romantic fanfic-THE END!!!!!

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anmol bhatnagar

@anmol_0511

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Posted: 20 years ago

#11

awesome man u r too gud.we want more . par jayada dard bhare scenes mat likhna . it hurts

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Sam

@Naughty_n_nice

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Posted: 20 years ago

#12

That was trulllly amazing.
U're quite good at this
Continue, it's really nice
And you know, you've left it off at a very wierd place
PLS CONTINUE OR I'LLL BURST!!!!!!!!

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armaanilicious

@armaanilicious

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Posted: 20 years ago

#13

hey dat was amazin plz continu soon

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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Posted: 20 years ago

#14

truly awesome 👏 👏 👏....plz continue soon

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rikzik

@rikzik

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Posted: 20 years ago

#15

god!!!!stop criticising urself hell raiser.u rite well and pep urself up with some confidence babes.[hope u r not a guy].it is really touchy and romantic. 👏

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Aparna

@apple14

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Posted: 20 years ago

#16

Wow...you wanted some feedback right:
here is mine- you are getting better with every part. (gosh I sound like one of those art critics who comments expertly but does'nt even know how to hold a paint brush!!!) 😆

Next- I hope you will be able to include some dialogues between the 2.

But do continue soon, I hate being kept in suspense. You truly do write wonderfully. But please don't bring in too much sadness....it's bad enuf to c it daily on the show..... 😭 my fragile heart cant take too much tragedy- esp between ashi& yuvi 😭