Dhoom dhamaal!I Updated-part 21 Pg21 - Page 3

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey Bhaggu yaar tum toh poora charcter mein ghuss kar likhti ho!!! Waise eik general question poochna hai. Tia-Ranveer ke siva aur koi couple hai? Meaning, Ashi-Yuvi or Sid-Meher or anyone else? Or are Tia-Ranveer the only couple right now? Jaldi continue karna!!!

Hey thanx a lot....sorry dont know ur name!!!But ya..filhaal toh only tia n ranny r a couple....baaki sab r in line!!As the story proceedes all that will happen😉
Thanx again!!n ill cont soon!!!

Originally posted by: angel3142

hey this fiction is ausumn you are a mindblowing writer i donthave words to speak i just feel remix is back all same ashi tia fighting and ranveer and yuvi trying to make them calm it is really very beautifully written
just love it 👏 👏 👏

Hey thanx a lot!!!Will try to cont it soon...

Originally posted by: cool_snehal

gr8 part !!!
waitin for more ...

Hey thanx a lot!!Glad u liked it!!😛

Originally posted by: devilz_here

yahooooo me the first one to reply!!! 😛 😛 😛
hey itz really coool!!! will edit this post soon coz m going to read it again!!! well continue soon dear!! n yeah keep it up!!!!

Hey thanx a lot!!!Will cont soon!!!😛

Chapter 3.
k...so jumbos in the room.....n all of the ppl have like...literally frozen...
let me describe jumbo 4 u...
hes red..ya FLAMIN red wid anger.....hair totally wet......furiously lookin at all of them..............n smelling............smelling of....
Yeh toh tia ka perfume hai!!!Tia xclaims!!Thank u so much sir!!!
Jumbo:Thank u???Thank U....u....students...mera mood kharaab karne ke liye!!!!
Sid:umm...lekin sir....hua kya????
Jumbo:Hua kya????Main apne rounds pe tha ki suddenly mujhe apne upar awaaz aayi.....upar dekha toh...ek bottle kisi window se giri....ledge pe lagi tooti...n yeh......yeh...yeh....behuda baas wali cheez mere upar gir gayi!!!Mera coat kharaab ho gaya...mere baal kharaab ho gaye!!!!
Varun whispers to vrinda:Baal???Kaunse!!??
Jumbo continues....main jaana chahta hoon.....kaun tha woh jisne yeh kiya hai...KAUN HAI!!????
Tia....tum keh rahi thi yeh perfume tumhara hai???Toh tumne feka ise???
Tia is horrified...first at her perfume being called Behuda...n then being blamed 4 everything!!!
Oh no sir!!!Tia ne kuch nahin kiya!!!!Woh toh yeh anvesha...
ashi:Hey!!!Mujhpe blame mat daalo!!!Pata hai sir...yeh ladki paagal ho gayi hai.....apna room chin jaane ka itna dukh hua ise ki socha aap se badla le le....is liye usne aisa kiya hoga.....
Tia:Shut up u punk!!!!U liar!!!Tumhe toh main dekh loongi!!!!
Jumbo:Tia!!!Plzz...Dekhiye students...yeh aapka first day hai...isliye main aapko chod raha hoon...but that doesnt mean ki yeh har baar hoga....samjhe???Now back to ur rooms everyone..NOW!!!!


Everyone goes back to their rooms.....

Next day all r in their classes......

The morning drags on....just like usual first-day-at-skool types......

As one class ends everyone gives a sigh of relief......
Sid:Dude....agar roz classes itne hi boring hue na.....then toh humari life mein samjho masti ka dead end!!!
Varun:Haan guyz...socha nahin tha ki din itna lamba hoga....waise next class kaunsi hai???
Just then Jumbo enters....


Students.....Ek important announcement hai.....jaisa ki aap sab jaante hain...humne popular demand pe Music ko humare co curricular activities mein include kiya hai......iske liye humne ek naye instructor ko appoint kiya hai....Waise toh aap sab music mein kaafi had tak interest dikhate hain....But main chahta hoon ki aap aur josh aur enthusiasm se is subject ko approach karein......ok????
Toh jaisa ki main keh raha tha.....HUmare new on-campus instructor hain...Mr.Sameer Khanna.

All the students look towards the door.....time stands still as a person walks in..........everyones eyes r on him.......he walks in confidently.......wearing smart sneakers a cool pair of jeans...n a white n soft blue shirt........ok this characters an imaginary one...so let ur imagination go wild!!!Just think of all the HOT dudes u gotta crush on,girls,...the marvelously smooth looking Mr.charmings....this guyz a mixture of them all.................every girls dream............The Mr.perfect......a mixture of all the bolly n hollywood heart throbs....Hrithik Ranbeer, John ,Salmaan,Brad etc etc etc...........i know u guyz must b wishing hes 4 real...me tooo!!!!!!Its a bit xaggerated...but jitna xaggerated utna hi mazaa aaye ga rite?????

so he walks in n stands there.....smiling at them all......

n the students????To b more specific the GIRL students.........they r all flat!!!Lattooo over this guy...i mean everyone of them.....
Ashi vrinda tia pri meher etc etc....they all gape at him with wide eyes already transported to dream land..........Tez hawaa......bright lights n the works...every girl in the room is having her fantasy come true!!!!!!

n the guyz???Well...they all look at him with a mixture of Envy n awe...i mean hes so cute u cant help but like this guy!!!!

He smiles at them all n says...Hey everyone....Im Sameer....U can call me Sam....

Jumbo:Ok students...Mr.Sameer yahaan naye hain...so unhein adjust hone mein thoda time lagega.....i hope u all will cooperate.....
Kal se inki classes start hongi.....humne store room ko music room bana liya hai...temporarily......so aap log wahaan time pe assemble ho jana...ok???Thank u....Chaliye Mr.Sameer........

they both leave the room....all eyes on sameer........a bell rings sumwhere......

all the guyz get up from their seats ready to leave...then they notice the girls....none of them is stirring 4m their seats.....
Tias absent mindedly playing with her hair....
ashis resting her chin on her hand n sighing....
Vrinda is smiling away to herself......n pri is gorging on more chocolates!!!!!
n they r all looking at the door....after sameer....

Uv:Hello??Yeh in sabko kya ho gaya???
Ranveer:Pata nahin banaa....Tia???Ashi????Vrinda????Kahaan kho gaye aap sab??
Pri:Sapnon mein.....
Sid:WAT????
Ashi:Talks as if in a trance......Hey Bhaggu.....Woh kya tha????
Meher:Humare gud days ka indication.....Iske baad humari kismat khulne wali hai.....
Tia:Oh tias god......Tia ko toh vishwaas hi nain hota....
Vrinda:Haan....Yakeen hi nahin hota ki Maurya mein itna Handsome koi ho sakta hai.....

Uv:Wat???In logon ka dimaag toh theek hai????
Sid:Oh no guyz....mujhe inki aakhon mein dikh raha hai.....this is not looking gud....
Ranny:Matlab???
Sid:Inko dekh ke aisa lagta hai ki sabke dil ki ghanti baj gayi hai......Jab bahut saari ladkiyan kisi ek pe fiada ho jaati hai na....toh aisa hi hota hai.....
Uv:U mean yeh sab us sameer pe fida hain!!???Oh man!!No wayz!!!Usmei aisa kya hai???!!!
Ranny:Woh toh nahin pata banaa...lekin ab..humari haalat khasta hone wali hai!!

The girls r meanwhile still lost in their dreams!!!!!

Theres lots more fun cumin up in the next chapters so keep reading!!Hope u liked this one!!!
Do give me ur feedback!!!
Luv
Sur

Surbhi all I can say is HEY BHAGGU! All I kept on thinking about was Ranbir Kapoor or Karan Singh Grover (Armaan from Dil Mil Gaye) walking in! Waise toh yeh role completely fits Ranbir! Everyone knows how obsessed I am with Saawariya and it's not because of Ranbir-Sonam or even just Ranbir. I love Ranbir's character. Aur maine Sameer ko eik dum Ranbir ki tarhaan picyure kiya. Guitar leke phirta hua. Mera Saawariya! I love you man! Continue soon!!!!!!

Komal

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Surbhi all I can say is HEY BHAGGU! All I kept on thinking about was Ranbir Kapoor or Karan Singh Grover (Armaan from Dil Mil Gaye) walking in! Waise toh yeh role completely fits Ranbir! Everyone knows how obsessed I am with Saawariya and it's not because of Ranbir-Sonam or even just Ranbir. I love Ranbir's character. Aur maine Sameer ko eik dum Ranbir ki tarhaan picyure kiya. Guitar leke phirta hua. Mera Saawariya! I love you man! Continue soon!!!!!!

Komal

Hey BHaggu me too!!!Firstly Komal thanx a lot 4 liking my work....n secondly i actually made a khichdi of both these hot thunks n then wrote the character of sam!!!!n not to worry!!Uve found ur self a Ranbir co-fanatic!!!Even i just loved saawariya...loved??I worship that film n am on a look out 4 the real world raj too!!!!!As 4 armaan...well...aisa doctor sachmein ho toh main toh hospital ko hi apna ghar banaa loon!!!!!😆!So...Cheers to our common point ....sorry....HUNKS 😉of admiration!!!!😛

hey gr8 part loved it !! 😃
me tooo was imaging karan grover !! white shirt n blue denims cool combo !!! 😉 😛
cont sooon plss

hey sur gr8 part hun!!! very well written 👏 n plzzzzzz continue asap!!!!! i used to hav lot of patience but now as if m losing all w8ing for the fics to b completed!!!! 😡 so plz b a gud gurl!!! 😉 😉 😉

hey sur gr8 part hun!!! very well written 👏 n plzzzzzz continue asap!!!!! i used to hav lot of patience but now as if m losing all w8ing for the fics to b completed!!!! 😡 so plz b a gud gurl!!! 😉 😉 😉