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Posted: 18 years ago

part-21

~~flashback~~

to bana,aap kaisa feel kar rahen hai?..aap ashi se appna dil ki baat confess karne ja rahen hai.......-ranveer teased yuvi😉

dude,i am nervous.......actually sach poocho to i am getting butterflies.......-yuvi was really nervous

ranveer was abt 2 laugh but somehow he controlled his laughter nd replied-bana.sab theek ho jayega,fikar maat kijiye.....

yup dude,i hope so,waise bhi aaj college ka last din hai.......iske baad humme se kaun kahan chala jayega v dun know,so i must try........now or never😳-yuvi was trying 2 gather guts.....

yup bana,dats d spirit....-ranveer showed him high five

nd both hugged

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ashi.plz meri baat kehna ka mauka to do mujhe.....

yuvi,just shut up!!i dun wanna talk wid u.......just go nd talk wid ur bimbo girlfriend.......😡🤢

bye thakur

nd ashi stormed out...........

ranveer was shocked,he asked yuvi-bana,yeh sab ho kya rahan hai??

but yuvi dint reply,he ran behind ashi leaving ranveer alone in d room shocked,confused nd sad

yuvi followed ashi till they reached 2 a quiet,out of d way corridor nd he caught ashis hand....she jerked 2 a halt nd yelled-psycho!!leave my hand.........

ashi,plz ashi,mujhe ekbaar kehne ka mauka to do.......

no.....

ashi,plz-he begged-last nite jo bhi hua shyla ke sath.....

i dun want ne explanations.......kal college ki farewell party main u hv kissed shyla,nd now u want me 2 be ur gf??yuvi,how cud u??😡😡

but ashi,i was drunk.......

shut up yuvi..........😡i saw u all over her.........😡

exactly,u saw me all over her,but yeh bhi to ho sakta hai it was her who came on 2 meashi,just think...i mean listen main shy se pyar nahin karta,even i hate looking at her,den suddenly y kissed her??d only reason is i was drunk..........

ashi was abt 2 say sumthing,but she saw shy cuming there

shy came nd said-hi yuvi.actually maine last nite ke proposal ke baare main soch ke dekha,u said u love me......but i wanted time 4m u.......but now i am sure i luv u 2

now it was enuff 4 ashi,she just gave yuvi a look nd left d scene

yuvi was totally shocked.he asked shy-listen shy,sach sach batao..wat i hv done wid u??😡tell d truth......😡

wo yuvi kaal party main tumhe pata nahi achanak kya hua...u felt bad.so i took u 2 d locker room,suddenly u kissed me nd told me u luv me.......🤢

wat??😡

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i dun understand,main ashi ko kya samjhaoon........i think i shud confess my feelings 2 her nd i am sure ki shyla lie kar rahin hai,but main kaise prove karoon??-yuvi was clueless

he decided 2 hv a talk wid ashi again......

so he knocked her room nd requested mp nd vrinda-plz girls,giv me 5 mins,plz

nd after mp nd vrinda left yuvi said 2 ashi-ashi,wo main.......

ashi was silent nd was not saying nething.......

yuvi thought it a positive sign......

he leaned 4 ward nd took her in his arms😳

but ashi pushed him away nd slapped him tight-just get lost!!dun want 2 see ur face😡just go away......😡

tears were being formed in his eyes,he wiped them nd left wid this feeling he had lost her 4ever😭😭yuvi had lost ashi 4ever

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but next day wen tia told her d truth,dat she saw shyla nd yuvi 2gether in d locker room..nd shyla lied,yuvi dint kiss her at all,it was shy who was trying 2 kiss yuvi.but yuvi pushed her away nd he was taking ashis name only,nd finally shy gave up nd left..tia saw all these wen she was returning 2 her room,coz she 4got her cellphone in her room.......ashi realised wat mistake she had done......after ashi slapped yuvi, yuvi left nd noone had seen him.........ashi rushed 2 yuvis house 2 aplogise but she heard dat yuvi along wid his parents left 4 london......nd even d neighbours cudnot gave her ne address or nething else.......yuvi left leaving his guiter,his friends,his life,nd most importantly ASHI...............

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d day ashi still can remember she was crying uncontrollably in ranveers arms.....

ranveer was trying 2 console her,he had never seen ashi crying like dis,crying her lungs out.......crying like a kid........

he was stroking her hair 2 give her comfort,but ashi was saying-yeh sab meri galti hai,mujhe uski baat ek baar sunni chahiye thi,warna wo kabhi nahin jata,is sab ka zimmedaar main hoon,main.........eo chala gaye,main kabhi aapne aap ko maaf nahin kar sakti hoon

ashi,jo hona tha so ho gaya......

no ranveer-she was sobbing-main uski baat kyun nahin suni??main to use jaan ti hoon.phirbhi i believed dat b**** shyla😭😡maine use hurt kiya,yuvi ko😭😭main aapne aapko kabhi 4give nahin kar sakoongi,kabhi nahin,meri wajah se remix toot gaya,agar main use believe kar leta to yuvi yahan reh jata nd remix bhi same rehta,maybe hum sath main rehte......😭it all my fault......😭kyun ranveer,kyun??

ranveer dint know wat 2 do,he just hugged her tight nd prayed 2 bhaggoo-bhagwan,plz ashi ko guts do yeh sambhakne ke liye,i cant see my best friend like dis..........

END OF FLASHBACK

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SORRY 4 ULTRA BORING PART,ACTUALLY I WAS SLEEPING WHILE WRITING THIS PART........

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part!!!
not boring at all

please continue soon
H3LLRZR thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay!! i'm the first to reply
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was a totally rocking part 👏 plzz multiply dese wid more 1000000


n i guess i shld stop my fic for a while, n take classes frm you.. on how to rite a fic 😃 😃

n it wasnt atall boring😃 😃

continue soonnn

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_92

it was a totally rocking part 👏 plzz multiply dese wid more 1000000-thancheew😳


n i guess i shld stop my fic for a while, n take classes frm you.. on how to rite a fic 😃 😃 -😆😆stop giving me maska,haan,enough😉

n it wasnt atall boring😃 😃

continue soonnn

Divz

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Posted: 18 years ago
only 3 replies i got 😭 i am not gonna cont 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome parts sayantika.
i read a lot of parts of ur fanfic and i m totally speechless.mindblowing.
cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox

awesome parts sayantika.
i read a lot of parts of ur fanfic and i m totally speechless.mindblowing.
cont soon.

cant believe it dat tui satyii porechis😆neways,mene nilam dat u read them😆😉see,ami koto bhalo😉😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
Saya who told you that it was not good 😡 It was just toooooooooooooooo much good 👏 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago

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