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ashi_mania

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Posted: 20 years ago

#21

its really nice 👏 👏 👏...... plz continue

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Aparna

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Posted: 20 years ago

#22

Arre....I meant the ending of that part....
Anyways, I've noticed that u have this knack....I donno what they call it, but I call it "wave writing" ..... its' like, the emotions move like a wave. First sadness, then hope, then joy, then heartbreak, then again hope.....up & down, up & down....
It's really beautiful to read!

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 20 years ago

#23

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr888888888888888888888
part
plz continue
and try to make them happy and cheerful

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lalit1

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Posted: 20 years ago

#24

hey hellraiser was busy these days but wanna say u excel in "pattern writing"
keep up the good work

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kajal

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Posted: 20 years ago

#25

hey Hi Hell raiser just read your fan-fic it was amazing truly.But I think u must bring Comedy and Romance Together as the ashi's character is like that.
I wish you could include the all 4some in your fanfic,its really really nice
keep up the work!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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rikzik

@rikzik

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Posted: 20 years ago

#26

good try hellraiser.for making it more comical try including some witty dialogues............ 😊
p.s.:hope u don't mind the small suggestion.

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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Posted: 20 years ago

#27

well u r good at both.....and I enjoy reading anything as long as it has ashi and yuvi in it......so I am game for romance as well as comedy....but whatever u decide......plz continue soon 😃

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 20 years ago

#28

👏
i could imagine yuvi with blue hair with pink streaks !!!

anyways the story is going really well !!!
plzzzzzz make it a romantic comedy !!! it would be wonderful !!!