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Posted: 18 years ago
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Harshu... pehle answer me that... are you ashi or yuvi? Coz this is sooooo like AY man... i am soo in luv with your fic☺️ You are an outstanding writer yaar... specially when it cums to sumthing u luv from deep inside... like AY☺️☺️ Loved the second part... it was phunny, cute, lovly, sweet, dreamly ☺️😍 and sumthing which again made me blush☺️☺️☺️ I loved the parts you used like

"Haan…tum jaisi wacko jo uski friend ho….anyone will be scared of you…especially in the dark!" he replied laughing, unable to resist the jibe. Ashi made a face at him which he caught in the rearview mirror and laughed even more at the way she had confirmed his statement.

Something that made me laugh and blush 😆 Imagine ashi making some kinda face which confirms that she is scary🤣🤣 Then this:

"Obviously psycho!" she replied rolling her eyes as thought it was the most normal thing for a girl to frisk off on a bike to Ladhak in the night.

🤣🤣🤣 Sooo...sooo normal to go to ladakh on a bike😆😆 that too from bombay😳 This is what makes her special☺️ She gets such aweshum ideas☺️☺️ Neways i also luved when she gets caught by traffic police and yuvi...her fake he-man cums to rescue her from him😆 I even like this one!😆

'I dunno all that. Maths makes me mad. You take care of all that stuff ok?" she said as she got on to the bike behind him.

"Sure..if you want us to land up in Chennai instead of Ladakh!" he joked, grinning as he accelerated the bike into action. They were off. To Ladhak.

Maths😆😆😆 Surely everyone is like that in maths except my dad and few of your parents😆😆😆 And ending up in chennai instead of ladakh 😳 But neways who cares of miles... i just care for two love birds😳😳 who are not aktually called love birds😆😆😆 as they are called a mad pair😆😳☺️ which made us mad over them... named Ashi and Yuvi☺️☺️ But neways it was just aweshum...and finally they are off too LADAKH😳😳😳 tata to mr.yashy 😉😆 and whole maurya... just our ashi and yuvi☺️😍 and snow ☺️ and their masalas😉 perfect!😉😳 And now pleej continue choon... cant wait for next parts😍 continue jaldi okie? luv yaaa 🤗🤗

PS: i editted my post on 1st page finally!!😆😆😆 if u didn't saw it😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
im lovin evry bit of it 😳 i kno late reply n m sholly fr tht 😆
neway..ashi runnin away frm sonia..sho typically ashi 😆
n yuvi with her 😳😳😳 cant WAIT fr the fireworks to begin 😈 or i shud say theyve alredi begun 😉
u kno wen ashi dropped uv i was lyk nooooo uv dont leav her 😭 then i relised them goin together is d point of dis ficcy 😳😆
my imaginations goin wild..thinkin of the possibilities ten days alone together offer 😈 n i kno ur d only one hu can do justice to dis 😳
rock on jamesie poo 😉😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
Hey!!!

It's really awesome.. 😃 😃 😃 Even better than that.. I jus luved both d parts..

Pls continue soon.. 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

Harshu... pehle answer me that... are you ashi or yuvi?

We-ell...I do hope for ppl to vote for me in RF awards as ashi☺️
Coz this is sooooo like AY man... i am soo in luv with your fic☺️

I hope you dun do gaddari n giv me dhoka ok? since u claim to be in luv!😉

You are an outstanding writer yaar... specially when it cums to sumthing u luv from deep inside... like AY☺️☺️
thank you! and you are too..if u'll only come out from dream land and write something!😉
Loved the second part... it was phunny, cute, lovly, sweet, dreamly ☺️😍 and sumthing which again made me blush☺️☺️☺️ I loved the parts you used like

"Haan…tum jaisi wacko jo uski friend ho….anyone will be scared of you…especially in the dark!" he replied laughing, unable to resist the jibe. Ashi made a face at him which he caught in the rearview mirror and laughed even more at the way she had confirmed his statement.

Something that made me laugh and blush 😆 Imagine ashi making some kinda face which confirms that she is scary🤣🤣 Then this:

"Obviously psycho!" she replied rolling her eyes as thought it was the most normal thing for a girl to frisk off on a bike to Ladhak in the night.

🤣🤣🤣 Sooo...sooo normal to go to ladakh on a bike😆😆 that too from bombay😳 This is what makes her special☺️ She gets such aweshum ideas☺️☺️

Yup I know...only ashi can frisk away to ladakh on her bike in the dead of the night...that's why i loooooovvvvveee her☺️

Neways i also luved when she gets caught by traffic police and yuvi...her fake he-man cums to rescue her from him😆 I even like this one!😆

'I dunno all that. Maths makes me mad. You take care of all that stuff ok?" she said as she got on to the bike behind him.

"Sure..if you want us to land up in Chennai instead of Ladakh!" he joked, grinning as he accelerated the bike into action. They were off. To Ladhak.

Maths😆😆😆 Surely everyone is like that in maths except my dad and few of your parents😆😆😆

Well...maths makes ME mad...so just doing application to ashi!

And ending up in chennai instead of ladakh 😳 But neways who cares of miles... i just care for two love birds😳😳 who are not aktually called love birds😆😆😆 as they are called a mad pair😆😳☺️ which made us mad over them... named Ashi and Yuvi☺️☺️ But neways it was just aweshum...and finally they are off too LADAKH😳😳😳 tata to mr.yashy 😉😆 and whole maurya... just our ashi and yuvi☺️😍 and snow ☺️ and their masalas😉 perfect!😉😳 And now pleej continue choon... cant wait for next parts😍 continue jaldi okie? luv yaaa 🤗🤗

PS: i editted my post on 1st page finally!!😆😆😆 if u didn't saw it😆




thanx for your lamba chauda bhashan...I luv to read them!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolniyu

im lovin evry bit of it 😳 i kno late reply n m sholly fr tht 😆
neway..ashi runnin away frm sonia..sho typically ashi 😆
n yuvi with her 😳😳😳 cant WAIT fr the fireworks to begin 😈 or i shud say theyve alredi begun 😉
i won't say anything except this...
u kno wen ashi dropped uv i was lyk nooooo uv dont leav her 😭 then i relised them goin together is d point of dis ficcy 😳😆

I think you should start supplying tubelights to ppl...coz ur d biggest tubelight i hv ever laid eyes on😛☺️
my imaginations goin wild..thinkin of the possibilities ten days alone together offer 😈 n i kno ur d only one hu can do justice to dis 😳

I hope i can🤔
rock on jamesie poo 😉😆

thanx siliusly!!!☺️

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Partie Trois

It was past midnight now and Yuvi had been driving non-stop for about four hours. His back was stiff, his eyes were stinging, his legs were aching like hell. Ashi had fallen asleep, her head resting on his back and her hands curled round his waist, securely. He was loving it.

Ashi felt the cool blast of the wind slapping her face and she smiled. It was cold but she wasn't feeling it… instead she was feeling deliciously warm. She was on something soft and smooth… and yet strong. She hugged it and snuggled closer. Yuvi felt her hands tighten around him and glanced behind and called out to her gently, "Hey ashi…you awake"

"Yeahh…I guess…" she murmured softly. Yuvi then stopped the bike and made her get down. She rubbed her sleepy eyes and yawned, looking around the deserted road. Yuvi took out the water bottle and gave it to her.

"Drink…and we should get some food, what say?" He said casually glancing at her She did not reply, she was busy drinking and splashing her face with water. His gaze held to her face …she had taken her hair out of its ponytail and was raking her hand through it. The moonlight shone brightly, illuminating her face…the water droplets glistening on her face…her lips all wet and sparkling….and she had no idea how amazing she looked to him at that very moment. Yuvi took a few steps forward as if he was going to scoop her in his arms. But he stopped suddenly and clenched his fists… It wasn't done to think about her… not when they were nothing…they had broken up a long time ago and now they were just friends and he didn't want to crumble their feeble friendship too.

Ashi caught him looking at her…his deep black eyes were lost in some other world altogether...as though lost in some memory….and yet managing to be piercing and sincere. She felt herself blushing, her breathe quicken, her hand immediately going to her jean pocket with which she toyed nervously, trying not to think too much about the way his eyes were fixed on her face. And then he closed his eyes and looked to be counting to ten. She was suddenly aware that he had closed a considerable amount of gap between them. She stepped back from him letting out a breathe.

"Shall we eat then?" she suggested, her voice trying to sound normal.

"Oh yes, ofcourse," he said smiling. She smiled back, trying to make her face go back to its normal colour.

*

"Hey bhaggu!!! Finally!!! We are here!!!" she said her eyes shining with excitement. Yuvi tried not to stare at her too much. As it is, he was having trouble concentrating on the bike, after the incident when he almost kissed her. And now if she was going to look like that the whole time here he wasn't sure he could keep his control…

"Yes Anvesha. Congratulations! You have just stated the obvious!" he said trying to sound petulant and still trying not to stare…

"You know psycho…if we were any place other than here, I would have punched on your nose but here…I'm just too happy to care!" She grinned at the snow…she loved it. It was looking very beautiful…the roads filled with snow that was ankle deep, the house looking white and cozy with the glow of the fireplaces coming through the windows, the white roof tops and the fields white washed with snow… She didn't know where to start looking.

Yuvi went back to the bike and started taking off the bags and stuff when he felt something soft hit him on the head. He turned around, rubbing the back of his head to see Ashi waving at him cheekily and grinning.

"Wacko…you're gonna get it now!!!" he said and dropping what he was doing, he bent down and started cupping a snowball in his hands. By that time she had hit another one at him. He threw his snow ball at her frustrated and was annoyed to find that she quite neatly side stepped it. She was laughing wildly at him enjoying his defeat.

'I swear I would have killed her if she didn't look so damn cute,' he thought not knowing whether he was angry with her or taken in by her.......
Edited by xMarauderx - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww harshu i realy wanaa thank u loads loads loads for this one i was real low and depressed and dis made my day am all happy and rocking again..told ya..ur posts always did it for me....and see again it happend...just at the right time at the right place... 🤗 thaanx devilz u rock....
and as for this part its aweshmee 😍 😍 😍 and again i dnt knw waats d best part in it in totality its aweshmeee but i just loved d way uv looked naa stared at her wen she was splashing water her discription was perfect i cld actly imagine her all sexyy and beautifull and den i simply adored dis......It wasn't done to think about her… not when they were nothing…they had broken up a long time ago and now they were just friends and he didn't want to crumble their feeble friendship too. u knw devilz its only ashi uv who can think of saving deir friendship in dis way controllng deir inner most desiers and first concentrating on present rather than repenting for the past......
and den i loved al the smal one liners u used like.... Yuvi tried not to stare at her too much. As it is, he was having trouble concentrating on the bike, after the incident when he almost kissed her. awwww waat perfect discription
but the one part that left me awing was dis one

It was past midnight now and Yuvi had been driving non-stop for about four hours. His back was stiff, his eyes were stinging, his legs were aching like hell. Ashi had fallen asleep, her head resting on his back and her hands curled round his waist, securely. He was loving it.


dis was just awwwwwwwwww 😍 am sooo in love wid dem all over again😍 😍


Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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finally u updated.... & its choooooooo chweeeeeet 😳 😳 ashi yuvi in ladakh.... sunne mein hi kitna romantic lagta hai 😳 😳 & padhne mein to.... it rocks!!! 👏 👏
great job harshu... do continue asap 😊
Edited by shriyaroxxx - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
great part!
love ashi sleeping on yuvi as he drives
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww......soooooooooooo cute.......loved it ....this was toooooooo romantic ..... 😳

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