Taciturn Romance -::Finished::-

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok guys....this started out as an one shot...and then I promised people that it would be long. But it became so long n long that I can't post it as a one shot any longer(though I would still think of it as a one shot)

I have to dedicate it to so many people for this one!😆😆
Firstly....yshhhhh...my dear dear psychatric doctor (n official beta reader beta reader😳) who gave me psycho treatment for this one!😆
N my partner in RD love😳 thanx for all the help yshhh😳🤗

Next on the list is smriti....who I tortured so much on YM by pranking her 😆😆 So smriti...this is for you...long one!

N for saya...whoe requested this in the first place!
Request: here is my request 4 harshu(only nd only 4 harshu )
concept-ashi going along wid yuvi 2 ladak on a bike
genre-cute nd romantic

~*Taciturn Romance*~


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"What?! No ways! I am so totally not gonna…."

"Yuvraj…tum aaj raat mere saath dinner ke liye aa rahe ho and that's final!"

"But dad…and am NOT gonna do this!" "DAD!!!" Yuvi yelled after him but to no avail…his father had already left, his car leaving behind a cloud of dust in which he coughed. He kicked at a nearby stone angrily. How could his father be so manipulative? Yes, he called his father that because he no longer trusted him. He had long since known what a cold hearted man Yashwant Dev was. Yuvi had already kicked him out of his life once…but still the man came back…not out of love for his youngest son..no..but because he needed Yuvi so that he could show him off to his foreign friends. He was supposed to join his father in some political agenda of his, which required pleasing his business partners. Yuvi had also realized, from between his father's words that one of his "foreign" friends had brought his daughter with him, and so his father was so keen to get him along. Obviously, he expected Yuvi to take her around and charm her up and thus win her father's favour too. Yes, he was very good at charming people up, especially girls and normally he loved it but this time he refused to agree since it was sure to be part of his father's dirty tricks. He was sick and tired of the man and also loathed his political life. The only reason why he tolerated the man was because he was his father…and nothing else.

He went away angrily towards his shed…the only place, apart from his mom's, where he could find a bit of sanity...yes he called it his shed, atleast in his mind. He was one of the only students in the school who used it regularly and was, maybe, the sole person who appreciated its soothing tranquility...

He went inside and started playing his guitar…the music calming his anger...as nothing else could… giving him the strength he needed at that time… As his fingers moved over the strings, closing his eyes, thinking of nothing else but the music he was playing, his thoughts went back to his mom and how much he loved her. He smiled…she was his one pillar of strength as music was another pillar… and he wasn't planning to let go of wither…

Half an hour later, the Yuvi that left was almost similar… well, almost, if you did not take into account his eyes…which had lost their earlier turmoil and looking relaxed… making all the difference to his face…

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"No no Mumma…you agreed to this! Ab MP nahin aa sakti bcoz she's got her volleyball practice..she's got a big game this week! And Vrinda ek badi dar pok hai toh main kya karu? Uski masi usse nahin bhejegi! I dunno mumma…I am going! Alone…if need be!"

"Par mummum…it's so dangerous. Agar tumhein kuch ho gaya toh? Main apne aapko kabhi maaf nahin kar paungi!"

"Mumma…itna filmi dialogue mat mariye…yeh real life hai..aapka koi film shoot nahin!"

"Arrey wohi toh ain keh rahi hoon! Yeh real life hai….with real dangers! What if…"

"Haan haan mumma I know…err…mujhe kuch sunai nahin de raha hai…byee…main aaplo 10 din baad milungi!!!!!" And she hung up her phone. Ashi could not wait to get out of school…she had planned her trip since days…she had wanted to go since a long time. She had geared up her bike for this trip. After her talk with her mom, she went straight to the garage where her bike was kept along with the rest of her belongings. She put her backpack on her shoulders and then slowly took out her bike, taking care not to make too much noise. She wanted as little people to see her as was possible. As she came towards the gate, she casually sneaked past the watchman and out to…freedom.

Just as she was about to start though, a dark figure ran towards her and jumped on her bike. She yelled in shock but a hand was quickly put on her face.

"Shut up wacko! You'll rat me out or what?"

"Yuvi…." She breathed out slowly
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Edited by xMarauderx - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Finally replying😆😆 Sowwie for the late reply... but neways here i am now☺️

I just luved the way you started your many parts ka shots😳😳 With yuvi's and ashi's having a fite with their parents😉😆😆 Just awechum... and the best part i luved was yuvi in shed and AY's encounter ☺️☺️ Shed wala seemed sooooo peaceful and luvly... I just can't stop imagining it myself☺️☺️ which i never stop while reading your shots and fics😳😳 Brillianto starting ☺️ Wished they showed this in remix... abhi se i started wishing that... bhaggu knows aage kya hoga😳😆 But neways loved the starting... and AY encounter... wow! such a sudden one😉😳😳 Well they both never stopped giving us attacks... teri fic mein bhi st part mein hi...yuvi ne shock kar diya...ashi ko😆 and me... well i would rather say tht u all talented ppl gave me attacks with all your wonderful talents☺️☺️ Luved the starting and cant wait to read further parts now☺️☺️☺️ Let me read 2nd part ☺️ more reply in next reply post☺️😉😆 But dont d/c it😳😳 Coz i luved it!!☺️

Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Next on the list is smriti....who I tortured so much on YM by pranking her 😆😆 So smriti...this is for you...long one!

😡MEANESS PERSONIFIED....good that u remembered dis...😛and am glaaad that wld be getting a huuge huge huuge doze of harshada at her best display😳

neways devilz dis rocked as always and the bigining superb...its quite evident daat ashi uv are not a couple start main so am waiting to see hw d tackyturn turns into d bestest romance ever....the best part i liked was the shed thngy deffinately..the shed truely was uvs sheds as it had witnessed al his hearrtbreaks and turmoils and even blissful joys and you very truely said it that only uv cld understand its soothing tranquility......

and am glad u hav shwn uv at a stage where hes aware that his dad is a good for nothing human being so he wld nt fall prey to his scheaming traps....and moreovr am waiting to see hw uv wld realize that he has yet another piller of strength besides his mum and his beloved guitaar and she wld fight for him wid all her blood and life...his very own ashi..☺️

and nw dnt be mean{though i knw its very very very very difficult for you but stil try😛}and post the next part SOON...dnt u derive sedastic pleasures by torturing me wid a huge wait😡plz devilz post the next one soon so daat i can awww😍🤗🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow gr8 one want u to write more 😛 ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'd write reserved too but i already read it 😆
everyone writin reserved..... 😆
anyway, nice one harshu 😊 ... though im a little confused 😕 ... ashi wanted to go wid uv or was it a coincidence or, no..... i dunno 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok harshu. plz plz plz plz dont be mad at me.. as i said my dishwasher had problems and then i had to go shopping for my school trip etc etc.. im realy really really sorry k?

so.. coming to your fic...god i love it.. i really liked the way you balanced your fic.. the way it wasnt too humorous or happy.. but it wasnt too sad either.. the beginning was really nice.. you had a nice attention getter to get people into your story.. and the way you presented the background info, plus the ashi yuvi encounter was really awesome. it was done in a discrete way and it wasnt the cliche romance types .. i also liked the way you used your adjectives.. it really suited the story well. and you have a maervelous vocabulary which is shown thru the fic.. all in all it was freakin' awesome .. kk.. now i feel like im doing a detailed analysis of your story.. but all i really want to say is that it was very good.. and i would really really (X 1000) like to read the next part.. so you HAVE to continue asap...

and even if im reserved.. i promise i will be unreserved and reply.. so for now, continue continue continue.. i LOVED it

Edited by devilangel - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwww! so beautfiully wirtten and i just love ashi n uvs cheistry... 😉 😳 ...id love to hear more.. 😉 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

i'd write reserved too but i already read it 😆
everyone writin reserved..... 😆
anyway, nice one harshu 😊 ... though im a little confused 😕 ... ashi wanted to go wid uv or was it a coincidence or, no..... i dunno 😕



lolzz...thanx for not writing "reserved" like everyone around here shri! Its nice to see that atleast something is un reserved here!

Well....you will come to know in the next part...but it's easy enough to guess!
thanx.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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mind blowin halshu...gt goin....asap 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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itz jus simply awesum 😳
luved it 😛
i want u to write more 😉

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