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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Partie six! Posted in honour of napster's (sing songy) bday and dedicated to her!🤗


'Red was definitely the colour of the season', he thought as he looked out of his room window, 'Even though it's supposed to be white'.

Till now, he had seen a red bird, a copse of cherry trees highlighted in white background and a bunch of people playing in the snow, wearing red jackets. Irritated, he hit his head on the wall three times. Maybe, just maybe, it was not the fault of the bird, the trees or those red jacketed people…maybe it was some weird problem with his own head. But he didn't like to think that way…the thought was too….depressing? exhilarating? Binding? Amazing?

He shook his head, now he was going mad, the same set of questions bouncing on and on in his head.

Whizz

He suddenly looked up, all alert, as he saw something red go past his eyesight, then sighed as he realized it was just a red ball that was being thrown around down in the snow. Then unbidden, came to his mind, the image of a face, standing still, eyes half closed in anticipation, a peaceful look upon it…and those lips…those lips

Yuvi sighed and opened his eyes, thinking what a fool he had been. 'Pathetic duffer,' he thought. Why hadn't he seized the chance when he had it, bang in front of him and waiting for him too! No…he had to think of mischief (even though most of his mischief, he had learnt from her, in the first place but who was counting that?) he had to think of getting the upper hand…he had to think of games…

Now, his one chance had been stolen from him, by himself and was probably pacing upstairs back and forth, back and forth, thinking of the best way to either push him down the nearest Cliffside or dunk him in the nearest vat of the most vile looking mud.

*

Muddled…..yes…that was the theme of the day…She had never felt such a mixture of emotions as she was feeling now. She was furious…she hadn't been pranked in a long time…her reputation had more than done the trick in scaring people away from even the thought of pranking her…she was embarrassed…how could she have lost control so quickly…just because he had come so close in proximity…she was blushing…he had come too close after all…

She was furious…how dare he play along with her heart…how could he dare? He always had no regard for anyone's feelings, much less hers, he would always behave so arrogantly, with all his pride and his ego and his sick sense of humour…she was…despondent…he must be laughing at her stupidity and how he had fooled her…how he had rendered her speechless and gullible at a slight move from him…

*

He looked without interest at his surroundings. The hotel lounge was the same as ever, full of noise and the thud of bags falling down from the staircases since the bellboy always forgot to avoid the edge jutting out from the wall.

He looked around, the receptionist was now furiously arguing with the bellboy, gesturing at the stairs and at her feet, which is where most bags usually landed. A couple were going out, the woman kissing her husband on the cheek…they went away hand in hand.

A blonde girl was being a bit too cozy on the lounge sofa with her boyfriend…a young boy and his girl were playing a game of first staring at each other and then looking down at the floor, blushing.

He suddenly realized that he was surrounded by couples…in various shapes and forms…and sizes… (if you could weigh the monstrous man eyeing his wife, without breaking the weighing machine i.e.).

He felt more than a pang in his heart when he thought of his own messed up love life…and how it would come back to him always…in some weird form of the colour red…

*

Hunger finally made her come out from her self imposed confinement in her room. She was just rummaging around for food (and throwing away the millions of left over wrappers in the process) when she felt rather than saw someone's gaze on her. She turned around to find him in all his messy-hair-ed glory.

His eyes widened as he took her in…her crumpled, faded purple bathrobe with a drawing of a lion on the front, her scrunched up hair and her bunny slippers with too long teeth.

On someone else it might have looked weird…he would have definitely laughed.

But with her slightly surprised and ruffled up look and the chocolate wrappers in her hand, she looked absolutely cute. He smirked at her.

Which was totally the worst thing to do then as she glared at him and threw all the wrappers at his head. He laughed as he threw his hands over his head.

"It was just a joke!" he said, shouting between the wrappers. Ashi stopped her throwing.

"Ofcourse…it's a joke" and Yuvi was surprised to see her tone, "it's always been a huge joke for you, hasn't it?" she finished bitterly and walked away.

"What do you mean?"

"Yuvraj Dev…. rockstar…heart throb of millions…Casanova…" He just looked at her, stunned.

"Ashi, have you gone nuts? Aisa kuch nahin hai!" he said, bewildered.

"Par tumhein koi hakk nahin banta…meri feelings ko ek game banane ki,." Yuvi went up to her and put his hands on her shoulders and held on as she tried to wriggle away.

"Ashi…aisa kuch nahin hai," he said trying to emphasize each word but failing miserably as he was having a hard time trying to hold on to her. Ashi meanwhile was still muttering curses and things he dared not guess about and was thankful he couldn't hear.

"Ashi!" he finally yelled and swooping down, pressed his mouth to hers. Ashi lost track of time, memory, space and everything else and her world consisted of only one person…

They broke off after a while…gasping…their foreheads still touching.

"Don't you see? It's always been you…always"

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Ok that's it! I think I have to stop now before all of you scream and hit me for all this corniness! 😆😆😆 This was the last chapter!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
would be 1st one here tooooooo☺️☺️ Saving spotttt☺️ 😳 Thankooooooooooooo harshoooooooo🤗 loveeeeee yaaa🤗
Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
okie james its approximately 4am right now and trust meeee am helllllllllll tiered after all the editing i wana read it bt cant right nowww so wld read tomoroooooooooo bt i hate youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for ending it you meanooooooooooooooooooo and u so cunningly wrote this was the last chap in small letters so that we all dnt pounce instantly on u....meanoooooo... 😭 😭 but nayways m excited abt this last bit its gonaa be the beshttttttttttttttt 😍
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75

😍 finallyyyyyyyyy the much awaited kisssssssssss cameeeeee 😍 😍 ..and it was sooooooooo totallyyyyy 😍

youuuuuuuu and onlyyyyyyyy youuuuuuuuuu can write fics in a way that it feels its coming stright from AY's own mind☺️☺️.....siriuslyyyyy☺️..you rock jamezyyyyyy wen ot comes to red heads and their lovee and hate and fights and everything abt them🤗🤗

Red is definately in the airrrrrvv☺️..aw i loved all the weired ways yuvi happened to miss every other color except red...awwww...😍😍.....it was shoooo cuteeeeeeeee......see the advantages of having a different hair color?...your guy is saved from the mahnat of visualizing your entire face he wld happen to remember you by the wioerdest possible analogies like people's jackets and a tiny little ball.....🤣...gooood both of them are a bit cracked up inside their heads....and that is the precise reason why they r sooooooooo aweshmee😳

you used the magical word RED to perfection 👏 👏 👏 its soo making the fic all the more AYish 😳 😳 but the best use of it was this one

He felt more than a pang in his heart when he thought of his own messed up love life…and how it would come back to him always…in some weird form of the colour red…

awwwwwwwww 🤗 🤗 they r soo soo cuteeeee i love the indirect ways they try getting back to each other always 😍 ☺️

He suddenly looked up, all alert, as he saw something red go past his eyesight, then sighed as he realized it was just a red ball that was being thrown around down in the snow. Then unbidden, came to his mind, the image of a face, standing still, eyes half closed in anticipation, a peaceful look upon it…and those lips…those lips…


and this para oh my goooooooooooooooooooooood thats my fvtttttttttttttest part in the whole chap its just toooooooooooooo awesmeeeeee 😍 😍 😍..i can actuallyyyyyyy imagine yuviiiiiiiii and each and every bit of his expressions..awwww 😍...and ashi is looking all the more beautyfulllllllllll wen described through his eyes 😳 😳...and the way he is saying those lips..those llips.....awwwwwwww.... 😍 😍 😍...yuvi's expression at this point wld be a treat........he sounds sooooooo full of longing and sttraction....for the first time i hav visualized him soo utterlyy driven by temptations and desieres to hold her passionately 😍 ..awww...just these words are enough to create an air of utmost passion 😍 ...had ashi been infrnt of him then..he wld hav just grabbed her and kissed endlesslyyyyyyyyy 😍 😍....

god you are realyy the best wizard who can conjureee the bestttttttttttttttt love potion wen it comes to AY😍 ☺️

loved the different couples u potrayed awwwww u almost showed every vivid form and size of love....i mean even the receptionist and the bell boy🤣 🤣🤣🤣}am taking them as a couple else there isnt nay real reason why he wld drop the bags just right on her foot🤣🤣..except perhaps to see her enraged and to hav a chance to fight with her🤣}...then a cutee hubby wife relationship...a passionate one...and the very typical staring staring one as well😆😆😆. and even the mosntrous size of love🤣🤣..a real rocking way to make yuvi realize that his love might hav every shade of all of these different couples😳

and oh my goooooooooooooooooood ashi's attire towards the enddddddddd awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww🤗🤗🤗she definately wld hav looked adorablyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy irresistable..awwww..🤗🤗...and i feel the inspiration of this attire comesfrm Luna Lovegood...😳..does it? hope it does....😛

her reaction was perfect👏👏 she definatly wld hav given him a good piece of her mind like she did in this one...bt yuvi's was sooooo all the more perfect...the uncontrolaable the higly unexpected breath taking heart stopping mind numbing kissyyyyyyyyyy😍..and the best was.."its always been you....ALWAYS"☺️☺️☺️....was reminded of a certain dialouge..."shes like a sister to me......its always ben that ways..i thot you knew this"☺️perfet endinggggggggggggg devily they realy hav never needed loads of words to express their feelings👏👏👏

and i am sure by nowbe tired of reading my comment😳 but i just dnt feel like ending ittttttttttttttttt i cant belive it endedddddddddd😭😭i wldnt hav minded if u updated it every two monthsssss atleast there wld hav been a hope for more that wld hav been enough to sustain my dreamyness😭😭..but its over......😭..wel all good things do come to end...but this one wld be close to my heart alwaysssssssssssssss..and i realy wana give u a very very veryyyyyy biggggggggggggggg huggyy for creating the magic of AY all over again🤗i enjoyed every single bit of it though the most fvt bit for me is the second last chapter😳..thanx devilyyy for givingus this wonderful gift and for spreading it over months so that every time u updated the magic was once again revived🤗🤗lovee uuuuu🤗🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 finally u posted harshu nd wo bhi a loooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggg part 😉 awesome harshu dear 👏 it was d last chapter😭😭harshu,den y dun u start a new fic??😉😳
Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
AWESUME 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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halshuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuu halshuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗......i read the wholeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee of this romanceeeeee againnnn and trust meeeeeeeeeeee am sooooooooo so hyperrrrrrrrr that tomor am gona write one bigggggggggggg review on whole of it again🤗..abhi i canttttttt coz its 4am and am wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy toooooooooo dreamyyyyyyyyyyy after reading thissssssssssss😍.....i adoreeeeeeeeee this fic like anythinggggggg😍.....u know i read the second last chapter fourrrrrrrr timessssssssssss😍😍😍....oh bhagguuu u are a genious maaan when it ocmes to AYYYYYY😍😍....loveeee youuuuu🤗🤗🤗

ps....when u were happyly wtaching your darcy and blissfully ignoring me😭😭...i was lost in the terrains of laddak with ashi yuviiiiiii😍😍😍....so u meanyyyyyyyyyyyyy...i didnt miss uuuu😛🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 neva read dis awwwwwwwwwwwwwsom fic!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! it's jus... i mean it's jus woowwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

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