unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67

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part-1

naa koi tension lena😳

nahin koi darke jeena😳

chahi hai masti yahan😳

remix hain aapna jahan😳

tania looked 2 her fiance with surprise,they had been in london past 7years,but she never saw her boyfriend singing,nd now wat happened wid him dat he is singing,nd dats also in plain??

jaanu,r u okay??😕-she placed her hand on his 4head

yeah,absolutely,dun worry

u r singing??i still cant believe it,i hv not seen u singing b4

kyun main nahin ga sakta kya??

no,but....

okay fine,lemme tell u,when i was in college,we used 2 hv a band named REMIX nd it contained 4 members,nd at dat time we were very popular,nd so were our songs

really??members kaun kaun the??

okay,main,ranveer,tia nd anvesha

yuvi stopped suddenly after uttering d name-ANVESHA😳

kya hua sweetheart??bolo,main sun rahin hoon

huh??nothing,will talk later,haan??abhi i am feeling sleepy

nd yuvi closed his eyes(in his mind)-anvesha....ashi....patta nahin tum aab kahan ho,kaise ho,sayd aabtak tumhari shadi bhi ho gayee ho aur tum mujhe bhool bhi gaye ho nd u r really happy wid ur family

he thought abt dat day,d worse day of his life.he had 2 leave ashi nd he came london wid mom nd dad....those days,nd after dat tania came in his life,but he never 4got ashi,he used 2 console himself,but actually he was trying 2 make himself fool by consoling....

we r abt 2 land,passengers r requested 2 fasten their seatbelts,switch off their cellphones,straighten up their seats,d outside temparature is....

huhhhhhhhhhhhhh,finally we r in india-tania smiled

yeah-he replied,though all d memories were floating back 2 him through his memory lane,how ashi slapped him hard dat night,he cried nd finally took d decision of leaving india,maurya nd spl. ASHI,he just wanted 2 run away 4m her

hi beta??-yashwant dev asked

hi dad,hi mom-yuvi replied

toh yeh hai humare bahu??-said meera looking 2wards tania lovingly nd smiled

kitni pyari hai-meera smiled again

kaise maa ho tum??bahu ke aate hi beta ko bhool gaye??-yashwant dev was joking

aap chup rahiye,waisebhi....

mom,dad,abhi tak yeh aapki bahu nahin hai

haan,haan,par bahut jald toh ho jaye gi naa

okay,fine,aab chale??mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

haan,haan,chalo

nd yashwant dev.meera,yuvi nd tania left d airport

next day

tum aaoge yeah nahin tania??

no yuvi,u go nd jo tumhe chahiye,le aao,will go ne other day,k??

okay,fine

nd yuvi left 4 d mall

iitne sare log??aur iitni crowd-yuvi was thinking after he bought his neccesary things 4m d shop,suddenly he heard a familiar voice-duh-uh!!yahan aao,yahan aao,ria,hey bhaggoo,ria

no,no,no-nd yuvi noticed a sweet lil beautiful girl is running nd after him a girl,no a woman is running,she is very familiar 2 yuvi,she is tall nd shapely,her hair was tightly tied in a ponnytell,but sum red streaks were just left open,which made her look more beautiful nd stunning,she has not changed yet,though 7 years has passed,she is wearing a simple capris nd t-shirt,b4 yuvi cud do nething.a man came 4m behind nd picked up d boy in his arms

hey bhaggoo,tum abhi aa rahen ho,peeche 2 hour se chilla rahin hon,the kahan tum??-ashi was angry

i am sorry ashi,humse galti ho gayee hai,plz hume maaf kar dijiye

RANVEER!!!!yuvi was shocked

aapne baccho par khud ko dhayan rakhna chahiye-ashi is still angry

accha,kya yeh aapke bache nahin hai??-ranveer asked her smiling

ashi also smiled-okay baba,galti ho gayee,hume maaf kar dijiye.aab chale??

yuvi was still in a shock,ashi,ashi is married wid ranveer????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wat????????? tune apni 2nd fic. shuri bhi kar di.......... yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...huggie huggie... now let me read it... so shhhhhhhhhhh...no disturbing...
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mind blowin sayaaaaaaaaa...👏 .........awesummmmmmmm 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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mind blowin sayaaaaaaaaa...👏 .........awesummmmmmmm 👏 👏 👏 fantasticccccccccc.............its sooooooooooooooooo good.......... i feel like cumin to kol and give u a tight huggie

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Posted: 19 years ago
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so krits,cum naa 😳 nd gimme a tight huggie 😉
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saya multiply them wid 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

and ya it's aaaaaaaa... AWESUMMMMMMMMMMMM...FANTASTIC.......MIND BLOWINGGGG...OUT OF THE UNIVERSE... and all gud words...tht represent the word BEST...GUD...and all tht's kinda wrds...

nd ab conti. soon... varna u know naa...😡

and ya... ASHI nd RANVEER married???????????

sayaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hehe,gujju wait baba 😉 will reveal d suspense soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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The start was mindblowing ...Yuvi engaged ....and Aashi married ( and I know Aashi is not married to Ranveer 😉 .The girl's name is Ria that means she is Tia's daughter and Aashi considers her to be her daughter too ....RIGHT 😉 . I hope what I am thinking is right 😉 coz I can't imagine Aashi- Ranveer , phir meri Tia ka kya hoga 😭 and I know even u can't imagine Aashi with anyone else other than Yuvi )

The way u intoduced Yuvi then Aashi was way too good 👏

And YD seems to a positive character in ur fic 😉 😃 , maybe I am wrong .....

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon , can't bear the suspense.




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Posted: 19 years ago
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ya even i thought the same as reshmi this is true hain na 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: remixer

ya even i thought the same as reshmi this is true hain na 😉

tum dono ke muh mein all the chocolates(sweet 1's...not dark chocolate)...coz i can't see ashi wid ne1 else... she is only UV's😳

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