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Posted: 19 years ago
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sis,congo,u r d MOTW 😳 πŸ˜ƒ *huggie* 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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okay,herez d 3rd part-

part-3

yuvi,tum??-finally ashi managed 2 speak

huh....yeah,hi ashi,u...u.. u r looking beautiful-finally yuvi said

t..thanx yuvi-though ashi blushed deeply but she managed 2 utter d words

yuvi,toh tum

ashi,woh....

nd both stopped nd laughed

okay,u first-ashi said wid a smile

yuvi was abt 2 ask sumthing,but suddenly harsh came running there-mumma,aap ria ko kahiye woh mujhe PSYCHOTIC HEMAN naa bulaye.he was really angry.

ofcourse bulaoongi,u DUH-UH SELFISH SPOILT COCONUT TREE.-ria was shouting 4m behind

arre,par hua kya hai??-ashi asked bewildered

woh,toh aap dono yahan hai aur lad rahen hai,ashi,humne aapse pehle bhi kahan tha ki hume ibdonoko saath nahin lana chahiye tha par aap....-ranveer noticed yuvi suddenly nd he was shocked-banna,aap yahan??

yuvi gave a smile 2 manage d odd situation-hi dude

1 hour later in ranveers house-

toh bana,aap batiye aapka kya samachar??-ranveer asked him while sipping his coffie

haan dude,batao toh sahi-ashi was trying 2 act normal

woh,nothing,now i am a lawyer in london,dats it....aur tumhari wacko??-yuvi avoided d question tactfully

banna,aab toh inhe wacko maat bulaiye,yeh aab bahut bade business man ki wife hai aur khud bhi in a famous tennis player of india-ranveer rolled his eyes

oh,really??kiska??-yuvi was trying 2 his best 2 hide his emotions

oh yahan ki famous business man mr. neal miss anvesha ki pyaar main bilkul pagal the,aur.................-ranveer laughed

oh,dats a really gud news,congrats ashi-yuvi was trying 2 smile,but cud not

thanx.....aah,ranveer,tumhe kuch snacks chahiye?yuvi tum kuch loge??

wah ashi wah,aap humari kitni dhayyan rakhti hainπŸ˜†tia se bhi jyadaaap kitne aache hai,toh aur ek cup coffie layiye naa,puh leeseπŸ˜†

thakur,doosron ki bibi ke saath flirt karna bandh karo,warna timbo jab paris se lautegi,aur yeh dekhegi,toh.....nd agar neal ko patta chal gaya na....tohπŸ˜†

yuvi,who was solely enjoying d whole convy,started gigling nd asked-so,tia is a famous fashion designer now??

yup,aur us 12 kg makeup box se tum except fashion kya expect bhi kar sakte ho??u know TIA....

AHUJA HONA KOI WAISI BAAT NAHIN HAI-yuvi completed d whole sentence

nd both bursted out into laugh

mammaaaaaaaaaaaaa

aab kya hua hai harsh??

masiiiiiiiii

haan ria,bolo

masi, dekhiye naa aapki beta mujhse yeh sab kya keh rahan hai??

harsh,tumne ria ko kya kahan hai??-ashi was angry

harsh showed his tongue 2 ria nd hide behind yuvi-mom,chill,iitna tension maat lijiye,maine bas yeh kahan ki ria tennis player toh koi bhi ban sakta haiπŸ˜†

accha,aisa kyon??πŸ˜•

simple mom.kyunki iitne bade racket se utne chote ball ko marna is soooo simple,koi bhi akr sakta hai.hai naa uncle??-harsh hit yuvi

yuvi nd ashi along wid ranveer was going 2 laugh after hearing it,but they cud not.....

a faint whistle came in their mind😳

comments!!!!!!nd next part contains a flashback between ashi n yuvi,romantic scene,ahem ahem 4m mauryaπŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
part 3 posted gies,plz comment πŸ˜• sorry,it was boring,i know
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
rocking part sayantika di πŸ‘
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
nice part saya continue soon πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
hey saya.....this is an awesum part.....n yeh kids.....dey r really cute...plsssssss continue soon....... 😳 πŸ˜› 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very good man πŸ‘ now try to cont soon 😭 tum bohot der lagati ho itna itejar to mut karwavo 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
awesome part Saya Di πŸ‘

finally, i was right to suggest u to write a fanfic 😳 😳 πŸ˜‰


waiting for the next part 😳 😳
continue soonnn

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
Awsome Saya!!!!! Yaar itni der kyun lagaayee tumne??? Main bhi apni fic continu karne jaa rahi hoon. I know i know. thank god right? Chooly bohat der lag gayee mujhe. But yours is rocking. Jaldi continue karo.

luv u hamesha hamesha hamesha,
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
great part Saya!!!


please continue soon!

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