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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
lamina u r fantastic!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
btw add my name 2 in the list of stone cake club.
i tried 2 make a cake some months ago and literally it was full black(not becoz of chocolate flavour but kyunki it was totally burnt)!!!! πŸ˜†
i nearly felt lije crying when i took it from the microvave!!!
gosh i still remember the cake's face!!
beleive it or not but my father took a photograph of it!!and he shows it 2 me whenever i think f cooking something!!I dont have scanner at my home otherwise i would have surely posted the photograph!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
lamina gr8 fanfic and i dont wanna join ur club coz i can make very good cakes......so if u wanna eat cake tell me ...ill bake 1 4 u
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: remix rulz

lamina gr8 fanfic and i dont wanna join ur club coz i can make very good cakes......so if u wanna eat cake tell me ...ill bake 1 4 u

i am gonna take u up on that offer radhikaπŸ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: avani_fan

lamina u r fantastic!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
btw add my name 2 in the list of stone cake club.
i tried 2 make a cake some months ago and literally it was full black(not becoz of chocolate flavour but kyunki it was totally burnt)!!!! πŸ˜†
i nearly felt lije crying when i took it from the microvave!!!
gosh i still remember the cake's face!!
beleive it or not but my father took a photograph of it!!and he shows it 2 me whenever i think f cooking something!!I dont have scanner at my home otherwise i would have surely posted the photograph!

hi avani_fan.....u have been now officially added to the list of stone cake makers..welcome to the group..whats ur name btw?

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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
ohk lamina...jab bhi cake chahiye hoga mujhe keh dena...main tumhe bake karke de dungi....pakka promise

now dont dream abt my cake and continue with ur fanfic πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
and lamina as her id suggests i think her name is avani....duh
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
infact i had just baked a cake some time back and it came out perfect as me lol πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
PART 8


While Tia was home stuck with the burned cake...Ranveer was in office...working ...or rather trying to work

Ranveer had been feeling a bit upset the whole morning ...with Tia not wishing him and forgeting his bday and all....

Ranveer asked his personal assistant Susan to hold all the meetings that day

R: Susan...Aaj humare saare meetings cancel kar de jiye..aur dekhiye ki koi bhi..KOI BHI...hame disturb na kare...hum ek bohot he important deal pe kaam kar rahe hai

Susan:Yes sir!!

Susan goes away ...closing the door

Ranveer looked around all the dozen of papers and files lying around on the table. He checked his email. The Versace people had mailed...They want him to review the deal papers and send them across immediately.

Ranveer started reviewing the deal...but his mind was really not in it πŸ˜• ...CONSIGNMENT πŸ˜• .....NEW LINE πŸ˜• ....PRODUCTION πŸ˜• ...EXPORT πŸ˜• ...FIVE YEARS πŸ˜• ....as he was going through the papers...he saw the words πŸ˜• but couldnt really comprehend what was going on πŸ˜• ...

R: Tia....Tia hamara bday bhool gayi πŸ˜•

Ranveer put the file aside and picked up a photo that was lying on his desk....it was a photo of Tia and him....from the time when they were on their honeymoon...with the two of them in a gondola

R:Tia..kya hua hai...hum kitne khush te tab...aab kya ho gaya hai?...kya kuch badal gaya hai?..kya baat hai? πŸ˜• 😭

Meanwhile...Aman had come outside his room to meet him...but Susan stoped him...and asked him to wait...not a usual practice but today her boss didnt seem to be in a great mood exactly..and she didnt want to get in any trouble

Just then Vrinda called up Aman

A:ha Vrinda! bolo....saab thik hai na?

V:ha Aman...Meri abhi Tia se baat hui hai..woh bata rahi thik ki cake almost ready hai πŸ˜ƒ

A:KYA!!! YEH KAISE HO GAYA πŸ˜• ...mujhe toh laga tha ki hume cake order karna padega πŸ˜†

V: Nahi Aman...Tia ne cake bana liya hai πŸ˜† ...actually mein bhi todi surprised hun πŸ˜• πŸ˜† ...par maine tumhe kisi aur baat ke liye phone kiya hai...kya tum Ranveer se abhi mil paye ?..ya abhi bhi woh busy hai?

A: Nahi... woh abhi bhi busy hai

V: achha hua...kyunki Tia abhi tak ready nahi hui hai...aur tum Tia ko toh jante ho na πŸ˜† ...usse kafi waqt lagega...Iss liye Ranveer ko abhi ghar mat jane dena

A: Thik hai Vrinda

V: Accha toh mein aab rakhti hoon...aree aree ...ek minute...ek baat batana toh bhool hi gayi...Aman bhaiya πŸ˜† woh aaj raat party mein hum saath ja rahe hai ..yaad hai na??

A: Kyu..Aapne pati Sid ke saath nahi ja rahi ho? πŸ˜†

V: Nahi ..woh wahan directly aane wala hai...Nakool ke saath...aaj dono kissi meeting ke liye gaye hai

A: ok thik hai...bye

Meanwhile...inside the office..Ranveer is remembering all the wonderful memories they had in Venice (sorry they arent as detailed as Tia's coz its Ranveer - a guy remembering it...so less details...unlike us girls πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ )

Ranveer remembered how wonderful it was in Venice.....It was August and the weather had been absolutely bright and sunny...Tia had been so excited that time...she was pratically jumping when they landed on the port

St Mark's square looked so beautiful... with the gold mosaic standing out...Tia was so taken aback with the beautiful designs...she had never been there before but it was as though she knew every bit of the place

Tia had been pratically draging Ranveer along with her to see all the glass work....Ranveer had realised then and there that his pocket was going to go empty πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† ....and if the glass work wasnt enough...Tia then saw the Venitian masks πŸ˜† ..all bring and decorated....she was like a school kid ....well fashion conscious school kid left amuke in some fashion paradise πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ...but Ranveer has really enjoyed seeing her like that too 😳

But for Ranveer what had been more memorable was the Gondola ride that they had 😳 ....it was as if it was just the two of them in the world. 😳 ..floating on the water...enjoying just being with each other 😳 ...and stealing those wonderful kisses 😳 😳 midst of all that

To top it all of was the wonderful dinner they had at St Mark's Square....listening to the orchestra. πŸ˜ƒ ...Ranveer had requested them to play the song "I only want to be with you" 😳 ...It was the song that was playing when they first danced together 😳 ...the song that was playing when he proposed marriage to Tia 😳 ...as the danced away till late in the night to the tunes of the song and surrounded by the lights...he couldnt have asked for anything more...coz Tia was so happy πŸ˜ƒ ....and thats all that mattered to him 😳

As Ranveer remembered all these moments...he ran his finger across the photo

R:...Woh paal hum kabhi nahi bhool sakte πŸ˜ƒ ...kitne khush the hum....kya hua hai?...kuch toh hua hi hoga na πŸ˜• ...warna Tia aap hamara bday kaise bhoolti πŸ˜• ...paar kya? ...kya hua hai? πŸ˜•

Susan:..Sir...Sir ...Mr Sissodia

Ranveer came back to the real world

R:huh!! πŸ˜• ...kya hua..humne kaha tha na ki aaj hume disturb maat kijiye 😑

Susan: i know sir ...woh Aman sir aaye hai ..aapse milne

R:Oh!!! Thik hai ..unhe andar bhej di jiye......

Edited by lamina - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
just posted part 8 above

please plzzz plzzz let me know what u think of the story so far

guys do u even like this one....plz give me ur reviews n comments...

hope u r enjoying it

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Posted: 19 years ago
lamina's fanfic report:
so far story : mindblowing
this part: amazing
u r writing skills: too gud
this fanfic: rock
enjoying %: 1000000000000000%
posting speep100% but in minus 😑 😑 😑
waiting % :1000000000000000000000000000000000000%
overall report: gr8 work ...improve speed or salarey wud b cut...this is last warning

hey should i start writing reports πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

plz plz plz plz plz cont fast
esha

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