ashi’s revenge finished - Page 6

Lalit its excellent.....and plz continue soon...itne lambe breaks mat lo yaar.....ab jab maine padh liya hai then don't test my patience....plz continue soon

lalit it was too good man

please ontinue cant wait too long yaar

already 12hrs 15 min have passsed and today is saturday

hey pls continue

its really sad but is this the last time yuvi n ashi r going to break up? i hope it is

sorry guys i couldnt upload the next part on saturday

i was filing my tax return on saturday the last day was on sunday so

11th hour work was pending for me

i hope u guys understand

as i work under tight schedules in the IT industry

fan fiction is a way of relieving my stress onl;y

so if u like my story please bear with me

making out her way from his arms

ashi says" dont be jealous"

and continues" yuvi i am yours come to my birthday i will show to the world how much i luv u"

yeah right she says to herself

yuvi wanting to argue but unable to , feels relieved that she loves him

little knowing that the explosion that was waiting to explode for him

ashi went away plotting her own revenge leaving yuvi mesmerised with her beauty

he was simply staring at her unable to think what would happen if she was not in his life

how could he have not realised it before

he was hopelessly in love with her

i will make up to her

i will luv her more than anyone else can even dream of

good one lalit....so kahani main twist.....maybe it'll come true...actually it has....please continue...👏

I loved it Lalit.....especially Yuvi's part....I can actually visualise it....u rock 👏 👏 👏

hey lalit that was really really cool!!!!!!!!

ur imagination is fantatic.i wont be able to do it even if think 4 a story like for 24 hrs.

keep up the good work.

we al luv reading this story.........

too good lalit !

keep it up 👏

hey lalit totally sufi.you can actually start writing novals