romantic fanfic-THE END!!!!! - Page 5

Hey Hell Raiser.. what happened.. Why have u stopped..... and why did you delete it...

why the hell are u deleting it ?????

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont do it !!
continue it !! we are with you !!!

hey plz don't do this ......u write really well......and we love reading ur fic......as nishi said try introducing some new character......but plz continue

Hey plz.....u cant stop in the middle....do plz continue......

part 7 up.....


"ashi's wid adi"replied m.p not looking up from filing her nails.she dint look remotely surprised at yuvi's hair

"so ...as uve been in on the joke ...i assume u can tell me how to get this goo out of my hair?"

"use ashi's hair colour remover...itll b out in an hr"
yuvi took the can andd went to his room still muttering mutinously.

ashi came out from behind the door.one look at m.p and both started laughing hysterically.

yuvi enetered his room looking disgruntled.
sid was there with nakul just returned from delhi.
they both stared at him wid their mouths open .
"shut up guys"snapped yuvi who went to take a shower.

sid:pata nahin yuvi ka kya hoga...ashi ko hate karta hai phir bhi usse pyaar karta hain..

nakul:haan bro....actuallly mein samajh sakta hoon...ashi baby bahut cool hai...nakool ki tarah...

sid:dude...agar yuvi ko pata chala to nakul ki ho gayi chutti...

nakul:agar pata chala to.....

😆 ....is he gonna be normal again...hair color wise...this was good hellraiser....its good that u continued 👏

that was kool 👏 👏 👏...and thanx for continuing......and ashi kool like nakool 😆.....man I can imagine ashi's reaction to this

good u continued.that was nice.keep going and don't even think of stopping.

awesome.........me loves it...pink uv......cute....btw...ashi and nakool..if thy got paired up how wud it be...just a thot guys

her laughter turned to tears.she fell t the floor sobbing..
the extent of her grief cud melt stone.
she dint want to do this.she hated this facade,this drama of pretending t hate him,trying to make him jealous.
she hated him for compelling her to do do all this.
yet she wud die without him

a gust of breeze through the windows rustled the pages of the book in front of her.
a dried rose flew out of its pages.
its petals were strewn in front of her it was the remains of a red rose given by him long long ago.

through a stream of renewed tears,she thought
in ur arms i can still fell the way u want me when u hold me.i can still hear the tender words u whispered to the fading night.i know how much u missed me.....
i can still feel the luv for me in ur heart.


there was a knock on the door.she opened it to find 2 dozen long stemmed red roses with a card that read
......luv you with all my heart.....
NAKUL