ashi’s revenge finished

hey this is a thought that occured in my mind

since i know rouhgly what happens in rebelde

the future of ashi yuvi is temp bliss

followed by breakup when ashi finds out

so i am thinking of writing a darkfic

about ashi's revenge

is that ok with u guys or u only want a romantic fan fic

that's ok ........i am too eager to know of ashi's revenge

ok here i go

ashi was facing the sea.the raging waves mirroring her emotions to a degree that was incomprehensible to anyone but her.

Flashback:

" Man Nakul never bet anything with yuvi " sid said

" I know ,par mere liye to deal mein fifty fifty i received half your cds" replied Nakul.

Ashi was just passing them by too happy beyond words

" Dekh le uske ke kuch bhi impossible nahi hain"

"Kaise us redhead ko bewakoof banaya"

"Aur nahi to kya temporary amnesia us dumbo ke alava kaun manta"

"dumbo hey yeh to ashi ka word hain"

"bahut oonchi ud rahi thi"

"kaise use apne pyaar mein fasaya"

ashi listened to all this a silent storm building within her

she wanted to cry

but stopped herself and merely went away

what had yuvi done to her

she loved him so much but ..........

end of flashback

will continue later

hey Lalit ur writing is really good....but u know what I really don't want to read any further....I can't bear their breakup...and I can't see Ashi so sad...the line" what had Yuvi done to her....she loved him so much" its way too emotional....I prefer staying in an illusion that the two of them r in love....especially now since the current track is like that.....but I must say awesome writing 👏 👏 👏 👏

hey anvesha rulz

dont worry i will unite them in the end

if u all continue posting reviews

i want reviews

good one lalit
keep em comin

meanwhile yuvi was in his room

he had taken it as a bet from sid

but in his heart of hearts he knew that he cared for ashi deeply

he had taken on the bet fighting his true emotions for ashi

all the way all he said was true

the realization hit him

amazing!!how can u think of all this?my brains are nil at writing fanfic

hey btw i will be away for the weekend so if anyone wants to continue please go ahead

just keep it yuvi ashi

bye c ya all on monday