Taciturn Romance -::Finished::- - Page 4

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

Ah... loevely part... i had no idea what it was all about 😳😆...
Ofcoursh u dunno....ur singing the dustbin tune naa still...maybe thats why🤣
i totally love them and u have given me more the reason to 😳
i still kip reading it again and again cos its so lovely!!!!
i luved that he luved her arms around her... and that near kiss was a pure genius idea 😳😳
ofcourshhh....you very well know whatta jenie i am☺️ :-p thanx for all ur inputs🤗🤗🤗
d best idea ever in fact.. it was too good yaar... the most romantic of all...
ok ok ok ill shtop 😛
luvya loads... and get to writing more😛

-❤️Ysh❤️-

It was past midnight now and Yuvi had been driving non-stop for about four hours. His back was stiff, his eyes were stinging, his legs were aching like hell. Ashi had fallen asleep, her head resting on his back and her hands curled round his waist, securely. He was loving it.

I am soo in love with this beginning of the part itself☺️☺️ I am getting goosebumps😳😳 Its just sooo awwww☺️😍😍 Gosh harshu.... this is making me gooooo bonkers😳😳☺️ I loved this part sooo sooo soo much☺️ It was just way too awesum😳😳 Beyond awesum☺️☺️☺️ well which it is always... but this one beyond that beyond awesum too😳😳☺️

And just loved the way you made yuvi looked at ashi (aww...soo cute part😍☺️) and she just couldn't stop blushing but is trying hard to hide it ☺️ This one was way sweet☺️ And loved the way yuvi just couldn't stop looking at ashi☺️☺️ And almost kissed her once😆😳😳 Well no1 can stay away from the natural beauty😳😳😳 And if it's yuvi then to..😆☺️☺️

And the best part was the way u ended this part😆 SNOW BALLS😳😳😳 and how yuvi missed his target😆😆😆 and his last line... 'I swear I would have killed her if she didn't look so damn cute,' he thought not knowing whether he was angry with her or taken in by her....... awwwww😳😳😳 Harshu...umm noo ms.super super crazy gurl... this was way toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😍 Now ms.super super super crazy, insane gurl... pleej continue jaldi... warna super ka tag mein hata dungi😛😛😆 As you know i am in love with your this fic😳 And DHOKA! hey bhaggu itna bada word... nahi malik... main apko dhoka kaise de sakti hoon? boliye malik...boliye😆

Originally posted by: rakhi_uv

awwwwww shoooo cuteee......n i think whoever remix's script writer was shud just hav a luk at this.......he/she mite feel like doobofying in chullubhar pani 😆 😆 😆

I hope he does dubo-fy...well he/she will one day or the other dun worry. coz all AY fanz curse him atleast once every day...its become part of our daily ritual!😉😆😆

coz no1 wud hav been able to make this laddakh thing appear so awesum !!! 😳y cudnt all this b shown in remix 😭 .....
If this had been shown in remix...then there would have been no need to write this lil ficlet😉
bt my dearest harshu this thing was so well written i cud actually picturise each n every thing u wrote 😳 😳 😳 im jus awww-ing so much rite now😍
good good keep aww aww-ing😆😆😆 i dun mind ur awws...just dun do any 'ouch'😉
.....actually today im just too much in love wid ay☺️.....hav been watching their scenes n all.....n this fic jus added more to tht love ☺️ wonderful concept wonderfully written 👏 👏 👏
the ladakh fic is any AY writer's dream n am glad that its been given to me😉😳
u rock general ......proud of u 🤗 luved all the 3 parts.....ladakh trip cudnt b ne better than this 😳 😳 😳 ......the 3rd part was the cutest of all.......n i just luved the last line u wrote......
I swear I would have killed her if she didn't look so damn cute,' he thought not knowing whether he was angry with her or taken in by her.......

yup I luv this line too...one of my better ideas😉
how typical of yuvi to think tht way 😳 😳 😳 luv ya harshu sooo much 🤗.......
luv ya too🤗 keep on reading n giving such foot long replies...it helps to write
n luv ya my sweetest ay 🤗🤗 u both were magicians .....nd no1 in the universe can re-create ur magic ever again 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: *nitz_rocks*

*Finally Replying*😆

awwwww harshu😳😳😳 It just awwwwww 😍😍😍 As i said to you on ym... I just started luving the part from it's 1st line itself ☺️☺️☺️

Ohk...u better keep on liking it!😉

It was past midnight now and Yuvi had been driving non-stop for about four hours. His back was stiff, his eyes were stinging, his legs were aching like hell. Ashi had fallen asleep, her head resting on his back and her hands curled round his waist, securely. He was loving it.

I am soo in love with this beginning of the part itself☺️☺️ I am getting goosebumps😳😳 Its just sooo awwww☺️😍😍 Gosh harshu.... this is making me gooooo bonkers😳😳☺️ I loved this part sooo sooo soo much☺️ It was just way too awesum😳😳 Beyond awesum☺️☺️☺️ well which it is always... but this one beyond that beyond awesum too😳😳☺️

I loved imagining it while writing it as well😳 Rains, bikes, snow n some more things are some of my fav things to picturise😉😳
And just loved the way you made yuvi looked at ashi (aww...soo cute part😍☺️) and she just couldn't stop blushing but is trying hard to hide it ☺️ This one was way sweet☺️ And loved the way yuvi just couldn't stop looking at ashi☺️☺️ And almost kissed her once😆😳😳 Well no1 can stay away from the natural beauty😳😳😳 And if it's yuvi then to..😆☺️☺️

Lolzz....it was actually ysh's idea to make it like that n I just implemented it so thank you yshh!!!😳
And the best part was the way u ended this part😆 SNOW BALLS😳😳😳

Snoww....like I said above...its one of my fav things to write about even though I havent playe n the snow even once

and how yuvi missed his target😆😆😆 and his last line... 'I swear I would have killed her if she didn't look so damn cute,' he thought not knowing whether he was angry with her or taken in by her....... awwwww😳😳😳 Harshu...umm noo ms.super super crazy gurl... this was way toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😍 Now ms.super super super crazy, insane gurl... pleej continue jaldi... warna super ka tag mein hata dungi😛😛😆

I knoe u can't hatao-fy it however mch u try to...u cannot even steal it!!! Coz it is MINE MINE n only MINE!!!😉

As you know i am in love with your this fic😳 And DHOKA! hey bhaggu itna bada word... nahi malik... main apko dhoka kaise de sakti hoon? boliye malik...boliye😆

Theek hai baby face dudderss...is baar mein tera yakeen karti hoon par agli baar......[-(

Originally posted by: smritisashi

awwww harshu i realy wanaa thank u loads loads loads for this one i was real low and depressed and dis made my day am all happy and rocking again..

See....welcome first of all my faithful hyper city. See this is why I write cheerful things! It cheers ppl up(even if the fic is totally ridiculous) which i cannot say the same about *sad sad* fics.

told ya..ur posts always did it for me....and see again it happend...just at the right time at the right place... 🤗 thaanx devilz u rock....

happy to make you happy😉😆

and as for this part its aweshmee 😍 😍 😍 and again i dnt knw waats d best part in it in totality its aweshmeee but i just loved d way uv looked naa stared at her wen she was splashing water her discription was perfect i cld actly imagine her all sexyy and beautifull

Yeah..I guess we have chatted overly much on this topic...of ashi...and I guess watever they cut in the serial...I am trying to include it here n there and this thing is one of them! even in 'Irresistible'..I included somethings which should have been included in the remix but SA didn't(they were there in rebelde)

and den i simply adored dis......It wasn't done to think about her… not when they were nothing…they had broken up a long time ago and now they were just friends and he didn't want to crumble their feeble friendship too. u knw devilz its only ashi uv who can think of saving deir friendship in dis way controllng deir inner most desiers and first concentrating on present rather than repenting for the past......

Exactly! thts why we all love them right??😳

and den i loved al the smal one liners u used like.... Yuvi tried not to stare at her too much. As it is, he was having trouble concentrating on the bike, after the incident when he almost kissed her. awwww waat perfect discription

thank you!!! One liners I luv!😳

but the one part that left me awing was dis one

It was past midnight now and Yuvi had been driving non-stop for about four hours. His back was stiff, his eyes were stinging, his legs were aching like hell. Ashi had fallen asleep, her head resting on his back and her hands curled round his waist, securely. He was loving it.

dis was just awwwwwwwwww 😍 am sooo in love wid dem all over again😍 😍

he he...dun go to sleep hyper city...waise bhi ur sleeping like a 1000 year most of the time....

arrghh whatam I saying...you ARE 1000 years old!!!!!!!!