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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
arre baba,haan likhrahin hoon 😉 😉 hv patience 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay gies,mujhe iitni jaldi marna nahin hai😕😆warna raj ka kya hoga😳koi mujhe murder karne ka dhamki de rahan hai😕😆so,herez d next part-

part-4

dhadkano main yeh choopke dolti hai😳

rango sa zindagi main gholti hai😳

aankhon aankhon main jaise bolti hain😳

aankhon aankhon main jaise bolti hai😳

haulese😳

dheerese😳

kitni narmise😳

kitni dheerese😳

flashback

ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iii😕

kya hai yuvi??why r u screaming??

ashi babes,kabhi toh apne bf se pyaar se baten karo karo yaar,duniya ke sabse handsome hunk is ur bf.kya tum uske sath thoda time spend nahin karna chahte??😳😆😉

ashi was abt 2 laugh,but she controlled her self nd made a face-mere pass bilkul bhi time nahin hai,mujhe tennis practise ke liye jana hai,nd kuch hi dino main tournament hai nd i hv 2 win😕

par ashi,tennis se easy sport toh ho hi nahin sakta.nd koi bhi iis game ko khel sakta hai.

kyun??

kyunki-yuvi came behind of ashi nd hugged her tight-kyunki itni badi racket se iitni choti ball ko toh koi bhi mar sakta hai

nd as soon as he completed d sentence he ran away 4m there,ashi ki dimag main yeh baat ghossne main thodasa time laga,but as soon as she realised wat yuvi said he also ran behind him-PSYCHO,JUST WAIT,I AM NOT GONNA LEAVE U😡

nd she almost caught her nd threw her arms arnd yuvis neck 4m behind nd jumped up nd twirled her legs arnd his waist (it was a like piggie back ride😆)nd hit him hard-psycho😳

wackoooooooooo-nd yuvi pulled her nd took her in his arms nd kissed her on her lips passionately-its ur punishment😳

ashi gigled-yuvi plz,leave me,i hv 2 go

no ways,i am not gonna leave u

nd fighting,arguing nd gigling they both disappeared 2wards d shed

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mumma,mumma-harsh was almost shouting

but ashi nd yuvi still lost in each others eyes

in between ranveer went inside 2 take sumthing,when he came back he saw ashi nd yuvi were standstill nd looking into each others eyes.he understoond everything nd he smiled.he came 2 harsh nd picked him up nd went 4m there widout disturbing them.leaving dem alone wid their thoughts😉

suddenly yuvis cell rang😕

nd both ashi nd yuvi were out of their dream world

they both were really ashamed😳

2 avoid dis ashi almost ran away inside

nd yuvi picked up d phone

hallo

sweetheart,where r u??

tani,woh. .woh mujhe mera ek old friend mil gaya mall main nd i came 2 his house,i am sorry

abhi aajao,mumma tumhe bula rahin hai

yeah,cuming,bye

ah yuvi

haan tani

i love u

there was a long pause nd after dat yuvi cleared his throat nd said after hesitation-i love u 2

ashi,who was now cuming 2wards dis room along wid ranveer heard dis nd she was heartbroken😭

ranveer noticed dis,but he acted as if everything is fine.he came 2 yuvi nd asked-toh banaa,aaj aap yehi rahenge naa??

yuvi turned-ah woh dude.nahin,actually gharse phone tha,i hv 2 leave now.bye dude,bye ashi.

nd he was abt 2 run almost but ashi asked her in a extreme cold voice-yuvi,phone kiska tha??

nd after a bit hesitation he decided 2 speak d truth,after all she used 2 love ashi a long back,7 years passed,ashi is married nd hving a kid,so wats harm in dis if he is also getting married....🤢

woh meri mangetar,we came her 2 get married nd i hv 2 leave now.bye.will meet later.seeya.bye ranveer.

nd he left.

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sayanti_ashiuv thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
part 4 posted gies,plz comment 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Thia part was mindblowing . so well -written and romantic also 👏 .

Loved the part were Ashi -Yuvi were lost in each other's thoughts .

Plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
sucha sweet part 👏

espically the flash back 😳 😳 😳

but hey bhaggu!!!is Yuvi really gonna marry Tanya? 😭 😭 nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta 😭

contiue soon

Divz 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
sucha sweet part 👏

espically the flash back 😳 😳 😳

but hey bhaggu!!!is Yuvi really gonna marry Tanya? 😭 😭 nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta 😭

contiue soon

Divz 😳 😳
divya_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
sucha sweet part 👏

espically the flash back 😳 😳 😳

but hey bhaggu!!!is Yuvi really gonna marry Tanya? 😭 😭 nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta 😭

contiue soon

Divz 😳 😳
divya_92 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
sucha sweet part 👏

espically the flash back 😳 😳 😳

but hey bhaggu!!!is Yuvi really gonna marry Tanya? 😭 😭 nahi, yeh nahi ho sakta 😭

contiue soon

Divz 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
Nice part saya 👏 *2000000000 😉

Ashi and Yuvi lost in each other's eyes 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
saya di this part was mind blowing..excellent work.. 👏 👏 👏

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