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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lamina

sorry abt that....i thought u were a fan of a tv charachter called avani😆

its ok but which actresses's name is avani in real life???

Edited by avani_fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
aman n latty 😆
by the way lamina too good plzzzzzzzz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 10


Aman is really scared of what could happen if he doesnt stop Ranveer from reaching home... 😆

A: Kya Karoo ..kis se help mangu ...oh god!!....ha!! Ashi 😃

Meanwhile...Ranveer is out of the office and makes his way to the parking lot...He gets in the car and is about to leave when he gets a call...from Yuvi

R: Yuvi bana..Hi!! 😊

Y:Ranveer....I just called to wish you happy bday 😃

R: Thanks bana 😃

Y: by the way...kya tum yahan aa sakte ho kuch der ke liye????...please

R:woh...woh bana..hum aab ghar ja rahen hain..Tia se kuch baat karni hai

Y:please Ranveer dude..aa joa...its a matter of life and death....its an emergency...please

R:kya hua bana??? 😕

Y: Ranveer dude..i cant talk abt it on the phone...please come here soon...

Ranveer is worried about Yuvi now

R: kya hua hoga??? 😕 kahi kuch serious toh nahi ...par Tia 😭 😭 ....aab hum kya karen??? ...Yuvi bana ko bhi toh naa nahi keh sakte ..pata nahi kya hua hoga??

R: Thik hai bana...hum aa rahe hai 😭

Y: Thanks dude 😃

Ranveer reaches Yuvi and Ashi's house...Ashi is not in right now...she is away somewhere ..its just Yuvi in the house...Ranveer sees Yuvi...Yuvi seems to be really upset about something..after seeing Yuvi even Ranveer is worried now....but Tia and her thoughts have still not left him

Y: Thanks for coming dude... 😊

R: kya hua bana?? 😕 aap bohot tense lag rahe the 😕

Y:ha dude...i am in big trouble 😭 ...i messed things up again ...Ashi is never going to forgive me now 😭

R: paata nahi Tia ke saath kya tension hai 😭 ...Tia shayad abhi ready ho rahi hongi shopping jaane ke liye 😳 😭 ...btw yeh Yuvi bana kya baat kar rahe hai 😕 ...kuch shayad Ashi ke baare mein kaha... 😕

Y:
Ranveer..iss baar Ashi mujhe forgive nahi karegi... 😭 😭

R:agar hum yahan se jaldi nikal gaye...toh shayad...shayad Tia ko rok sakte hai shopping jane se 😭 ..aur unse baat kar sakte hai.. 😭

Y: (Realises that Ranveer is lost)...
Ranveer u r listening to what i am saying right (nudges Ranveer)

R: huh?? 😕

Y: Ranveer..dude...where r u??? ...r u listening to a word that i said??? 😡

R:Yeh Yuvi bana kya baat kar rahe the...shayad kuch Ashi ke saath zagda kiya hoga 😕 😕 .....

R: Aap Ashi ke baare mein baat kar rahe the 😕 ...(now trying to concentrate on what Yuvi is saying so that he can solve the issue soon and go home to Tia)

Y:ha

R: iss baar kya hua??? 😆

Y: Woh...woh meine ek naya song composed kiya tha.....

R: phir??? 😕

Y: woh...i wanted Ashi to hear it first...and she was busy with her experiment ...

R: Kya aapne phir se unke experiment ke flask tod diye ???😡 😆

Y: Nahi Ranveer....there were no flasks this time 😭

R:Phir aapne kya kiya??? 😕 😕

Y: woh...woh Ashi is baar pegionheadophobia pe experiment kar rahe thi...symptoms...pyschology etc...or woh pegions... 😭

R:Pyschology experiment...pegions pe??? 😕

Y: Nahi woh human testing se pehle...woh pegions pe study karna chahti thi 😆

R: KYA !!😕 😆 ....(Trying not to deviate..Ranveers gets back on track)...phir kya hua??? 😕

Y: Woh mein lab mein gaya aur meine Ashi ke liye song play kiya ....man u should have heard it 😆 ...it was awesome 😆 ...out of this world 😃 😆

R:...bana...aap track par wapas aa jayiye 😡 ...Ashi kyu gussa hai??? 😕

Y:Woh...woh mein jab song play karne ke baad ankhein kholi toh dekha ki 😭 ...dekha ki 😭 😭

R: Kya dekha..?? 😕 😡

Y: Mein dekha ki ...saare pegions mar gaye the 😭 😭

R: KYA!!!! 😕 😡 😆

Y:..ha Ashi ne unki dead bodies dekhi ...aur tabse.... 😭 😭 😭 ...tab se i am in big trouble 😭 😭

R: Oh God!!! Yeh kya kar diya inhone..aab Ashi toh inhe mar dalegi ....aur wahan Tia. 😭 😭 ....paata nahi woh kis haal mein hai 😭 ...yahan Yuvi ko zyada samjhane se problem solve nahi hone wali 😕 ....Ek baar mein Tia se baat kar lun...uske baad Ashi se bhi baat karlun ga...mein aur Tia ...aur Papa (as in Tia's papa sumeet 😉 ) aur mumma (Soniya ofcourse!)...hum saab milke Ashi ko samjha hi lenge...Par hume abhi yahan se jaldi jana hoga....

R: Bana ..aap phikar mat ki jiye 😊 ..hum Ashi se baat kar lenge 😊 ...Saab thik ho jayega 😊 ...bas hum ghar jaake ek baar Tia se baat kar le 😳 😆 ...phir hum dono milke Ashi se bhi baat kar lenge...thik hai???

Y: ha..par 😭 😭

Y:Oh god!! yeh toh kuch jaldi hi problem solve kar raha hai ...not that i dont want it solved 😆 ...par aaj agar Ranveer ghar pohoch gaya toh Ashi mujhe zinda nahi chodegi ...un pegions ko marne ke baad Ashi ne toh mujhe guess house hi bhej diya tha 😆 ......aab usne mujhe warning di hai...agar mein Ranveer ho yahan kuch der aur na rakhon ..toh..toh woh toh mujhe guest house se bhi bahar nikhal degi 😆 ...guest house se bahar kya....woh toh mujhe kill kar degi 😭 😭 ...... 😆 😆

Y: Ranveer dude...please maat jao 😭

R:Yuvi bana ...hamara ghar jana bohot jaruri hai ...please samjhiye 😭

Y:Ranveer...please please 😭 😭 ...bas paach dus minute rook jaao mere saath...please dont leave me alone here right now 😭 ...i donno what i will do... 😭

R: Par bana..... 😭

Y: Ek minute dude...mein abhi aaya...please kahi maat jana

Yuvi goes away for a minute

R: oh on!! yeh Yuvi bana bhi na ..aab hum kya kare 😭 ...yahan se aise hi uthkar ja bhi nahi sakte 😭 ...oh on..Tia 😭 😭 😭

Yuvi rings up Sid

Y: Sid dude...where r u?? n where is Nakool 😡

S: Kya hua?? 😕 ..mein aur Nakool saath mein hai...ek meeting mein

Y: Sid...u and Nakool get here to my place...right now 😡

S: Par Yuvi dude 😕 ...hum meeting mein hai...abhi kaise???..... 😕

Y: i dont know how 😡 ...but get here fast 😡 ...Ranveer ghar jaane ki koshish kar raha hai ...agar woh ghar gaya aur usse Tia ke surprise ka paata chala ..toh u know ...Ashi, Meher and Vrinda ...they arent gonna spare us 😭 ..tumhe paata hai na...Meher and Vrinda r best friends of Tia

S: Oh no!!! 😕 ...aab kya hoga??? ...agar Ranveer ghar pohocha ...toh hamari khair nahi 😆 ....hamari meeting baas finish hi ho rahi hai...we will be there in 15 minutes...keep Ranveer there till we come 😭

Y: ya i will 😡 ...like i have an option 😡 .........but u guys better get here in 15 minutes..or we r all dead...remember DEAD ....


Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey

have posted Part 10 above

please check it out n let me know what u think of it
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Posted: 19 years ago
o god lamina this is sooooooooooo funny 😆 ashi -experiment-pigeonheadophobia-deadpigeons-yuvi.bechara ranveer kahaan fas gaya 😆 😆


keep posting 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
lamina its awesome as usual esp the way yuvi reacs and the excuse its coooooooooooooooooool 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 sappy stop making me laugh..it's the first time i have heard music could kill pigeons 😉 neways.......cute and sweet as usual. 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was really cute sapna! Loved the dialogues. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey lamina....sorry 4 replying so late....just read ur entire fic now....and I must say....u hav some talent😛.....despite not being so much of a tia-ranveer fan....i simply loved it😆.... its fab!!!plz continue soon....👏....
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Posted: 19 years ago
lamina continue no ...fast fast.....write....move your wrists on the ket board 😆 😆 😆

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