* Return Of Heart * pt-3pg4...am 'ere finally:P

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Return Of Heart

Ay

Characters-same as that in the show?new characters would be introduced in the part itself.

Part-1

Catching hold the t-shirt of a young boy and pulling him a bit back?says the lady cum older girl-

"caught you!!!?and now where do you think you are going to have these??

"inside!"-saying so the yong boy set his collar free from the grip and managed to run inside the buliding allowing the older girl to follow him?

?come back you moron,you wont have them again?.come back I say ?we?ve to go?-the older girl said while chasing the li?ll boy running infront of him just a few steps ahead?

The boy quicked his pace and speeded as he heard the voice coming very sharply from his back?he passed by many people and wide streched corridors? he finally bursted inside a big spacious cabin?

He found a man cum older boy of around mid twenty sitting with his head half hiddedn working on his laptop?

?dude please help me,she is after me!?-said the young boy taking deep breaths making up for the spent oxygen.

The older boy lifted his head up seeing a young boy standing infront of his table,He quickly got up from his place and went near to the boy?

?dude who are you and who?s behind you and are you an indian??-enquired the older boy

?And so are you!(says joyfully)?ummm nothing of that sort you thinking, my friend is after me- she?s not letting me to have these(in a complaining tone)?taking out the packet full of chocolates and different toffees from his pocket making it massless.

The older boy smiled with the kind of answer he got from the young boy,who was looking his cholotates with the eyes full of innocence and cuteness.

?dude now please help STAR,he is in need of your help?

The older boy was taken aback by hearing the similar kind of the way of speech?.he was examining the young boy and was ready to make some conclusions, when the young boy added further.

?CHAMP- my friend, could be hear in any moment,please help me? I desperately want to eat these chocolates?

?oh ok?.you sit here and without wasting any more time have them?-says the older boy making the young boy comfortably sit on the couch,and than he picked his phone placed at the right most corner of his table covered with files and lots of papers .

Meanwhile the lady cum older girl was scanning the spots in the building for the young boy?.she could not believe her eyes?a few minutes back the boy was right infront of her and just after a turn he was nowhere?as if he had vanished. She passed by the corridors? by now tension and worry had covered her face,finally she too took a turn and saw the receptioninst at the reception,making some entries.

?did you see a small young boy in this corridor??asks the older girl with a voice full of worry

the receptionist stared the figure standing infront of her ,and after a while she said in a half drooling tone?

?I-I know you!?

?thanks but now please tell me did you see a young boy here??-asked the older girl sounding impatient

Receptionsionist quickly answered seeing the rage of tension on the face of the girl?

?ya,he?s inside sir cabin(pointing out the way towards the door)but?? before she could add more the lady cum older girl went in the pointed direction,heading towards the cabin.

Receptionist simply took the phone in her hand,and pressed a no?

?What?! but I asked you not to??

before the older boy could say more he stopped hearing the loud voice coming behind him from the ajar door?

The lady come girl entered inside after her eyes fell on the young boy who was putting the bar inside his watery mouth?

The older boy saw the girl entering with a casual look but just after hearing the voice again he gave another look and this time his eyes widened as he saw the face of the girl?

?STAR!!!am not going to leave you!?

?M-A-S-I!?!?- the bar escaped out from the door of the mouth of young boy and fell down?

the older girl moved a step ahead to go near to the boy?when she took it back,hearing the word so familiar to her?

?WACKO!??

the older girl now turned a little and found the older boy looking towards her?A word simply came out her mouth after seeing the older boy

?PSHYCHO?!?

every thing seemed to have been frozen but the duo standing and looking at each other?.their eyes got fixed on each others face,and the surrounding became motionless.

This is my very first try of writing something like this. Please account me with the flaws and errors,about the likings and dislikings.... let me know the areas of improvement. Do make me aware whether or not it is worthy of writing,if not then should it be dithelled.

I?ll be waiting for your response.😊

AD.

Parts Posted So Far:

(index)

*Part-1(pg1)

*Part-2(pg2)

*Part-3(pg4)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wwwoooowww AD! gr8 starting! i mean u r a newbie... joined yesterday...just one post... dat too a fic...aate hi hungama started??? mindblowing... πŸ‘
n ur fic is really ossum...n i can make out STAR is really afraid of his masi... the chococlate cums out of his mouth on seeing her! haahaaπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† n ashi-yuvi hav met after a long time i guess... so m really curious to know wat happens next 😳 😳 😳 do continue asap n yeah ur fic is really worthy so do write the next part... i'll b w8ing!!!
BTW m sidra... n may i know ur gud name? 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMGG anothr ay fic!!! and &nb sp; O   ;   ;M &nbs p; G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat d heck was dat?!!!!!!!!!! maaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!! dis is otally outta world!!!! awwwwwsom awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsom outstanding start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ˜› WOOWWW WOOWW WWWOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamaaazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! πŸ‘ cool maaan!!!! cont soooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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and yee!! welcome 2 IF!!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜› hav loadsa fun here!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey AD welcome to IF and more so RF πŸ˜ƒ...thats a strange username that u have though πŸ˜•

neway I dont really read fics .....but since I saw the topic name n read " AY" in it n I noticed that its been written by some new member I thought I should welcome her 😳.....so thats why I am in here πŸ˜ƒ

Hope u have a gr8 time here in RF.....n I am sure ur fic must be really good too😳....wont promise but will try to read it😳.......but I am sure all the other numerous AY fans out here will surely read it n love it too πŸ˜ƒ

Hoping to see u arnd more often πŸ˜›

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi AD welcome to Rf the most rocking forum in IF .I think you are an ayian so m I . Read ur fic damn good start πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ sufi writing skills πŸ‘ will be waiting for next part hope u will post soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey AD...welcome to RFπŸ€—πŸ€— And i am soo glad to meet yet another AY fan 😳 😳 Hope u have a blast down here...and do keep posting! 😳

Oh and btw... read the ficccccccc...it seems awesomeeeeeeeeee...very interesting and i am dying to read further and aktually know the concept/plot of this ficcy...please continue soonn 😳 😳 would be waiting 😳

And btw...this is nitz here...also known as nappy 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey bhaggu! U aren't supposed to do that! NEVER EVER stop at an AY part. Even though I do it all the time. πŸ˜† I do it to torture my sweetus at RF, Why are you doing it????? TORTURE!!!!!! πŸ˜† Love it! Continue soon! πŸ˜›


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ad

welcome to rf must say its wiered to see a newby starting off straight away wid a ficcy πŸ˜†

but i must congratulate u on ur boldness and i must say its a grt start 😳 😳 and remember nothing related to ay can be abandoned becoz it always will be special to us 😳 😳

ay both are alays so adorable with kids 😳 😳 and u hav given a very nice background setting and all 😳 😳 wld definatly love to see loads of romance in the coming parts between the most sizzling couple 😳 😳

and i really loved your titleeeee its cuteeeee 😳

well ad way to go we all definatly wld love to read aage and we al wld also like to know u better its such a wonderful feeling to see new people who r smitten by ay 😳 😳 welcome to rf the best place on if coz it has churajiee ay lovers 😳 😳

smriti
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ad!!A hearty welcome from one Ay fan to the other!!!! πŸ˜† Your fic was Gr888!n u will have to cont it...n that too ASAP!!Just loved readin it!!!Cont soon!!Enjoy urself!!
Luv
Sur

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