Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 27

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pls yaar tomm pakka post kar dena.
ab aur itezar nahi hota.
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Posted: 19 years ago
kal pukka post kar doongi 😉 😳 😃
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PART 17




On hearing the footsteps Tia turned back and stood up . The sound of footsteps grew louder and louder indicating that the person is coming closer to them . Even Ranveer heard them and got up . And when they saw the person face to face , they were totally relieved -- Well It was Yuvi and Yuvi was very happy to find them atlast 😛 😃 .



Yuvi --- Guys tum log yaha ho . Pata hain hum sab kitna worried ho gaye the

Tia --- Thanx Yuvi tumne correct time pe aakar Tia aur Ranveer ko save kiya 😊 .

Ranveer --- Haan Bana aap bilkul sahi time pe aaye ( in his mind actually he was cursing Yuvi for spoiling the beautiful moment he was having with Tia 😉 😆 )

Tia --- Yuvi baki sab kaha hain .

Yuvi --- Babes .....Hum sab ne ek tent lagaya hain aur sab wahi par rest kar rahe hain ....Hum kal hi Maurya wapas chale jayenge .

Tia --- That's great . Waise bhi Tia iss trekking thing se fed up ho chuki hain



After that Tia , Ranveer and Yuvi made their way to the tent . Everyone was delighted to see them . After having food they played antakshari . Everyone was enjoying except Tia who made an exuse of feeling tired and sleepy , and sneaked from there .



The whole night she couldn't sleep . She kept on thinking about the time she spent with Ranveer . She knew that if she hadn't heard the footsteps they would have ended up kissing . And this thought scared her . She was not able to justify her behaviour to herself . Questions started arising in her mind for which she had no answers or maybe she didn't wan't to answer ------------ questions like - Why didn't she stop him , why did she feel so helpless when he was about to kiss her ?? Why did she care so much for him ??? Why did she enjoy Ranveer following her ??? What is in Ranveer that drew her to him ??? Why does his touch sent shivers across her body ???

Was she starting to have feelings for him ???

" No " she said closing her eyes and ears and coming out of her thoughts.. " Yeh nahi ho sakta , Tia aisa nahi hone degi . Tia ne apne aap se jo promise kiya hain usse nahi todegi "
she said this in a determined tone .



Tia was determined about not letting those feelings affect her . She wanted to curb those feelings and desire that was slowly rising in her mind before it hurt her . She was under the presumption that all relationships end abruptly , and if she doesn't stay away from Ranveer now then both of them would suffer ultimately . After all desire is the cause of sorrows . To escape that pain . she knew there was only one way --– she has to stay away from Ranveer and more than that keep him away from her . And to stop him from pursueing her , she came up with a plan .




On the way back to Maurya , Tia ignored Ranveer completely . Ranveer tried to speak to her but she didn't bother even to look at him . Ranveer was totally confused at her behaviour . A day before they were about to kiss and now she is behaving as if nothing happened between them .



After reaching Maurya , she said bye to everyone except Ranveer . Ranveer didn't understand why she was behaving with him like a stranger 😕 .

" Kal humne Tia ko kiss karne ki koshish ki kahi isliye Tia humse naraaz to nahi ??? Par kal humne unki aankhon mein apne liye pyaar dekha aur humein aisa laga jaise wo bhi hamare kareeb aana chahti hain ,isliye toh hum unke kareeb gaye " said Ranveer feeling very hurt .

He was beginning to lose his patience.

" Tia aap hamare saath aisa kyun kar rahi hain , aapko humein batana hi hoga " said Ranveer in a determined tone .




Next day while Tia was on her way to her class she saw Ranveer . At first she decided to ignore him but then decided to face him instead .




Ranveer --- Tia Hum aapse kuch poochna chahte hain ???

Tia --- (knowing what he was going to ask) Poocho ???

Ranveer --- Aap kal humein avoid kyun kar rahi thi ???

Tia --- Kyunki Tia tumse baat nahi karna chahti thi ………………..

Ranveer --- Magar kyun ??? Humein laga tha ki hum ek doosre ke kareeb aa chuke hain aur uss din agar Yuvi waha par nahi aate toh hum …

Tia --- (interrupting) Toh bhi hamare beech kuch nahi hota …Tia kuch hone nahi deti . Tia ke close tum aaye the, Tia tumhare close nahi aayi thi ….got it




Saying this she turned to move . But Ranveer's hand caught her shoulders and spun her round to face him and in a frustrated tone " Tia aap accept kyun nahi kar leti ki aap bhi humse pyaar karti hain " 🤢 .

Tia realized that this was the time to execute her plan .



She opened her mouth to say something and found the words stuck in her throat . Then mustering courage -------------


Tia --- Ranveer Tia tumse nahi kissi aur se pyaar karti nahi . Tia ka ek boyfriend hain jo apni studies ke liye U.S gaya hain .




Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
yay i'm the first to reply.

thank god y contd.

abt the part all i have to say is

OH MY GAWD

- sagarika-
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow reshmi..awesum part yaar..tia has a bf..my poor ranny..hw will he react..
awesum part.. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Tia ka ek boyfriend hain jo apni studies

OMG😲I NEVER EXPECTED THIS AT ALL.

what a come back... if i may say so.... 👏👍🏼

Edited by aparna_1988 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
WELL TIA KA JHOOTH 😕 .....BECHHARA RANVEER 💔 ....HEY NICE PART 👏 AND PLZZ CONT. SOON
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Posted: 19 years ago
pls yaar ran ko zada hurt mat karna 😭 .
poor ranveer.
thanks 4 cont.
superb part. 👏 pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part reshmi.but i m feeling very bad 4 ranveer. 😭 😭
plz cont soon.

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