* Return Of Heart * pt-3pg4...am 'ere finally:P - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello ad!!!!!! must sayy m veryy veryy pleasd 2 read ur fic it ws a unique strtin n i really agree vid komz dat u shud neva stop at ay u kno v all r junglee thirsty hungry mad insane krazzy ppl whooooooooo luuuuuuv ay more dan nethin else afta readin dis part i guess dey r not n india i hope u cum her verry often n cont ur ficcy veryy veryy soon ohh n btw welcum welcum 2 rf all ay fans all most velcum in dis wrdrful heaven called rf cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lot to all for your heart touching comments...here's the second part...though it's not upt the mark but i would like to know your views and opinions on it...

Part-2

"Pshycho!?"

"wacko?!"

both of them moved towards each other…their eyes was glued on each others face…it was as if they couldn't believe their own eyes standing infront of each other.

"ANVESHA"

"YUVRAJ"

these were the two names going side by side in their minds respectively…they moved further close to each other…Uv raised his arms to hug and Aashi her arm for the shake at the same time….they simultaneously did the same thing but Uv finally caught the upcoming hand of Aashi...they placed their free hands on the hand in contact…yet reassuring themselves that it was no figment or their imagination,It was actually them…which made them even more excited…their lips parted but returned to its mean position….the only thing coming out from their ajar lips was their names…

"AASHI!"

"UV"

Seeing what the older boy and girl were doing and after hearing their names from each other for so many times the li'll boy who's presence wasn't recognized any further was confussed,he saw them with the widened eye,he couldn't understand what was going on but the names… he interuppted the chanting of the names of each other by the older boy and girl…

"How come you both know each other!???"

the process of saying each others name stopped and connected Uv and Aashi back to the world they actually belongs to…

they made out what was making them look mad in the eyes of the young boy…they left each others hand at once…

Uv pushed his voice out gulping his excitement inside and asked…

"so how are you?"

"fine…I mean great!"-said Aashi doing same what Uv did and asked…

"And you?what have you being doing…?"

"am also fine…I mean good…i…I am a small bussiness man now and I own this company here"siad Uv rotating his eye ball looking to his own cabin and then returning his eyes back at Aashi…

Aashi opened her mouth to say but Star beated her in speaking first…

"You mean this dev company actually belongs to you and also all the brands launched by it?!"

"hey you know them?!"-asked Uv a bit surprised thinking a li'll boy know all this stuff…

"well it's not only Star! every one here in LONDON does….!with you being so popular here… but hardly anyone know you in person"

Uv looked startled hearing that…

"well I think by now you might have guessed who he is….He's Tia-Ranveers son."-saidAashi

Uv turned his face towards Star giving him another look…

"Both Tia and Ranveer got married!"

"Oh yes! that's why Star is here! and…and you know mom and dad also?"-asked Star looking equally amazed

Aashi gave a look to Star wanting him to stop…Uv had a smile while talking to Star and turned his face to Aashi back who too faced him back…

"and you here?"-asked Uv with the same smile…on his face.

"I had a match here…"-answered Aashi she further openedhe mouth to add more but agin Star intervened…

"and we are going back today!"

It was as if something pinched deep inside in Uv and his smiling face turned with a sad kind of expression…Same was with Aashi she too now didn't liked the thing of her going back…

A girl with white hairs streched down her soilders moved inside the cabin and informed…

"Sir everything is set…all are waiting for you in the meeting room"

Uv saw Aashi and Star and then turned towards the girl standing in the way to scott him out of the cabin…

"ummm Sue do one thing…"

Uv was yet to complete his sentence when Aashi said in between cutting him…

"Uv I think you should go and we tooo should leave otherwise we'll miss our flight"

with a very heavy heart Aashi placed her hand in front of Uv…

Uv dint had words to say but to hold the outstreched hand of Aashi for the shake calling off this moment which he deep own wanted to resist yet he took it…

"bye"-said Aashi feeling very low yet sounding normal

Uv replied with the same tone…both of them took their hands back feeling the last touch of their fingers…

Aashi took Star's hand in hers and started to walk out of the cabin followed by Uv and the same girl with white hairs…

They saw each other till last view they can have while walking past to each other in opposite directions….Aashi was walking straight back to the etrance when she stoped seeing the receptioninst seeing her with the same drooling look…

AD.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey BHaggguuuu!!!Ad it was totally amazing!!!This is just the reaction which ashi n uv cud have had wen they meet after such a long time!!n star in tia n rannys son???awwww..........so cute!!!!Thats really very weet!!!N ashis leavin that very day??Roko!!Use plz rok lo!!!!POor uv n she will b heart broken at being separated once again!!!!All in all this chapter was tooo gud!!But u have to cont soon k...no relaxin now..Cont soooooonnnnnnnnn im dyin to know wat is gonna happen next!!!
Luv
Sur
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OHHHHHHHHHH GOSHH...... AD!!!! aaaaaaamazingg!!!!!!!!! i'm actually feeling hurt u write totally awsommmmmm!!!!!! cont soooon hun!!!!!! 😛 btw wt's yo actual name hun?
Edited by usharafuddin - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey !!! welcum here [:D) 😛
nice fic!! do continue soon waitin for more 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is awesum part AD!😳😳 I loved the reaction you showed of AY...and the way they were lost in each otherr😳😳 And star seems soo cute...well uski masi ka kuch toh asar aayega naa😆😳 But seriously this part is soo awesome... but why and how all this happened... like yuvi in london and them getting seperated...dying to read moreeee to get these answers ...and yaaaaaaaa ashi ko bring bk...abhi toh woh mila... phir se they can't get seperated😭 dying for more partt...cont. soonnn😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilz_here

hey wwwoooowww AD! gr8 starting! i mean u r a newbie... joined yesterday...just one post... dat too a fic...aate hi hungama started??? mindblowing... 👏
n ur fic is really ossum...n i can make out STAR is really afraid of his masi... the chococlate cums out of his mouth on seeing her! haahaa😆 😆 😆 n ashi-yuvi hav met after a long time i guess... so m really curious to know wat happens next 😳 😳 😳 do continue asap n yeah ur fic is really worthy so do write the next part... i'll b w8ing!!!
BTW m sidra... n may i know ur gud name? 😊

Thank you so much Sidra...am AD😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: usharafuddin

OMGG anothr ay fic!!! and OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wat d heck was dat?!!!!!!!!!! maaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!! dis is otally outta world!!!! awwwwwsom awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsom outstanding start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   ; WOOWWW WOOWW WWWOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamaaazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; cool maaan!!!! cont soooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Originally posted by: usharafuddin

OHHHHHHHHHH GOSHH...... AD!!!! aaaaaaamazingg!!!!!!!!! i'm actually feeling hurt u write totally awsommmmmm!!!!!! cont soooon hun!!!!!! btw wt's yo actual name hun?



thanks a lot usharafuddin(sorry but dont know your name)for both the comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

Hey AD welcome to IF and more so RF 😃...thats a strange username that u have though 😕

neway I dont really read fics .....but since I saw the topic name n read " AY" in it n I noticed that its been written by some new member I thought I should welcome her 😳.....so thats why I am in here 😃

Hope u have a gr8 time here in RF.....n I am sure ur fic must be really good too😳....wont promise but will try to read it😳.......but I am sure all the other numerous AY fans out here will surely read it n love it too 😃

Hoping to see u arnd more often 😛

Thanks i'll be glad to read your comments too here😊...am Ad it's pronounced the way you pronounce the word 'add'.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: gungun

Hi AD welcome to Rf the most rocking forum in IF .I think you are an ayian so m I . Read ur fic damn good start 👏 👏 👏 sufi writing skills 👏 will be waiting for next part hope u will post soon

hi...thanks a lot,i've posted the 2nd part and would be waiting to know your views on it😊

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