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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 9


At Tia-Ranveer's Home ---

Tia is in the kitchen....sad

T: Tia....Tia dont cry...agar Tia rone lago gi toh how will Tia solve this problem....oh god...what will Tia do now?? 😭 😕

Tia looks around the room....and starts pacing....she is totally stressed out

T:Oh God!!! so much stress...this is not good for Tia's skin...what will happen if Tia gets dark circles because of this 😆 ...and looks old 😆 ...Ranveer wont like Tia anymore than 😆 (Tia's Logic)...Oh God!!! Calm down Tia...u cant think about that now...think about the cake...oh no !! what will Tia do??...

After much pondering....Tia decides to give cake making one more go

T: (Tia wipes her tears)...yes..Tia will make one more cake for Ranveer ....Tia knows this is difficult...but Tia will do it....Tia can do anything for Ranveer and his happiness 😳

At the Office --

Aman comes in...and sees Ranveer....and can make out that Ranveer is feeling a bit down

A:Ranveer..kya hua...Aaj ke din tum upset kyu ho??

R: Aaj ke din matlab???

A: Ranveer ..aaj tumhara janam din hai na..btw Happy Bday!!!

R: Aman bana...aapko yaad tha ...ki aaj hamara janam din hai??

A: ha Ranveer..kyu kya hau?? 😕

R: Aman bana....woh...woh bana Tia ne hame aab tak wish nahi kiya hai 😭 ...Tia hamara bday bhool gayi 😭

A:nahi Ranveer...aaise nahi ho sakta 😉

R:Aise hi hai bana 😭

A:..Ranveer..shayad yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai...ki aaj woh kuch tension mein ho ...aur aab tak usse yaad nahi aaya ho....deke lena Tia ka aab kabhi bhi phone aajayega aur woh tumhe wish kar legi 😊

R: Paata nahi bana... 😭

Just then the phone rings....it's Tia...Ranveer is totally happy...he thinks she has remembered his bday

R:Tia..aap.. 😃 ..kahiye 😃 😃

T: Woh Ranveer..Tia ne iss liye phone kiya tha ki Tia aaj bhahar ja rahi hai Meher aur Pri ke saath shopping 😆 ke liye...toh Tia ko ghar aane mein late hoga

R:..kya??..Tia aapko baas itna ki kehna tha??

T:ha Ranveer...kyu kya hua ??😕 😉 😆

R: nahi...kuch nahi... 😭

T:...bye

R:..bye 😭 😭

A:...kya hua??...Tia ne wish kiya na????

R:nahi bana 😭 😭

A:..kya 😕 😉 (Aman is a good actor in this fan fic 😆 )

R: bana..hume kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai 😭 ...shayad...shayad aab Tia humse pyaar nahi karti 😭 ...paata nahi kya hua hai 😕 ...paar kuch tho hai...hume bohot fikar ho rahi hai 😕 😭 ..kahi hum Tia ko kho na de 😭 😭 😭

A:Oh no!!! yeh kuch zyada hi ho gaya 😕 ...Ranveer kuch aur hi sooch ne laga hai ...i have to clear some of this misunderstanding 😕

A:nahi Ranveer..mujhe nahi lagta aisa kuch hai...shayad Tia yeh is liye kar rahi hai kyuki woh kissi tension mein ho...aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na???

A:what a stupid explaination i have come up with ..oh god!! i hope Ranveer believes it

Ranveer ponderes over what Aman has just said....

R:kya Tia koi tension mein hai???....paata nahi 😕 ...par woh aj shopping ja rahi hai...Tia jab tension mein hoti hai..toh woh aksar shopping karne jati hai 😆 ...kahi jo Aman bana keh rahe hai woh saach toh nahi?? 😕 ...oh god!!! aur hum kya sooch rahe the ...hume aapni bday ki itni padi thi ki hume dyan hi nahi diya ki shayad Tia kisi stress mein ho sakti hai 😆 ..hume unse baat karni hagi...aabhi...hume paata karna hoga ki problem kya hai...hum Tia ko upset nahi dekh sakte 😳 😳

R:..ha bana...shayad aap thik keh rahe hai..hum aabhi jake unse baat karenge..aur paata karen ge ki problem kya hai 😊

A: KYA!!!!! (Aman literally screams) 😆

R: kya hua bana?? 😕

A: nahi kuch nahi 😆 ...woh shayad tum over-react kar rahe ho ...Tia ko toda time do. ..waise bhi woh aabhi shopping ja rahi na

A:oh on!!! yeh kya ho gaya...i cant let Ranveer go home...agar woh ghar gaya toh Tia and Vrinda mujhe bohot marengi...waise hi mein ghar pe apni biwi Latty 😕 se maar kha kha ke thak gaya hun 😆

R: nahi bana...hume Tia se aabhi milna hai

Well when it come to Tia...Ranveer always over-reacts...he is extra sensitive to her feelings 😳 ..(most of the times ).....and once he has made up his mind...its difficult to convince him of anything...esp in matters concerning Tia

A: par Ranveer suno toh.....

But even before Aman can complete his sentence Ranveer is out of the office....

A: Aab mein kya karoo??? 😕 ...........

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
posted part 9 above

plzzz let me know what u think of the story so far

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Posted: 19 years ago
i say you should start writing a novel.plz post the 10th part as early as possible
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Posted: 19 years ago
aman n latty!!!!!! 😭 ...POOR POOR AMAN!!!! i wonder hows jumbo as a father-in -law 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sapna....this fan fic is really getting interesting....a comedy of errors to be expected I suppose!
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 lamina...u also improved ur posting speed......
plz cont fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 lamina this is so cool
though i normally dont read tia fanb fics this is very funny
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 aman and latty.award for the best worst jodi.......cute.smart and funny.
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Posted: 19 years ago
ya i know aman and latty 😆 😆 😆 gud one lamina 😆

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