* Return Of Heart * pt-3pg4...am 'ere finally:P - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

54

Views

4.8k

Users

12

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: gungun

AD kya baat hai yaar fatte hi chak te . Its just awesome and as i already saud sufi acally ultra sufi writting style and I loved the way u portrayed Ashi's and Yuvi's feelings and thing I liked the most is Ashi' note too good yaar

thanks a lot😊...am sooo happy that you liked it😛😃

adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey Bhaggu!!! I loved this part!!! Too good man!!! It was totally rocking!!! Continue soon!!! 👏

thanks a bunch for liking it😳😃😊...yeah i'll cont soon😛

adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: priyachaku_18

cont!!! cont!!! cont!!! fasst!! fast!! fast!! fast!! luvd it luvd it luvd it dis part is brilliant i enjoyd evry bit f it 🤗🤗

but its OK…even am NOT BOTHERING to give you mine!!!( omggggg🤣 2 prfct 🤣tooooo gud yaar 👏 itz xcellent 👏 n u dont lack newhere!! 😛 jst make dem meet asap🤗🤗n dont change ur rytin styl at alllllll🤗🤗🤗 luuuv uuu ad 😳 n luuuv dis part as well 😳

thanks a tonne for liking it...🤗🤗🤗and deff i'll update it soon😃

Edited by adchk - 17 years ago
adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#44

and guys sorry for those pms i hope they dint bugged you all...i felt to let you all know about the update because i was doing it after taking soo much time so may be you wont remember it.

FollowYourHeart thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#45

OH MY GOOOOOOOD......☺️☺️☺️

AD AD AD AD this third part is a killllerrrrrrrrrrrr...☺️...shucks i loveeeeeeeeeee it i soooooooooooooooooo sooooooooooo lovee it every aspect of it is juuuuuuuuust PERFEEEEEEEEEECT....☺️☺️

i read the second and the third parts together right now and i must say you have expressed ay ka feelings soooooo well and cuaght them spot onnnnnnn i mean i soo know they would have reacted in exact that same mannerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr as u have writtennnnnnn..☺️☺️..perfect perfect perfect

but the third part is a show stealerrrrrrrrrrr shucks i can so visualize both ay sitting at diffrent places but their thought conjoined at one epicenter...they themselves and every moment of their beautyful past...☺️☺️...they always relish to remember all those fights and prank and leg pullings because they know that thos were yet another expression of the confusion called loveeee...☺️☺️...

and shucks man i just knewwwwwwwwwwwwwww it i knewwwwwwwwwwwwwww it that ashi wouldn't let go off so easily this timeeeeeeeeeee i mean this gurl knows that god gives such golden opportunities rarely and she wouldn't have missed it for nothing at all i sooooooo knew it ashi kuch tohbhi karegi...you really caged her character so well by maknig her go back and leave a note to mariaaa....and awwwwwwww i just loveeeeeeeeeeee this female shes such a big star but ek celeb hone ka one percent proud nahi hai usmain shes soooo humble so kind and always treats anyone and everyone equvialent to her own staturee she was sooo cute with mariaaaaaaaaa just loved the way she signed that autograph...from your newest frnd anvesha...☺️☺️...shucks kudoooooooooooos to her for being so down to earth so so magnanemous its this humilit that makes her win hearts wherever she goes and yeah i know she would have remembere mp by hearing that nameeeee she would have felt happy to meet another maria coz she once again reminded her of a frnd who might not be there with her in physical being but wld always reside in her hrt...☺️☺️...tooooo goood tooo tooo good no one can beat her in frndship..👏

and oh my god that letterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr☺️ oh my god oh my gooooooooooood i have now ords to say how rocking that waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas☺️ you have written it so well that along with yuvi when iw as reading it even ic ould hear ashi actually spekaing thoseee words could see yuvi ka expression with every single word of the letter its such an engrossing moment AD and its written with such brilliant perfectionnnnnnnn...its so like ashiiiiiiiiiiiiii i mean i can sooooooooooooooo feeeeeeeel yuvi smiling in gleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa when he reads even i am NOT BOTHERING to give you my numberrrrrr...🤣...oh shes just tooooo much too too much🤣...and yuvi wld be like laughing so hardly thinking ki I KNEW IT🤣🤣🤣 i soo knew it ashi would say JUST THAT...🤣

its amazing to see how she removed the gap which had crept in between them in all these years so easily with just soe strokes of pen i mean yeah even she would have felt horrible to meet him in that manner so fomrally he was her psycho after all and she would never be able to live knowing the fact that there hung a big void in between them and they were actually feleing awkward meeting each other after ages so she rectified that turant coz she knew this was one person who knew her inside out and no matter if they don't meet for ages again but this solace mus be there that nothing can come in between them even if they meet after an eternity they wld hit it off right from the same point where they left.. ☺️..thats been the strength of their relationship through and through and ashi did not want that strength to diminish so she mended the wrong instantly impulsively and for good she knew even yuvi wld get back to his normal self after he read that letter she knew at the other side of the letter she wld once again find her psychooo...☺️☺️☺️

and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah when the heart wants something desperatelyyyyyyyyyyyy toh the whole kayanaaat gets in the koshish of getting that thing for the heart...☺️☺️...i know its an om shanti om dialouge but actually its a line form the fmaous book Alchemist and i really believe in this line if u really really want smething if something is really your drem and if u hav the gutts to follow it bhaggu wld go out of his way to help u out..and tha was what happening with yuvi his going to india his place of meeting being at indore and ashi ka letetr telling him only one thing that she lives in indore it was all omens laid down by god and all yuvi had to do was read its implications when he managed to see throught hte mist his ashiw ould waiting for himw ith open arms...☺️☺️☺️

addddddddddddddddddd i just totally loooooooooved it seriouslyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy am crazy over this part you are a faaaaaaaaaaaaaaabulous writerrrrrrrrr and i really love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for writing this fic and giving us such awesome ay momentsssss..☺️🤗 🤗🤗🤗..plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon plzzzzzz🤗🤗

and your pms can never bug us reeeeeeee infact i wana thank you for sending me that atleast i got to know u updated i had even missed upon the second part thaanx to you am updated with this rocking ficcy at last..🤗

contnue sooooooooooooooooooon🤗🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 17 years ago
devilz_here thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#46

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAddddddddddddddddddddddd.... i dunno wat to say.. m nearly speechless...... i so so sooooooo loved this part. it;s the best among the 3 parts...n the bestesht part was ashi's letter... defffffffo defffffffffffffooo ashi wud hav written exactly the same. after all she is her psycho's wacko ryt??? if she'll not bug him then who'll play dat part? but awesummm update ad... u hav portayed each n every part perfectly. n m really excited to know yuvi will be going to india... plz addd yuvi ko jaldi se uski wacko tak pohcha dena. hope to see them meeting again soon in india... in indore... 😳 rocking part ad.
n nooooooo u're PM havn't bugged us at all.. atleast we came to know dat u hav updated otherwise we get busy at our home... Magic........😳 n yeah u also join us naaaa at magic... its reallyyyyyyyyy a beautiful heaven for all ashi-yuvi fans... u'll hav a blast over there. so do check it out.

n yeah hope to see another update real soonnnnnnnnn... till then tadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... take care.. 😊 n continue bahot jaldi se... 😛

Edited by devilz_here - 17 years ago
adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#47

smriti you've analysed the part so well😳thank you soooo much for liking it🤗🤗🤗

and sidra am soo glad that you liked it😳...thanks a tonne🤗🤗🤗and yup i joined the magic,and am really happy being with you all there🤗

devilz_here thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#48
adddd u can call dat analysis of smritooo but aktually its her hyperness. she bcums so hyper at times dat she can write 100 pages non-stop on ashi-yuvi+ the new member tammyyyyyyyyyy 😳 uske hyperness the meter can rise above 100000000000 degreeeeeeeeeessss. hypercity express.... 😆

yeah i saw ur posts in ayls-magic. gud to see u there. n lemme remind u we r waiting for another update. 😉
adchk thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#49

lol sidra i was'nt knowing that about smriti😆in that case i love her hyperness😆😳....she actually you all are soo attached with ay and thats what create magic...!!!😳😳😳yeah sure i'll update soon😛

lubnahl thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#50
wooow ad i love ur fic !! 😛
awesum part .... specially the letter thing 😳 😳
do cont soon ...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".