Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 2

Originally posted by: angel3142

hey nice fanfic just loved every part of it after so much time saw a fanfic and it is rocking just totally remixx style😉
six people in a room and ashi and tia in same room must be really fun watching their fights
you are a true pro in writing fiction all scene reminded so of remix fights 😉 😆 just ausumn
ranveer saying tia that he is there and stopping fight between them was so cute and tias reaction to see room messed and when name list comes ashi and tias fight so perfect and cute 😃😆 😉
continue soon desperate to know what happens when all of them stay together and further story 😃

Hey thanx a lot!!!Im glad u liked it!!!!Don worry ill cont as soon as possible...n i can promise theres gonna be much more dhamaal in the chapters to cum!!!

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

aww am toh loving itt 😳 😳 Like loony...even i am hoping that yuvi sneaks into ashi's room😍😍 after all he has always sneaked into ashi's room 😉 ☺️☺️ And ashi timbo fight was really funny! 😆 😆 Am loving it sureee...cont. soon gurl! 😳 😳

PS: Happy New Year🤗

Hey thanx a lot nitz!!!!!!!U want ashi n uv romance??ull get it!!!!!but uske liye ull have to wait n keep reading!!!!!

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYY BBBHHHHHHHAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGUUU!!
Yaar iss fic ko regularly continue karna! Understand! This thing is addictive! I can't belive it yaar! It's totally rocking!!!!!! I'm reliving my Maurya days again!!! Quickly continue!!!!!!
👏

Komal

Hey thanx a lot Komal!!!!Ill definetly try to cont as soon as possible!!!n any suggestions or advice alwayz welcome!!

Originally posted by: cool_snehal

hey it was awesome start 😃
do continue soon !!

Hey thanx a lot!!!😊The encouragement of all u ppl will defintly inspire me to produce ay wrks of art!!!!

Chapter2.
Well the girls as u noe 4m the last chapter have been alloted roms n the room next to them thats 26 belongs to ranny sid varun uv n 2 others.....less imp characters...

ok so...the guyz r all in their rooms..
Ranny sid varun n uv r all chillin out....😎
Sid:Wat luck man!!!Girls ka room ek dum next door!!Cool!!V r definetly gonna have sum fun!!!
Varun: Ya ya...fun toh tab hoga jab tia n ashi ladengi..tab tum wish karoge ki tumnext room mein nahin next planet pe hote!!!😊
Uv: (Laughs) Rite!!Seriously!!Yeh dono ladkiyaan toh na...oh man...bacchon ki tarah ladti hain!!No wonder inhein jab sisters banna pada toh koi problem hi nahin hui...
Ranny:Haan....aisa lagta tha ki yeh dono bina wajah ke ladti thi n ab unhein wajah mil gayi...behnein hain toh ladengi hi na!!!
All laugh....
uv:i wonder abhi kya kar rahi hongi dono.....

meanwhile in the next room....
Tia is setting up her cosmetics on the dressing table....
ashi cums there
Ashi:Hello miss beauty parlour!!Apni is beauty shop ko yahaan se uthaao...mujhe apni fotos rakhni hai....
Tia:Ashi...yeh tia ka sabse zaroori samaan hai...tia inhe aise hi kahin nahin daal sakti ok??
n btw tumhein shayad pata nahin hai...lekin is samaan ki sahi jagah yahi hai...inhein dressing table pe rakha jata hai....study table pe nahin....
Ashi:Ha ha ha...Hey BHaggu!!Tumhari sense of humour itni improve kaise ho gayi!!??Cut the jokes n apni is praja ko mere land se hataiye miss timbaktoo-ki-rani!!
Tia:Tia ka samaan yahaan se kahin nahin jaayega!!!
Ashi:Oh ya???Of COURSE jaayega...n jaayega directly window ke BAHAR!!

Ashi picks up a perfume bottle n heads towards the window...
tia is horrified she rushes after ashi n grabs her hand...
Tia:ASHI!!!!How dare u!!!Tum ne ise haath kaise lagaaya??
Ashi:Aise lagaya...n she squeezes it....n ab main ise bahar bhi fek doongi....
Tia pulls her bottle...but ashi doesnt let go...theres a gud struggle b/w them with tia pulling 4m one direction n ashi 4m the other....
Chod do.....nahin...no ways...tum....this wil teach u a lesson.......aaahh.......chodo!!!!........not a chance!!.......aaah.hh.....uuu........leave.....dum hai toh chudake dikhao........
sumhow tia frees the bottle off ashis hand...
she waves it triumphantly at her...
Dekha!!!Maine apni precious perfume ki bottle chuda li!!!
n in her excitement the bottle slips out of her hand......pri meher n vrinda enter just then.......
Tias horror stricken face watches her bottle in mid air......she reaches out 4 it....but in vain!!!The bottle goes straight down......
CRASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Thats 4m tia...)
Dhin tadak dhin tadak dhin dhin tadak dhin ta ta ta!!!!!!
Ashis jubilant!!!!She does a victory dance right then n there!!!
Ashi:Timbo!!!Wow man!!!!That was so amazing!!!!Ha ha ha ha...!!!!!Hey Bhaggu!!!!!!Tumhare timing ka toh jawaab hi nahin!!!!!Woaahhhh!!!!!Ha ha ha ha...Itni acchi timing toh.....toh.....sirf osama bin laden ki ho sakti hai!!!Remember the twin towers????Ha ha ha!!Must say ...tum uske profession min chali jaao toh use stif competition de do!!!Ha ha ha....Oh no tia....dukhi mat ho....honi ko kaun taal sakta hai(Going all melodramatic...)
Tia listens to all this with growing anger......
Shut up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tia ki precious perfume bottle!!!!Tia ne specially....E-S-P-E-C-I-A-L-L-Y paris se mangwayi thi!!!Oh tias god!!!!!!Ab tia kya karegi????She turns to ashi......yeh sab...yeh sab...tumhari wajah se ho raha hai!!!!!U...u...punk!!!Na fashion ki sense hai...na etiquet...na manners....chalne baat karne n kapde pehenne ka dhang aata hai.....tum...tum...
Ab toh ashis bhi bhadak gayi!!!
Ashi:Hello!!!Look timbaby.....tum ne khud bottle girai hai.....apni mistake ke liye mujhe blame mat karo...aur waise bhi i dont care a damn...tumhari perfume bottle tute..ya tumhara sar foote i dont care!!!!!
She starts to walk off.....

Tia emits a loud cry...ASHI!!!!!!!!!!!n runs after her to strangel her.....
ashi turns round in time n sees tia cumin towards her...
HEY BHAGGU!!!she shouts n runs out!!!!!


Meanwhile the guyz r all relaxin in their room......
suddenly the door flings open n ashi rushes in...THAKUR!!!!!!!!!
folowed by a very very angry tia.....Ruko u punk!!!Tia tumhe lesson sikhayegi!!!

a chase ensues with ashi n tia running all round everyone, where as the boys stand in utter confusion, at the end of which Ashi runs n hides behind ranny.....

Tia:Ranveer hat jaao.....
Ashi:Nahin thakur...aaj meri jaan sirf tumhare haat mein hai!!!
Ranny:Kya??!!??
Tia:Shut up!!!Ranveer...tia bahut gusse mein hai...Hat jaao tia ke raaste se.....tia aaj isse nahin chodegi....
Ashi:Accha???Pehle pakadke toh dikhao!!!
Tia:AAAGGGGGHHH!!!!!!
Ranveer:Tia...tia....dekhiye tia...TIA!!Rukiye!!Pehle humein saari baat bataiye...
Tia:Ranveer..is..is punk ne na..tia ki precious perfume bottle ko window ke baahar fek diya!!
Ashi:Liar liar pants on fire!!!Maine nahin feki thi..is miss barbie doll ke haath se giri!
Ranny holds tia n signals ashi to go to the other end of the room....she slowly goes...
Ranveer:aa...tia...dekhiye...jaane dijiye na....aisi baateinhoti rehti hain...jaane dijiye..
Tia:Kaise jaane doon!!!?????Woh perfume tia ke liye kitna important tha!!!Ab tia kya karegi!!!!
Ashi makes a cry babys face pretends to weep on uvs shoulder...total melodrama!!!AAkhir soniya ray ki beti jo hai!!!!
Tia:Pehle toh tia ki Perfume todi...n fir dar kar bhaag rahi hai...loser!!!!!
Ashi:Hey hey hey!!!Hello!!!Main tumse dar kar nahin bhaag rahi thi ok???u wanna fight...ashi pushes up imaginary sleeves...n moves forward....cum on....tumhare baal noch ke haath mein de doongi na...then ull know!!!
tia also moves forward.....a...aaj toh lets finish it..once n for all....
they r bout to attack each other wen the boyz intervene...
ranny hold tia back...tia rukiye....yeh aap kya kar rahi hain??
Uv holds ashi by the waist n pulls her back:Hey hey whacko!!Relax!!!
But do ashi n tia listen???Nope!!They r still arguing at the top of their voices!!!!!!
There is total mayhem in the room!!!!

suddenly the door opens n there stands......JUMBO!!!!!
He shouts....STOP IT!!!!!


every one freezes.........


y has jumbo cum there???
Al that n more in my next chapter!!!!!
hope u liked this one...do give me ur feedback!!!

yahooooo me the first one to reply!!! 😛 😛 😛
hey itz really coool!!! will edit this post soon coz m going to read it again!!! well continue soon dear!! n yeah keep it up!!!!

Hey Bhaggu yaar tum toh poora charcter mein ghuss kar likhti ho!!! Waise eik general question poochna hai. Tia-Ranveer ke siva aur koi couple hai? Meaning, Ashi-Yuvi or Sid-Meher or anyone else? Or are Tia-Ranveer the only couple right now? Jaldi continue karna!!!

hey this fiction is ausumn you are a mindblowing writer i donthave words to speak i just feel remix is back all same ashi tia fighting and ranveer and yuvi trying to make them calm it is really very beautifully written
just love it 👏 👏 👏

gr8 part !!!
waitin for more ...