very interested in meeting anybody's wife..." he said making face...

"Wahi tho sir, no one has met his wife... he has booked honeymoon suite, yet even receptionist has not seen his wife... Even if he has to go out he goes alone, but the strange part is while ordering for room service he mentions it for 2... That's why I suspected something to be wrong and was trying to sneak in..."

Kabir was amazed... This lady has a spark... he thought...

"Ok Miss Kashyap... You can go back to Mumbai now... as I'm working on this story let me continue... we don't need two ppl from KKN on this story... you can pack your bags and leave..."

"But sir, I have found put so many points..."

"I know Miss Kashyap... but don't forget you are just a junior reporter... you will not be able to think or see what I as an editor in chief can see..." he said with no emotions in his face...

Ananya was hurt... but Kabir had to do this... he knew murderer targeted young ladies who came on their honeymoon and he could not risk her life...

She stood up from there and went away without even looking at him...

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Kabir did some more search on all these points and zeroed up that the painter can be the main suspect...

He called his inspector friend to search the room...

They found out that Painter's wife had cheated him on their honeymoon... in the rage he killed her...

But he had become psychopath after that and had started killing young ladies who came on their honeymoon...

Kabir went to Ananya's room to let her know the final thing... but he couldn't find her...

"Did she leave already" he thought... He called manager of the hotel to get her room opened...

All her things were still thr...

Where is this girl he thought...

One room service staff came running to manager and said.. "Sir wo ek ladki bar counter me hungama kar rahi hai ..."

Its her... "ye ladki bar counter me kya kar rahi hai..." Kabir rushed to Bar section...

The sight he saw made him hold the chair for balance...
Ananya was standing on the table with full bottle in her hand... Half of the content inside was empty...

"Apne aapko samajtha kya hai... editor in chief.. my foot... Me bhi banungi.. editor in chief... aur usse dhakka maarke barhar nikalungi...

Mahi dhakka nahi marungi... wo tho mere idol hai...
Idol... kiska idol... wo tho khadoos hai... ek dum hitler..." she was talking non stop...

"Ananya come down.. chalo room me chalo..." he tried to make her get down...

"Aap aa gaye... how sweet... Mujhhe utake le chalo na..." she said making baby face...

Kabir smiled and took her in his arms... she held his neck for support and stared at his face...

"Aap jaanthe ho... mujhe na.. aap boht pasand ho... aap Einstein.. nahi aap hitler ho... nahi aap hitler nahi ho... aap wo..."

"Ananya your room is here... go and sleep" he said reaching near her room...

"Nahi me nahi jaungi... me kyun jaun... ye lead aapko meine di... maine aapko bataya uss painter ke bare me... aur sara credit aap legaye..this is not fair... but everything is fair in love and war... aap mujhe hamesha daanthe rehethe ho.. mujhe rona aatha hai... ye hitlergiri nahi chaligi nahi chalegi nahi chalegi... ye atyachar nahi chalegi nahi chalegi nahi chalegi... kya me aapko pasand nahi..." she asked with her hands still around his neck.. pulling him closer...

"No Ananya... I like you he said caressing her cheek..." he was lost in her innocence... smile formed in her face listening to that...

"Now u go and sleep..."

"Sir aap bhi aaona.." she said pulling him...

"Nahi Miss Kashyap... Me teek hun.. u sleep..." he said taking her in his arms again... He made her sleep on the bed and tucked her with blanket...

"Good nite dear..". he whispered and kissed her forehead... Ananya was already in deep sleep to notice this...
Edited by sowmyap03 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Wow!! too good!!
Keep it going!!

Thanks!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha🤣...
Nashe ki haalat main Anu kabir ko gaaliya deti chali gayi...
Hitler😆
It was sooo cute!!!!!
Kabir is protective isn't he...for Ananya?😳
Write more...it was awesome se kahi upar!!!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akyabiggestfan

Hahaha🤣...

Nashe ki haalat main Anu kabir ko gaaliya deti chali gayi...
Hitler😆
It was sooo cute!!!!!
Kabir is protective isn't he...for Ananya?😳
Write more...it was awesome se kahi upar!!!👏




aaise hi tho gaali nahi de sakthi na.. tho nashe me dedi... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
loved it, amaxing story, but can u please do an English translation when you write in hindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
loved the drunk act xD

nahi chalegi nahi chalegi . haha morcha mahila
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
amazing
beautiful
cute
sweet
fabulous
fantanstic
awsome.
aur koi adjectives atey ho to wo bhi count kr lena.
this update was really really amazing and cute.
ananya ne kya sunaya hai kabir ko. dil ki puri bhadas nikal li. but even in the drunken state she was not ready to NIKALOFY HER KABIR SIR.
so lovely and full of romance part.
kabir cares for her so much.
awsome.
thank you for pm
keep smiling. 😛
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Anjinie

loved it, amaxing story, but can u please do an English translation when you write in hindi



sure.. from next story will do that... 😊

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