Untouched (a fanfic) Last Part -- Pg 55 - Page 28

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Posted: 19 years ago
tia ka fake boyfrend,,,,,,interesting,part is amazing 👏
puhleezzz continue soon.
maybe with ranveer's fake girlfrend??????????
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 18




Ranveer became numb for a moment . He didn't know how to react . He felt his whole world collapsing before him , his dreams shattering . He stood there like a statue without any expression . Then without uttering a word he made his way to his room totally broken 😭 .



Tia felt his pain , her heart cried for him . But she consoled herself saying that she did the right thing otherwise they both would have ended up hurt since relationships are only going to cause them pain . And this pain is nothing in front of that . One day Ranveer will realize that it's good that they didn't end up together .




After this incident , as Tia had wanted Ranveer stopped pursueing her . A week passed and there was no sign of Ranveer . She wanted to know about his well – being . She was very much concerned for him . She didn't get any news about Ranveer from her friends also since they never spoke about him in front of her .



So she started feeling restless , the thought of Ranveer never left her mind . She could no longer concentrate on anything — studies , fashion etc . All she could think of was Ranveer . Sid tried to impress Tia a lot but she was always lost in Ranveer's thoughts 😳 .



Tia wanted to know where Ranveer is ?? Is he in Maurya or somewhere else ?? If he is in Mauraya why doesn't he come to canteen , library , garden or all possible places where they used to meet ??? She decided to ask Sid about this .



Tia --- Sid ..Tia ne bohot dino se Ranveer ko nahi dekha ..Kya wo Maurya mein nahi hain 😕 ???

Sid --- Tia tumhare reject karne ke baad wo apna face sabko kaise dikha sakta tha . Isliye wo ghar gaya hain apna face apne mamma ke pallu mein hide karne 😆 😆 (Sid said this making fun of Ranveer ).



But Tia didn't find that funny at all 😡 . She regretted her action . She didn't know how to mend everything .




After 2 days she found Ranveer in the library copying notes. Since he was absent for about 2 weeks he wanted to make up for that .
Tia went near him




Tia --- Ranveer kaise ho tum ???

On hearing her voice , Ranveer looked up , but didn't answer.
Tia could still see the pain that she had caused him in his eyes . But before she could speak , he just picked his books and left .




Many days passed and Ranveer did not give Tia any attention. He ignored her completely . He used to speak to everyone and the moment he saw Tia he used to leave that place or concentrate on other things . He behaved as if she was non-existent and this hurt Tia 😭 . This made her realize how he must have felt when she ignored him . Few days back his ignorance was all she wanted but now this was killing her . She felt left out , lonely and depressed 😭 .



She realized that Ranveer was important to her . She could not just wipe off her feelings for him or run away from the truth . So she decided -- no matter what the consequences are , she would listen to her heart .



Tia decided to confess her feelings for Ranveer . And she went to tell him what he meant to her , how important he is to her . When she entered his room she felt as if a lighting had struck her , all her hopes were shattered and she knew at once that she was too late .

She saw Ranveer hugging a girl 🤢 😕 😭 .




Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey yar reshmi kahan thi
waise great part i loved it
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plzzzzzzzz jaldi lilhan agla part
im realy restles to no who is the girl
btw kaun hain?????? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
yipeeee me teh first one to reply 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanx Ritz 😛

I was out of town .
Well regarding the girl , abhi bata doongi toh supense chala jayega 😉.
Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hhan han pata hain
lekin puhlease jaldi likhna 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

hey yaar i am sooo sorry for replying late here is ur reward for such a sweet part
waise great part i loved it
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im realy restles to no who is the girl
btw kaun hain?????? 😉

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Posted: 19 years ago

plzzzzzzzzgod let that girl be his sis 😭

you know honey what will happen if you post late.. all the compliments accolades are already given and said...

so now either i have to think of some thing new to say or go along with them...so i agree with angel 100%

Edited by aparna_1988 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
waooooooo too gud yaar.
pls let tht girl to be his sis or frend bt not glfrend.
👏 pls reshmi jaldi likhna.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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