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Posted: 18 years ago
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[quote=Harshu🤗]
Firstly....yshhhhh...my dear dear psychatric doctor (n official beta reader beta reader) who gave me psycho treatment for this one!
N my partner in RD love thanx for all the help yshhh
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awww 😳 me tuched... 😳😳... itsh okie.. me luved the ficccy too much to not help ya... 😳

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i love it...
ohk i read it before 😆
but i told you then itself that i luv it 😳
seriosuly its cute re... i mean im thinking of the thing to come... 😳...

now don't delay and send me the file when we chat next cos i HAVE to know what happens next!!! 😳 nd well think of sumthing together 😉😉

but so far like i told u i really luv it... and anticipating the nxt part ;;) ;;) ;;) you know 😉😉😉

so u better take out ur word file and start typing out the rest 😳

luvya loads n loads

-❤️Ysh❤️-
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: smritisashi

😡MEANESS PERSONIFIED....

Lolzzz...

good that u remembered dis...😛and am glaaad that wld be getting a huuge huge huuge doze of harshada at her best display😳

neways devilz dis rocked as always and the bigining superb...its quite evident daat ashi uv are not a couple start main so am waiting to see hw d tackyturn turns into d bestest romance ever....

it is NOT taCKyturn🤣 it's taCEE turn with the C pronounced like a S 😆😆😆 dare you call it tacky again!!!!!!!!!! You know what I'll do naa!😉😈


the best part i liked was the shed thngy deffinately..the shed truely was uvs sheds as it had witnessed al his hearrtbreaks and turmoils and even blissful joys and you very truely said it that only uv cld understand its soothing tranquility......

thank you...I like to write about Yuvi and the shed...they're the next best couple after ashi-yuvi😆😆😉


and am glad u hav shwn uv at a stage where hes aware that his dad is a good for nothing human being so he wld nt fall prey to his scheaming traps....

Yes...throughout remix he was always shown to be supressed by his dad...and even in most ff's..he is shown dominated by his father..so I wanted to show a different Yuvi...akhir kabtak the poor guy will be shown being dominated like this! Already ashi dominates him so much!😆😆

and moreovr am waiting to see hw uv wld realize that he has yet another piller of strength besides his mum and his beloved guitaar and she wld fight for him wid all her blood and life...his very own ashi..☺️

Lolzz...I was tempting to write...very tempting to write about the third pillar too...but I didn't write it since they're not together (on saya's request!)

and nw dnt be mean{though i knw its very very very very difficult for you but stil try😛}and post the next part SOON...dnt u derive sedastic pleasures by torturing me wid a huge wait😡plz devilz post the next one soon so daat i can awww😍🤗🤗

Will think about it definitely....maybe by 30th century I'll post it!😊😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: devilangel

ok harshu. plz plz plz plz dont be mad at me.. as i said my dishwasher had problems and then i had to go shopping for my school trip etc etc.. im realy really really sorry k?

Naah naah...i can totally understand about mad dishwashers....n other such strange devices😆😆 I totally mess everything up!

so.. coming to your fic...god i love it..

aww thanx a lot! Means a lot coming from you!😳

i really liked the way you balanced your fic.. the way it wasnt too humorous or happy.. but it wasnt too sad either..

glad you felt so!!!😳 I'm a cheerful person by nature..so can't stay sad for long! Unlike some other ppl (namely smriti dadi!😆😆)


the beginning was really nice.. you had a nice attention getter to get people into your story.. and the way you presented the background info,

I know...I didn't want it to be unexplained!😊

plus the ashi yuvi encounter was really awesome. it was done in a discrete way and it wasnt the cliche romance types ..

thanx a lot!😳

i also liked the way you used your adjectives.. it really suited the story well. and you have a maervelous vocabulary which is shown thru the fic.. all in all it was freakin' awesome .. kk.. now i feel like im doing a detailed analysis of your story.. but all i really want to say is that it was very good.. and i would really really (X 1000) like to read the next part.. so you HAVE to continue asap...

thanx a lottt!!!😳🤗 I dun mind u doing any analysis!😆😳 ur remix analysis was nice!

and even if im reserved.. i promise i will be unreserved and reply.. so for now, continue continue continue.. i LOVED it

no worries! I didn't mean you actually...i meant nitz n smriti n saya who do it all the time!😕



aww thanx a lot for the looong rewview!😳 It brought a smile to my face!!!😳😳😳 I hope you'll like next parts as well!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Partie Deux/Part Two

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"Yuvi…." She breathed out slowly in and then turned around at him in utter surprise.

"What…what're you doing here?" Yuvi didn't reply motioned for her frantically to take off…his eyes on the narrow road off Maurya from where a beam of a car's ight was coming.

"What?" she asked again confused.

"Just take off..come on ashi…please," said Yuvi and he hastily grabbed hold of the bike handle from behind and put on the accelerator. The bike zoomed away, just as the car came fully into view. Yuvi kept his head low on her shoulder, hiding behind ashi as much as possible and still not giving her control of the bike. They drove like for about 10 minutes at the end of which Ashi was highly annoyed with him.

"Now, will you please give me control of my bike?" she asked him emphasizing the "my".

"No. We need to get away from here as quickly as possible. Dad's dumb henchmen will be after us soon."

"We? Look psycho, mujhe koi shauk nahin hai tumhaare saath hide and seek khelne ka. Tum aur tumhare dad…dono milke khelo…waise bhi both are dumb,"

"You keep telling yourself that wacko,' he said still checking the rearview mirror for any following car.

"Yuvi stop the bike now or else I'll make you stop," she said grabbing the handles and trying to brake.

"Come on Anvesha..just a bit more…please…then you can go wherever you wanna go." His eyes met hers in the mirror and she softened at the look in their dark depths.

"Fine," she grumbled grudgingly as he grinned back at her in the mirror.

"By the way, where are you going…with all this bag n all?" he asked, glancing at the mirror again to check for the car which had disappeared by now.

"Ladakh," was the reply.

"You're going on a bike to ladakh????"

"Obviously psycho!" she replied rolling her eyes as thought it was the most normal thing for a girl to frisk off on a bike to Ladhak in the night.

"Wacko…do you even know ki ladakh kitna durr hai?" asked Yuvi, not able to believe the nerve of the girl sitting ahead him.

"Haan Yuvi…main tumhaari tarah kam akal nahin hoon….maine saari preparations kar li hai!" They were driving through the main roads now, and he drove a tad bit faster, cutting through the chilly air.

"Tum akeli jaanewaali ho wahaan tak?" he asked.

"Haan…MP is too busy and Vrinda is too scared!"

"Haan…tum jaisi wacko jo uski friend ho….anyone will be scared of you…especially in the dark!" he replied laughing, unable to resist the jibe. Ashi made a face at him which he caught in the rearview mirror and laughed even more at the way she had confirmed his statement.

"Ha ha very funny! Atleast I'm not running away from my dad like a certain 'someone'." Yuvi sighed and ran a hand through his hair.

"Accha..toh tum..itni raat main…beech sadak mein, apni bike pe kya kar rahi ho?" he said smirking.

"Oh shut up psycho…and now get down!"

"Thodi aur durr…then I'll get down".

"No no no…get down NOW! Ab yahaan se mujhe turn leke jaana hai," And she made him stop the bike and get down forcibly. "Bye," she said and left without much ado and Yuvi was left standing in the middle of the road staring after her with an unscrutable expression. He watched her reach the signal and then he saw a traffic policeman stopping her. From their expressions and actions, it was clear that ashi was having trouble with her driver's license. A grin snaked across his face as he started to walk towards them.

He walked up to them and showed his special license to the police. The police looked shocked for a moment but then saluted Yuvi and went off to his position, gesturing them to go on their way. Yuvi got on the bike now grinning smugly and then smirked at Ashi.

She kicked at a stone in annoyance and then looked back at him grudgingly. He honked the horn in response indicating her to get on.

"Look Yuvi..now..you're…really…"

"So how many miles to Ladakh?" he asked bluntly. She stared at him for a moment and then got on, a hint of a smile tugging at her lips.

'I dunno all that. Maths makes me mad. You take care of all that stuff ok?" she said as she got on to the bike behind him.

"Sure..if you want us to land up in Chennai instead of Ladakh!" he joked, grinning as he accelerated the bike into action. They were off. To Ladhak.
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Edited by xMarauderx - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great job!

can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww harshuu its aweshmeee 🤣and i cant decide which part i liked d best its al sooo awesme and sooo totally ashi uv its superb...the best part i liked is d way u hav brought deir expressions out i cld actly see an ashi smirking and a yuvi grinning.... A grin snaked across his face as he started to walk towards them. 🤣 🤣i can soo wel see his expression and the anger in ashis eyes at this point🤣 🤣and poor ashi wld be soooo soo utterly annoyed to see the daddys boys use his daddys stature to get her out of dis situation and shw off his studdness as if he was the only one who was her massiha..her savior...🤣
and dis part is aweshmeeee aweshme aweshmee ☺️☺️
"Come on Anvesha..just a bit more…please…then you can go wherever you wanna go." His eyes met hers in the mirror and she softened at the look in their dark depths.
awwwwwww i can imagine the extent of her softness awwww 😍 😍 and then the extraa special grin he gave her in the mirrior awwwwww 😍
its just super faab harshu loved every bit of it all the crazy lines and the crazy looks...totallyy crazyyyy 🤪 🤪 kiya devilzzz...post the next part real soon cant wait to see whether dey get to ladak or chinnai 🤣


Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey harshu...........i got only one thing to say after a long time....................................................its awsome.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
i really loved it though its a AY fic i loced it....it was also very very funny........................but i could not understand one thing.........lemme read it one more time 😆
hey jokes apart awsoem man
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pehle i was crazy 4 ur oneshots😳but now i m crazy 4 ur fics as well☺️
i really cant decide which para i liked most,coz i liked d whole☺️but dis one was just awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,just awwwwwwwwwwwww😳😳
"Come on Anvesha..just a bit more…please…then you can go wherever you wanna go." His eyes met hers in the mirror and she softened at the look in their dark depths.

u just made me blush wid dis one😳😳lub u harshu🤗

aab,plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.cant wait re,seriously😳😉



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Posted: 18 years ago
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gwadddddddddd.........this is real good stuff yaar........

excellent .....

toooooo goood ..........

awesome ..........

fantastic ..........

i mean i have relly run out of words ....this is fantabulous....... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic part 👏
Edited by aditisilawat - 18 years ago

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