unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 37

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Posted: 18 years ago

part-23

yuvi put her head on ashis lap nd ashi was running her fingers though his lovely curls😳

yuvi

yes baby....😳

dun call me baby😡

okay devil😈😉😆😳

ashi gave him an angry look😡😡

nd she got up suddenly nd yuvis head fall flat on d bench😆😆

ouch!!!!!😡ashi,wats dis??????????😡😡

wat??😡

wat??chori aur uparse sinajori😡galti tumne kiya aur mujhse pooch rahin ho wat??😡😡

okay fine,i am leaving then😡

nd very reluctantly she got up nd started moving😡

hey bhaggoo(yuvi in his mind)ye to sach main ja rahin hai😭

nd yuvi got up nd caught ashis hand-ashi,i am sorry😳

hmmmmmmmmmm

i said sorry baba😳

nd now he was holding his earz(remember d woof woof scene😳😳)-i am sorry ashi😳

ashi cudnot stop her laughter nd she stroked his hair wid love nd said-sorry to muhjehi bolna chahiye,i am sorry yuvi,tumhe jyada laga to nahi??

y-haan,laga to hai😉

a(concerened)-kahan??show me

nd ashi went close 2 yuvi nd yuvi pulled her nd locked her in his arms😉

a-yuvi,kya kar rahen ho..koi dekh lega😳

now yuvi was kissing her-i dun care😉😳waise bhi pyar kiya to darna kya......😉😆

a-😆😆ha ha ha.very phunny, yuvi,dun be filmy like mom😆

y(changing topic)-ashi,i am very much upset wid u😡😉

a(surprised)-y?wat hv i done??

y-well,tumne mera sath jo behave kiya uska compensation kahan hai??😉😉

a(pretending)-wat compensation??😕

y(getting naughty)-well,d compensation is(bringing her closer)u hv 2 kiss me😉😳

a-wat??now??no ways!!!!!never!!😉😆

y(cuming closer)-accha??😉

a-no,yuvi,no........yuvi...yuvi........yuvi......noooooooooo

ns she was abt 2 run but yuvi caught her at once nd pulled her closer😳

he raised his right finger and out it over her lips. She stopped talking automatically and looked at him. He looked back. They both had eyes full of love😳 he held her very close to him, he could her soft breathing they snuggled s closer and closer to each other and stare in each other's eyes.. they wished they could just be like that for the rest of their lives…he pulled her a bit closer .. their hands were touching each other and there was almost no gap between them.. they forgot where they were😳 the only thing they cared about was about each other... his arms were stroking her hair now… they had such a conveying message. His eyes.. his fingers.. his look.. they all conveyed the same look, everything seemed to have a feeling of love.. she felt protected in his arms.. this was the only thing worth living for.. this was how she wanted to die.. in his arms.. his hands were stroking her face now.. she rested slightly on his hand.. he lightly smelled her hair..she closed her eyes😳

slowly he cupped her face nd was abt 2 kiss her,but suddenly they heard sumones clapping,shocked both turned 2 see who it was nd surprised they saw neal was standing there in front of them

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Posted: 18 years ago
okay gies,i posted 2 pts 2gether,plz read nd comment 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏
bt yeh neal kahan se aa gaya 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
another fantastic part 👏



aur haan plzzzzzzz dun let any1 cum in btw Yuvi 😳 😳 n Ashi 😳 😳

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
saya jaldi jaldi cont karo jaldi.waise bot da parts were very nice 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wat????????????????only 3 comments i got 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
saya i read both the parts it was mindblowing please continue soon👏 saya neal ko laana zaroori tha kya? 😡kabab mein haddi😡
Edited by iloveashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
saya u hav left me spellbounded...both the parts were fabulous,mindblowing babes...after reading each n every line i felf as if the scenes are going on infront of my eyes...
i think mujhe smiley nahi post karna chahiye kyunki in parts ke liye kitne bhi icons post karoo sab kab honge
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part Saya!!!
it was getting so romantic...yeh neal kahaan se aaya..saara mood spoil kardiya...

please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: gsoni

great part Saya!!!
it was getting so romantic...yeh neal kahaan se aaya..saara mood spoil kardiya...

please continue soon

u bet gopi and I hope he wasnt clapping sarcastically u know what I mean na I hope he was happy like all of us to see Ashi with Yuvi

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