Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 29

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part reshmi.
but who is that girl??????????????????????
plz cont soon.

PART 19




Tia felt aweful after seeing Ranveer with someone else 😭 . She ran away from there before Ranveer could see her . She felt terrible and she had no one to blame except her 😭 .

She sobbed quietly, letting out all the pain she had kept bottled inside 😭 . She didn't know why she was so hurt. Was it because it was a blow to her pride that a guy who wanted her had another? Or was it because she had begun to like Ranveer more than she should .She didn't wan't to feel anything for him but she couldn't help herself , she couldn't stop thinking about him , stop wanting him 😭 .




And to add to her despair Sumeet and Sonia came to meet her .



Tia --- (obviously not in a very good mood) Aap dono yahan kyun aaye ho ??? Tia ko aap jaise selfish logo ke saath koi relation nahi rakhna .

Sumeet --- (hurt) Selfish…haan sahi kaha tumne hum selfish hi toh hain isliye tumhare liye itne saal hum ek doosre se door rahe , hamesha tumhari happiness ko priority di .

Tia --- Pappa aap apne actions ko justify mat kijiye. Aap bhool sakte hain par Tia nahi bhool sakti ki aap dono ke wajah se Tia ki mamma Tia ko chhodkar chali gayi .

Sumeet --- Jo tumhe chodkar chali gayi tumhe uska khayal hain par jisne itne saal tumhara Care kiya uski koi parwah nahi .

Tia --- ( feeling emotional) Pappa Tia aapse bohot pyaar karti hain par Tia iss relation ko accept nahi kar sakti . Aapke aur Mamma ke differences ki wajah se Tia ko suffer karna pada . Agar future mein aapke aur Sonia aunty ke beech ka relation spoil ho gata hain toh Sonia aunty bhi Mamma ki tarah Tia ko chhodkar chali jayegi aur finally har baar ki tarah Tia ko hi suffer karna padega .

Sonia --- Oh poor baby ......toh tumhare mind mein yeh chal raha tha aur mein soch rahi thi ki tum mujhe hate karti ho ( then taking Tias's hands in hers ) Tia some relations don't work out ..... iska matlab yeh nahi ki hum usse bhagte rahe . Death ke fear se hum jeena toh nahi chhod dete na . Agar consequences ke barein mein sochkar tum try karna chhod dogi toh tum kuch bhi nahi kar pavogi . Tia..... Aashi ne humein accept kar liya hain please tum bhi humein accept kar lo . We'll make a wonderful family 😊 .

Tia --- Tia is sorry aunty , Tia ye nahi kar sakti

" Timbo tum hamesha wrong decision kyun leti ho " said Aashi storming inside the room 😡

Tia --- You punk .....tum hamesha Tia ke matters mein kyun interfere karti ho 😡 ???

Aashi --- Kyunki tum ek Timbo ho jo apna brains Mars chhod aayi hain ........

Sonia --- (inferfering snd in an angry tone ) Mummum 😡 ......

Aashi --- Mamma please iss timbett ke pride ko kam karna zaroori hain . Yeh sirf apne barein mein sochti hain . Timbo tum yeh kyun nahi sochti ki tum yahan Maurya mein ho tumhare Pappa kitne lonely feel karte honge . Selfish tumhare Papa nahi tum ho 😡 . (then calming down ) Tia .....I am sorry for being rude ....par Tia hamare parents ko bhi apni life jeena ka poora hak hain , mein yeh realize kar chuki hoon ...... tum bhi realize kar lo na ..........puhleese Timbo 😉 .

Tia --- (breaking into a smile seeing Aashi say puhleez 😊 ) Aashi .....thanks .....tumne aaj Tia ki eyes open kar di . Tia ne apne around ek fake world create kar diya tha aur Tia ussi ko right samajh rahi thi . Tia yeh bhool gayi thi ki sabhi humans perfect nahi hote . Even Tia is not perfect , even Tia has made lot of mistakes , even Tia has hurt someone (she said this thinking about Ranveer )

Sonia --- (coming near Tia ) Aaj mein bohot happy hoon . Tia jaanti ho mein hamesha se tum jaisi ek pyaari beti chahti thi

Aashi --- What do u mean Mamma mein pyaari nahi hoon 😕 .

Tia --- (interrupting ) Nahi tum daravni ho …… 😆

Sumeet --- Tia .. 😡

Tia --- Pappa it was just a joke .( then turning to Sonia) Pata hain Tia aapki diehard fan thi , aapka har style follow karti thi . Par jab aapke aur Pappa ke barein mein pata chala Tia aapki harr goodness ko purposely ignore karke aapko hate karne lagi . Tia ne toh aapko apna love show karne ka chance bhi nahi diya (then thinking about Ranveer sadly ) Tia ne kissi ko yeh chance nahi diya .Tia bohot buri hain na 😭 .

Sonia --- Tia tum bilkul bhi buri nahi ho bas thodi si childish ho ….....( Tia feeling guilty hugged her and cried ) Ab yeh rona band karo ……smile and just show me your dimple ….....( Tia smiled with tears in her eyes and hugged Sonia again , she felt the same comfort that a child feels in mother's arms 😊 )

Aashi --- (with tears in her eyes ) Hey Bhaggu yeh sab kitna emotional hain . Mein toh yeh bhi nahi keh sakti ki " Aashi yeh sab handle nahi kar sakti .....yeh Aashi ke skin ke liye kharab hain " (she said this to lighten up the atmosphere)




All burst out laughing with tears in their eyes . Tia hugged Sumeet and was about to hug Aashi ----



Aashi --- Oh no ….....ab tum jaisi timbett meri sister hogi . He Bhaggu Mein sabko kaise face karoongi 😕 😉

Sonia --- Mummum 😡

Aashi --- Alright .....Timbo behna .....Huggiie (and she hugged her ) 😉




It was a happy moment . Now Tia had a complete family . But still she felt empty , she felt incomplete without Ranveer . But now Ranveer belongs to someone else and she cannot see that . And so she wanted to go very far away from Ranveer , where she can get over him , forget him .



Tia --- Pappa agar Tia aapse kuch maange toh kya aap uski wish fulfil karenge

Sumeet --- Apni Princess ke liye mein kuch bhi kar sakta hoon 😊

Tia --- Pappa Tia fashion design course ke liye Paris jaana chahti hain .........

Aashi --- (before Sumeet could answer) Hey Bhaggu ………..ab tum mujhse bachne ke liye Paris jaakar chhupna chahti ho 😆 😉

Tia --- Aashi agar Tia itne dino tak Maurya mein tumhe tolerate kar sakti hain toh aage bhi tolerate kar sakti hain . Tia Paris sirf apne bright future ke liye jaa rahi hain ….......samjhi 😡

Summet --- Tumhare future ki baat hain toh main tumhe mana nahi karoonga ...

Aashi --- Alright ....fine .....par mein tumhe bohot miss karoongi . Ab pareshan karne ke liye mujhe koi aur donkey dhoondna hoga .

Tia --- You punk ....tumne Tia ko Donkey kaha ..YOU..YOU 😡

Aashi --- Du- uh donkey ko donkey nahi toh kya kahoo 😆

Tia --- You punk …………you……….redhed ….....Tia tumhe nahi chhodegi 😡

Sonia and Sumeet ---- Guys stop ..... 😕

awesum reshmi...hats off to u..really...awesum work u have done..
and puh-leese jaldi tia aur ranny ka patch up kara dena...and tia ko paris mat jaane dena.. 😉
👏

yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..me 1st one to reply.. 😉

Part 19 poasted

I know it's kinda boring but I'll try and make next part interesting .

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Originally posted by: angelgirl16

heyy....read the last part two parts together..........and they are awesome, fantastic, mindblowing, brilliant n everything else that can compliment ur fanfic.......cant wait to read Part 19
give ur fans a special treat na n make tiavi speak in the next part......just wanna knoww watt Ranveer will say.....
really wanna read the next part soon......so plssssss jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii likhna 😳

TIA - RANVEER WILL SPEAK IN THE NEXT PART ----- NO WORRIES YAAR 😉

honey... you have not yet revealed the identi ty of the girl😉

please do so in your next pt

Originally posted by: honey_13

Part 19 poasted

I know it's kinda boring but I'll try and make next part interesting .

reshmi..hw dare u to say that..this part was boring..not at all..i luved it.😉.better u dnt say next time.😡

hey honey just read past few parts along with this part...all the parts are just too good
poor Tia 😭bechari koh kitne aasoo bahaane parre...
boring 😕 😕 😕 not at all i liked the part and the way u expressed each and every thing