THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 10

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Posted: 20 years ago
#91
ashi yuvi ko kyaa bataane waali hain !!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#92

"M.P.mujhe lagta hai ki--"

"Ki hume Yuvi ko sab sach bata dena chahiye...."

"Haan...."

"Come on Maate....stop being Satyavadi Harishchandrika...."

"Par..."

"Aur Ashi ne kaha hai na ki vo use sab bata degi...."

"Hey watch it dude!!!"someone sweared loudly as Yuvi bumped into him.

"Sorry...."

He didnt know where he was going....it seemed as if he had lost his way...he had hated to spy on her friends like this....but he had no choice...he had wanted to leave....but something...something...had made him stay...and then....the sound of his name made him stop.....why...he thought....what was it that they were talking about?wats she hiding from me??A fierce battle was raging in his head....

Come on man...she is my girlfriend....

But so wat....that doesnt mean that you owe her....she can live her own life cant she...?

But me...wat is it that she doesnt want me to know....

Come on...u know her....she's the most straightforward girl you've ever met....

But she never hides anything from me....never...

Well then...u got the answer....if its anything important she'll tell u....

But why.....?

Besides....u know how she is.....she tells u the truth no matter how hard it is for u to accept.....

But wat is it that she doesnt want me to know.....she tells me everything...

Dude...that's wat...then she wont hide anything from you....she'll tell u wen its time....

Am I really going too hard on her....?

Maybe you are dude....give her a break.....leave her alone for sometime....

"Maybe you are right!!"he said to himself aloud.That's it....maybe she wants more time....maybe she wants some time to be alone....

He laughed out loud....Ashi...sweetheart...you are so stupid.....you could have told me....I would've understood...he returned to his room a smile on his face.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#93
liked this part mads......it was more like should I listen to my heart or my mind......and eventually he listens to his heart.......and that is what I love abt him 😳 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#94
good continuation please dont give us fillers
move with the story yaar
its going great the concept and story
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Posted: 20 years ago
#95

Sometime later in Ashi's Room:

"Hi guys...."said Ashi brightly to M.P. and Vrinda,however her smile faltering at the looks on their faces "Hey Bhaggu!!Ab kaunsa bhuchaal aaya??"she asked impatiently.

"Yuvi naam ka...."

"WHAT??"

"Haan Ashi.....Yuvi yahaan thodi der pehle aaya tha...he wanted to know where u had gone...."said M.P.

"Phir...."asked Ashi nervously."What did you tell him?"

"Maine usko kuch nahi bataaya I swear man....par maate ne use almost bata diya ki tum--"

"Nahi Ashi....maine us--"argued Vrinda.

"And wat did he say...."cut in Ashi in the same nervous tone.

"Nahi Ashi maine use kuch nahi bataaya...."continued Vrinda now giving a sour look to M.P."Maine sab sambhal liya....in fact I got him convinced dat you had gone out with ur mom....like u had told us to tell.....M.P.hi bhool gayi...."

"Haan....its not ur talent ki tumne use convince kar liya.....vo Yuvi toh pehle se hi dumb hai....."

"M.P.!!!I'm asking you something....wat did he say?"asked Ashi now standing up from her bed.

"Kuch nahi....mereko pata tha ki vo use believe karega......usne believe kar liya....aur chala gaya...simple...."

"Haan...and Ashi he's told you to call him....remember M.P.?"

"Haan....haan...."

"Ashi--"Vrinda said.

"No Vrinde....."said Ashi firmly.

"Par meri baat toh suno....he'll get hurt Ashi....."

"Vrinde....kya mujhe yeh nahi pata?I know him better than you do......par not now.....agar maine use abhi bataa diya toh....."she said a thoughtful expression on her face.

"Toh kya hoga Ashi....try toh karo...."

"No Vrinde.....first I need to sort out everything.....phir baad mein....I'll tell him.......and ab please.....hum us baare mein aur baat na karein toh its better....please...."she pleaded both of them

"Ok Ashi...as you wish....par phirse ek baar soch lo...."

"Just cut it out Vrindeshwari....Ashi ne kaha na...she'll tell him later.....and its not ki vo usko kuch bataaegi hi nahi....."

"Haan Vrinde.....abhi kuch bataaya toh uska ego beech mein aaega....I know he'll be hurt when he knows....but I cant help it.....its for his own good...."

"Ok Ashi...lets change the subject....toh hume bataao...what happened?"

"About what?"

"You know what.....come on bolo...."

"Uhh...M.P.I'm very tired....abhi nahi please.....Good Night both of you!!!"and with that she fell fully clothed on her bed the covers on her face and went off to sleep within a few minutes.

Vrinda and M.P.went off to sleep a few minutes later....

In Yuvi's Room:

That's it!!!he thought....mujhe pata hai kya karna hai.....Ashi...tumhe shayad mujhse yeh baat kehte hue awkward lagta hoga....dont worry honey...I wont let u feel that.....agar tumhe time chahiye...then you'll get it.....I know exactly what to do.....

"Yuvi...kya kar rahe ho itni raat ko??Switch off the light and aake so jao......"said Nakul suddenly raising up from his bed and rubbing his eyes.

"Yeah right dude...tumhare saath?"

"Come on dude...be cool....I was just asking.....tumhari health toh thik hai na....."

"Of course Nakul....mujhe kya ho sakta hai...."

"Then switch off the light and go to sleep....us light ki wajah se...I cant sleep...."

"Haan....aur phir tumhe....meher ke dreams kaise aaenge...right?"said Yuvi winking.

"Haan...."said Nakul a misty eyed expression on his face.

"Oh No...Latty...meri baat suno....maine tumhe two time nahi kiya sweet heart....tum please jumb--I mean Mr. Jamwal ko mat bataana....."

Yuvi and Nakul exchanged a look and then both went to Sid's bed.

"Sid....Utho..."they said shaking him vigorously.

"Huh...uhhh....nahi latty vo mujhe sirf home work pooch rahi thi.....swear...."

"Siddy boy!!"said Nakul now throwing a glass of water on his face.

"Uhhh.....huh......oh.....um...."said Sid spluttering and gasping.Both Yuvi and Nakul rolled with laughter.

"Its not that funny..."said Sid sulking.

"Dont tell me dude.....ab vo tumhare dreams mein---tumhare---tum--"said Yuvi unable to control his laughter.

"Hamara Sid use itna pyaar karta hai....ki use ab nightmares aate hai..."said Nakul his face full of tears pf laughter.

"SHUT UP guys.....aisi koi baat nahi hai....uhh...tumhe bhi dreams aate hai....kyun Yuvi...kya tumhe Ashi ke dreams nahi aate...."

Suddenly Yuvi's smile had left his face."Good Night guys!!!"he said and went off to sleep.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#96
👏 going just fab!!!
will search for more words from the dictionary to vary my comments........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#97
gr8 going mads....cant wait for ur next part
nishi thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#98
well aakhir baat kyaa hain !!!!
whats ashi hiding from yuvi ! 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
#99
wats it ... you have created lot of suspense
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Posted: 20 years ago

Next Day:

"Hello Ashi....Hi....good Morning!"

"Oh Hi Yuvi....."Ashi's voice sounded sleepy as she gave a big yawn."Kya baat hai Yuvi....aaj itni jaldi call kiya....I mean we are meeting in R.D. sir's class right?"

"No Ashi.....main tumse abhi milna chahta hoon....right now.....can u meet me outside CCD....in 10 min...."

"Duh-huh Yuvi.....abhi toh main bed mein hoon....dont u think its too early....."Ashi complained yawning.

"No...abhi...."repeated Yuvi"Please...."Its for u....he thought desperately.

"Yuvi.....why do u have to say please....ok in ten minutes outside CCD....Bye...."

"Bye!"Yuvi was still in two minds......should I or should I not.......finally making up his mind he left for CCD.....

Outside CCD...

"Hey!!"said Ashi giving him a warm smile.

"Hi sweet heart....."said Yuvi giving her a good morning kiss.

"Toh...andar chale...."she said moving towards the door.

"No Ashi....wait here....."said Yuvi.And he turned her towards him and looked in her eyes and he knew he couldnt do it....he knew it was difficult.....but he had to......for her....

"Ashi....look.....I know wat you are thinking....."

"Well....right now I'm thinking abt going inside and having a cup of coffee...thats it!!you guessed it right....so now come on..."she said pulling his arm.

"Nahi Ashi...meri baat suno....I know you want some time...to think abt our relationship....."he said taking her hand.

"WHAT??Tum kya keh rahe ho Yuvi...."said Ashi suddenly nervous sqeezing his hand.

"Haan....Ashi I know you wud feel awkward to talk to me abt that....however close we may be.....I know that u thought I wouldnt understand......"he said cupping her face in his hands and gently moving his fingers over her cheeks...

"Right now I'm the one who's not understanding.....tum--"

"No Ashi....listen to me sweet heart...."he said placing his finger on her lips and moving closer to her....unable to control the powerful surge of attraction he felt wenever he was near her....."I know.......I can understand.........you are confused maybe........"

"Right now...yes I'm confused...."said Ashi and she sounded genuinely confused.

"Shhhhh!Let me finish.......I know my feelings strongly Ashi........I know that I want to spend my entire life with you.....but maybe u r not sure abt ur feelings....dont worry sweet heart....u can take all the time u want....I'll wait for my whole life....but dont do this Ashi.......dont do this just for making me happy.....just so that I wont get hurt......u know why...." he asked bringing her closer "coz ......coz......this hurts me more....."his eyes reflecting the pain that he felt in his heart.

"Yuvi--"

"Look Ashi.....I know its not easy.......but if that's the solution...then we have to do it.......of course....wenever you need me....I'll always be there for u.....remember that....as ur friend...."he said now standing so close as if to kiss her......but somehow managed to control himself.

"Yuvi....tum kya keh rahe ho....?"said Ashi now nervousness shaking her voice.She tried to hold his hand.

"Ashi.....I think we should break off for some time....."he said as he let go of her hand gently.

Even as he said this......he couldnt believe he said those words....he searched her eyes for her expression....but his own heart was filled with so much emotion...that he couldnt read her eyes.....his heart was screaming....telling him..... to hug her and kiss her and take her in his arms.......but for once....he didnt oblige his heart......he didnt want to force anything on her after all.....he left...leaving her standing all alone.....

Ashi.....unbearable to control her emotions.....but unwilling to go back to her room and face her friends stepped inside CCD.....wiping away the tears that had started falling from her eyes.

In CCD:

Krish showed her the pic on her cell."Isnt she beautiful?"he asked her with a smile.

"Uh--huh....."she replied smiling taking a sip from her drink.

"Anyways......I asked you yesterday....how did u come back?"

"Well....I replied....walking...."

"Shut up ok....dont kid me....."

"Hey Bhaggu!!"she replied laughing.

"I said SHUT UP!!"he roared."And didnt I tell you yesterday....that line doesnt suit you....."

"Duh-huh Krish!!"

"Neither does that one....."he replied complaining.

Edited by mads - 20 years ago

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