ashi’s revenge finished - Page 8

seriously lalit..........think over writing romantic novals..........u will be famous like REMIX in no time among the youngsters like us........👏

ok once i finsh this story

i will write one yuvi ashi love story

its tentatively titled

maine pyar kyun kiya

from yuvi's point of view(POV)

hey lalit u rock man. i just love ur story but please add something about tia and ranvir also. please please i would like to read about them also

Originally posted by: lalit1982

i have no romance in my life

so i write good romantic novels

once i get a gf

i will be like salman

maine pyar kyun kiya😆

hey lalit dont worry man without a gf u rite so well then probably with love lingering seriously in ur mind and a gf with u ,u can probably even rite better.........probably maine pyar kiya also or devdas also...u never know😉

d day was approaching soon

but ashis mind was not in it

she had no wish to celebrate her birthday

all she wanted was humiliation for yuvi

just then sonia make s her entery

"mam mam wassup , have a look at these dresses"

" hey bhaggu,is dinosaur se peecha chuda"

sonia visibly hurt " fine i am helping tia now"

aashi knowing she has hurt starts to say something but sonia has left the room

"fine all this because of yuvi i wont leave him"

yuvi was in his room

thinking of the perfect gift for ashi

no good at writing,

he was tearing pieces of his wasted efforts in paper

then he decide

direct action is what will work for me

i must confess to her in front of the world

only then wil she forgive me

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2 more episodes to go only

thanx for bearing with me

yaar lalit.....i'm desperately waiting for the next two episodes .......and more eager to read ashi and yuvi's love story...........u are simply non-stop.......👏👏

Originally posted by: zaheer101

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forgive me what does this mean

do u do not like it

d day had arrived

ashi mom was trying to get her into various outfits but ashis mind was too busy in her thoughts

she called up aditya and asked him to be ready and come to her party at maurya high

tia meanwhile was happily lokking at all the dresses that sonia was giving her

ranvir was watching her from outside telling nothing about his true love for her

yuvi was in his room rehearsing what to say when sid and nakul walk in and make fun of him

he just blasts them away

and makes his move towards the party venue

just then aditya arrives at the party

and ashi warmly greets him

making yuvi go into a jealous rage

he shouts "aditya"

wt else to say but gr8 work...i know its like a repeat telecast😉

last episode the end

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yuvi lunges towards aditya and gives him a punch in the face

black eyed aditya says" whats the matter ?"

before landing yuvi a punch that flattens yuvi on the ground

"now what do u want to say yuvi " ashi taunts him

her heart crying a thousand times

"ashi please listen to me i love u and i................"

"i dont want to listen to u"

ashi grabs the mike

" look at this man the great yuvraj dev , pleading before me ha, ha, ha"

" wheres your manhood"

yuvi taking the mike from her hands

" ashi i want to tell u sumthing , i took a bet "

ashi turns around gazing at him

confused as to what is happening

" that i will make u fall in love with me"

"but little that i knew that i also love u"

"i love u , ilove u, ilove u"

"i am ready to accept whatever punishemnt u want to give me but dont leave meplease"

tears in his eyes making no effort to wipe it

allthe people sonia tia ranvir are staring at him

slowly they turned towards ashi to see her reaction

ashi was in two minds

her haert wanted to believe but her mind was not ready

seeing yuvi so hurt

sid and nakul reach the stage and say

"ashi he really loves u that bet was just a joke but this is seriuos"

all dams that ashi had built in her heart broke away as she ran into yvi outstretched arms caring not a damn of the world

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