unlucky in love,new part,part 28,page 67 - Page 38

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Posted: 18 years ago
i will cont but lemme get sum more comments πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Edited by sayanti_ashiuv - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
arre di,how many comments do u want?? 😑 cont soon,warna........ πŸ˜‰ 😑 u know na πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
luv-jenny 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
nd read all d parts 2gether di πŸ˜” πŸ‘ but ye neal kahan se tapka??pluto se 🀒 plz di,my ashi nd yuvi r perfect 😳 plz di,dun disturb their kiss πŸ˜‰ 😳 y sumone always has 2 diturb their kiss?? 😑 even in remix sumone used 2 do soπŸ˜” neways cont asap πŸ˜›
luv-jenny 😳 😳
Edited by johaina - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey amazin saya ab yeh neal kya karega πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago

part-24

ashi nd yuvi broke apart at once

ashi-neal,wo,i can explain everythingπŸ˜•actually main......

widout uttering ne word he caught ashis hand tightly,nd then he turned 2wards yuvi-dude!!maine tumhe aapna dost maana tha,nd u........u.........😑

neal was so angry,he was not able 2 utter nething more😑so he started dragging ashi wid him 4m d park....not knowing wat 2 do,yuvi was standing there all aloneπŸ˜•he tried 2 stop neal-neal bro,wo actually listen,i dint want 2 hurt u,listen,i can explain everything

but neal dint stop,ashi was trying hard 2 get rid of him,but his grip was so tightnd he was holding ashis hand so tightly,dat her hand started paining nd became redshe was saying-neal,plz leave me.its paining.....u r hurting me😭ouch!!

accha??aab main tumhe hurt kar rahan hoon??😑nd wat abt u??tumne mujhe hurt kiya..mujhe dhoka diya.uska kya??😑-he was furious😑-do u hv ne explanations of ur behaviour??

wo.......main..........ummmmmm........errrrrrrr

so,tumhare pass koi jawab bhi to nahin hai na😑

no,wait neal............

ashi has made up her mind,she took a deep breath nd started-ruko neal,main tumhe aapna sach bata dena chahti hoon,yuvi is d only one in my life,sirf jise main chahti hoon😳dekho neal,i never loved ushe paused nd again started-but u will be in my heart 4ever as my best frndπŸ˜›πŸ˜›nd main sirf aur sirf yuvi ko hi chahti hoon😳nd i just cant live widout him.........😳he is my love,my life😳😳d only one who can make me smile😳😳i hope now u r clear wid my points neal....

neal did nothing just freed her hand nd said-jao ashi........😊

wat??-ashi cudnot beleive wat she was seeing

ya ashi,u r free,i know ki u luv yuvi,bas tumhare mooh se sunna chahta tha,wo to mujhe tabhi pata chal gaya tha jab harsh ko yuvi ka msg mila 4m ur cell nd he called me,phir main yahan aagayaπŸ˜ƒi was abt 2 tell u everything,nd phir jab dekha u 2 r back 2gether to i thought kyun na thoda drama ho jayeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰sorry,agar tum dono ko bura laga toπŸ˜•but i was just kidding,aur koi intention nahin tha meraπŸ˜ƒ

the he went 4ward 2 yuvi nd patted his shoulder-sorry bro,bas thoda mazak kar liya,i hope u 4gave me😳

yuvi was still shocked,he just said-its okay dude,thanx a ton man!!

nd both neal nd yuvi hugged each other😳

neal-well ashi,soon i will be leaving 4 paris,aab se main uhan hi rahoonga.......bas jo bhi formalities puri akrni hai,i mean divorce nd all dat stuffs,v will do it,k??πŸ˜ƒ

ashi went 2 neal nd placed a hand on his shoulder-neal,i am sorry😭

she was crying....

neal hugged him tight-hey sweety ash,its okay......actually d truth is u never belonged 2 me😳

he was wiping her tears........

ashi was in neals arms,nd neal was saying 2 yuvi wid a sad smile-u know wat yuvi??maine humehsa ashi ke aankhon main yeh 5 years ek udasi dekhi hai,jaise ki kuch kami hai.kuch adhurapan hai,kabhi bhi ye dil kholkar nahin hasti thi....kuch kami mehsoos hoti thi ise,maine bahut socha kyun ye aise gumsum rehti hai?maine bahut socha,par muhje pata nahin chala...........but u know wat jabse tum aaye ho na iske zindagi main,iska chehrahi badal gaya hai,iski aankhen main ek khusiyan nazar aata hai jo pehle kabhi na thi,atleast maine to dekha nahin in paanch saalon main.........phir main samajh gaya agar ash ko koi khush rakh sakta hi to sirf tum ho ho wo admi.......😳😳sirf tum.aur kabhi bhi ise hurt maat karna😳😳

nd den she stroked ashis hair-go ash,ur love is waiting 4 u there😳😳

nd den neal took ashi wid him 2 yuvi nd placed ashis hand on yuvis nd said-HAPPY BEGINING!!😳😳my heartiest wishes r wid u always........😳😳

nd he left wiping his tears........

after neal left........ashi was still crying.yuvi hugged her tight nd said-ashi,plz baby,dun cry😭

yuvi-ashi was lying in yuvis arms

ya baby😳

yuvi,neal kahan he is leaving 4 paris,to ahrsh ka kya hoga??

hona kya hai??-yuvi kissed her forehead-i will adopt him,coz i see him like my son😳

nooooo yuvi,baat wo nahin hai-ashi pushed yuvis hand-neal harsh ko bahut chahta hai,aur he just cant leave widout him........nd same is wid me........aur main use kaise kahoon ki dun take harsh wid u........waise bhi he has sacrifised a lot 4 me,i cant fource him 2 sacrifise again,uska mummy pappa,relatives koi nahin hai,uska family main sirf main aur harsh hai,ahhhhhhh,i eman main thi......now he has harsh only ......how cud i say 2 him daty giv me harsh.........😭😭

yuvi was also sad now,nd both ashi nd yuvi was thinknig wat 2 do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜•shud yuvi sacrifise ashi again just 4 harshs sake??πŸ˜•d question was running in yuvis mind.......

COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Rocking part saya it is so emotional 😭 i love the way neal care about ashi😳 and please donot seperate ashi & yuvi please πŸ˜‰ . Though i feel sad for neal. he is such a sweet heart πŸ‘ continue soon
Edited by iloveashi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part Saya Di πŸ‘

it was emotional too 😭 ..

anyways cont soon

I wonder wht will Ashi n Yuvi do now?

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iloveashi

Rocking part saya it is so emotional 😭 i love the way neal care about ashi and please donot seperate ashi & yuvi please πŸ˜‰ . Though i feel sad for neal. he is such a sweet heart πŸ‘ continue soon

t***x shilu😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_92

awesome part Saya Di πŸ‘

it was emotional too 😭 ..

anyways cont soon -
ya,i will,but wat abt ur fic??😑😑

I wonder wht will Ashi n Yuvi do now? -πŸ˜‰

Divz

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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice part saya luved it plz cont sooon πŸ‘

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