unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 36

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey gr8 part 👏
continue soon n plz dont end ur fic 😭 take some inspiration frm kekta her soaps are on air frm ages but dont turn this into a sob sob saga 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey gr8 part 👏
continue soon n plz dont end ur fic 😭 take some inspiration frm kekta her soaps are on air frm ages but dont turn this into a sob sob saga 😃 -lol😆😆u want me 2 land up in hospital??😉😉dat i wud turn it 2 a sad ending,no ways,it will be happy ending 4 sure😳😳nd remember,v belong 2 anti kekta group😉**devil smile**so,never ever wud teke inspirations 4m her😡[/QUOTE]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
are i meant to say dat u r going 2 end ur fic soon n i dont want dat.bas 20 years ka leap mat lena.take inspiration frm in the sense dat her stupid sagas continue even today with virtually no storyline n u thinking of ending the fic even though u can take the story further.no offences but raj soon is going to turn into a dad when kahaani wll b taking a leap in december 😭 sorry if u didn't liked my pov.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: saku90

are i meant to say dat u r going 2 end ur fic soon n i dont want dat.bas 20 years ka leap mat lena.take inspiration frm in the sense dat her stupid sagas continue even today with virtually no storyline n u thinking of ending the fic even though u can take the story further.no offences but raj soon is going to turn into a dad when kahaani wll b taking a leap in december 😭 sorry if u didn't liked my pov.

hey saku,chill,its k😳i just wanted 2 tell ya ki ye story remix ki hai nd kabhi na kabhi to end honihi hai na😳i just wanted 2 let u know dat this is not like d never ending kekta soaps😆😆lol!!nd yup,i know kahani is going 2 take a leap😉😭i just hope raj will leave kahani😳**fingers crossed**😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey cont soon plz plz pzlz very nice part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
k i understand n plz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
Plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago

part-22

na saans loon tere khatir

jeena boorasa lage

aaja mere

aab roboroon

jeena nahin bin tere

tere bin.......main yun...kaise jiya.........

kaise jiya............

kaise jiya............

tere bin.................

tears were floating down yuvis cheeck after tia was done wid all d missunderstandings nd d story of past 7 years,now everything is clearly evident 2 yuvi......he was not able 2 stop his tears.he was not trying though....even tia nd ranveers eye was also moist....tia wiped her tears nd said 2 yuvi-well yuvi,tia told u everything,nd tia knows ki ashi ko iss puri planet main sirf tum hi khush rakh sakte ho,sirf tum...wo kya kaha tha ashi ne..haan....tum loser ho,coconut tree ho,daddys boy ho,par ho to ashi ki hi heman nd psycho😳😳hai na yuvi??

a smile came in yuvis face😊-yeah,nd wo pagal hai,stupid hai,panga queen hai,crazy hai,insane hai,par jo bhi hai,meri wacko hai😳nd i cant lose her,chahe jo bhi ho jaye,not at any cost,use khokar mujhe ehsaas hua ki maine kya khoya tha.aur main phirse wo galti nahin karoonga,i will win her nd this time 4ever.......

meri dil ki rani tu

meri khushiyon ka mausam

mere khabon ki tabeer

mere swapno ki tasbir

bin tere kaise yaar

wo jeet ho ya haar

tere sang hai sab kuch

tu na ho to bekar

bin tere kya hai jeena

bin tere kya hai jeena

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tere yaad main pagal pal pal rota hai

bin tere na jaage ye na sota hai

aksar tanhaiyi main tujhe pukare

na jor dil pe chale

hare hare hare

hum to dilse hare

hare hare hare

hum to dilse hare

ashi was sitting on a bench in d park near d farmhouse.she was seeing d mountain infront of her,but was thinking sumthing else...suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder..she turnrd nd saw d person nd she was shocked. she replied-wat r u doing here??

d person sat besides her nd took her hand in his,kissed her hand,ashi shivered,she wanted 2 push him away,but her heart betrayed wid her as her heart used 2 do always infront of him only.......😳

but she took her hands 4m his nd replied-yuvi,plz tum yahan se jao😭

ashi-his voice was firm but gentle-no ashi,main jane ke liye nahin aaya hu ashi,nd jab wapas jaonga tumhe sath main lekar hi jaaonga😳

yuvi,plz-she was avoiding looking at his eye.yuvi came closer,so close she cud feel his breathe on her neck,their closeness was driving her crazy,he softly whispered in her ears-I LOVE U😳😳

three magical words.....ashi cudnot stop herself,she just hugged him tightly....soon they were in each others arms.nd d entire world melted away......😳

lamha lamha doorin yun bighalti hai😳

jaane kis aag main ye sabnam jalti hai😳

khahison ki sham dhalti hai😳

khahison ki sham dhalti hai😳

jaane kis aag main ye sabnam jalti hai😳

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww, gawd!!!!! you've really left me speechless 👏

i wish you were next to me at the moment I would hv hugged u tight 😳

btw, me 2 listening to Tere Bin 😳 😳 (lovely song) n tears r rolling down my eyes 😭

continue sonnnn

Divz 😳 😳

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