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It was a happy moment . Now Tia had a complete family . But still she felt empty , she felt incomplete without Ranveer . But now Ranveer belongs to someone else and she cannot see that . And so she wanted to go very far away from Ranveer , where she can get over him , forget him .

tias feelings are expressed vey well...👏

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Edited by aparna_1988 - 19 years ago
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PART 20



Tia is at the airport with her family .On hearing the announcement that the flight will be delayed , Sonia and Sumeet go to enquire about it leaving Tia and Aashi alone .



Aashi --- Timbo mein kal se dekh rahi hoon tumhare chehre pe Meena Kumari ka dukhi expression chhapa hua hain …… kya baat hain ???

Tia --- Kuch nahi Aashi .......Tia is fine

Aashi --- Are you sure ??? 😊

Tia --- (trying to smile) Yaa…...... 😊

Aashi --- Fine......tum batana nahi chahti toh koi baat nahi ......(after some time) yahan wait karna kitna boring hain aur specially jab tum jaisi boring company saath ho toh . Mein zara round marke aati hoon ....



Tia didn't say anything at Aashi's remark . While leaving , even Aashi kept wondering what had happened to Tia 😕 .



Tia stood there leaning on the wall waiting for her parents to return .She was in a gloomy state .Suddenly a feeling of happiness gripped her , she felt as if the person she is aching for is very close to her and her heart started beating faster . She turned around slowly and she was right he was there , right in front of her . She looked into his eyes which showed pain and anguish . Seeing that tears started gathering in her eyes . She didn't wan't him to notice that so she turned away from him and this hurt him even more .



Ranveer --- Tia aapne humein itna paraya kar diya ki aapne humein bataya bhi nahi ki aap Paris jaa rahi hain .

Tia --- ( thinking about the girl in Ranveer's arms ) Tumhe isse kya farak padta hain Ranveer ???

Ranveer --- (hurt by her statement ) Aapki harr baat se humein farak padta hain Tia . Hum jaante hain ki aap hamare liye kuch bhi feel nahi karti par hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hain . Humne apni life kissi ke saath imagine ki hain toh wo sirf aap hain .

Tia --- Acchha toh tum uss ladki ke saath kya kar rahe the ???

Ranveer --- (surprised) Kiss ladki ke saath …??

Tia --- Woh ladki jisse tum apne room mein hug kar rahe the …………….

Ranveer --- Tia .........kya aap Rimi ki baat kar rahi hain ??

Tia --- (feeling a bit jealous) Whatever ....Rimi ya Simi .......Tia ko usse kya .....

Ranveer --- Tia ....... Rimi toh sirf hamari friend hain ,,,,hamari bachpan ki friend ........us din wo humse milne aayi thi aur wo sirf ek friendly hug tha……...... .

Tia --- ( happily) Iska matlab hain ki tum dono ke beech kuch nahi chal raha hain …?? 😃

Ranveer --- Ji bilkul .......par aap humse yeh sab kyun pooch rahi hain ??? 😕

Tia --- Ranveer wo…....wo....…...tum dono ko saath dekhkar Tia ko bohot bura laga aur isliye Tia Paris jaa rahi thi ......tumhari life se door ….…

Ranveer --- Aapko humein kissi aur ke saath dekhkar bura laga !!! par kyun ??? 😕

Tia --- Ranveer wo.....wo.....(she found it difficult to express her feelings) 😉

Ranveer --- (holding her by her shoulders ) Tia batayiye kya aapke mann mein hamare liye koi feeling hain ........kya aap bhi humse pyaar karti hain ....??? 😳 .

Tia --- Ranveer ..Tia tumse ....Tia tumse …..... 😳

Ranveer --- ( who couldn't wait anymore to hear those magical words ) Haan Tia ....batayiye na ....Kya aap humse pyaar karti hain …....??

Tia --- Haan Ranveer ..... 😳

Ranveer ---Sacchh Tia 😃 .......phir aapne humein bataya kyun nahi ??? 😕

Tia --- Kyunki Tia ko khud pata nahi chala ki kab pyaar ho gaya . Jab pata chala , Tia tumhe batane aayi thi tabhi Tia ne tumhe uss ladki ke saath dekha .

Ranveer --- Aur aapko jealous feel hua .....right ....

Tia --- No ....... Tia Ahuja ko kissi se jealous feel nahi hota .....

Ranveer --- ( with a mischievious smile ) Sacchh batayiye Tia 😉

Tia --- Haan thoda sa …….

Ranveer --- Sirf thoda sa ..... ..

Tia --- (giving in ) Alright alright ......Tia agree karti hain ki Tia ko bohot jealous feel hua .......fine.....

Ranveer --- Ab thik hain 😉 ( then hugging her ) Ab aur bhi thik hain ...... 😳 (tia shys and hugs him back 😳 ) toh Tia ab aap jaldi se apne boyfriend se break –up kar lijiye , phir humein koi bhi alag nahi kar payega .......

Tia --- (pulling back) Tia aisa nahi kar sakti 😉

Ranveer --- (shocked) Kya ??? Par abhi –abhi toh aapne kaha tha ki aap humse pyaar karti hain …phir kyun ??? 😕

Tia --- Kyunki Tia ka koi boyfriend hi nahi hain .... 😊

Ranveer --- ( confused ) Matlab ??? 😕

Tia --- (with a guilty expression ) Ranveer ..wo..Tia is sorry .....Tia ne tumse peecha chudane ke liye jhoot bola tha .....

Ranveer --- (perplexed as well as annoyed ) Kya ??? aap jaanti hain aapki iss jhoot ke wajah se humein kitna taqleef hua , humne kitna suffer kiya , aapke barein mein na sochne ke liye humein khud se kitna fight karna pada .

Tia --- (feeling even more guilty ) Tia is sorry Ranveer .......iss baat ko Tia tab nahi samajh paayi thi par ab samajthi hain .. 😊

Ranveer ---(melting) Koi baat nahi Tia .......ab jab aap humein mil gayi hain toh humein kissi baat se shikayat nahi hain … 😊 .


Tia --- Oh Ranveer ......you are so sweet (she said this cuping his cheeks) 😳 😃

Ranveer --- Acchha ......kitna ??? 😉

Tia --- (stretching her arms open ) Itna ..... 😛




On seeing her arms open Ranveer goes and hugs her tightly not bothering what people around might think 😳 . They were totally lost in each other and didn't want to pull back from the embrace 😳 . Hugging Ranveer was an out of the world feeling for Tia who had never been touched by a man before 😳 .


Inspite of wanting to be in each other's arms they had to break apart from the embrace since Aashi spotted them together and brought them back to their senses from their dream world 😕 🤢 😡.




Edited by honey_13 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesum reshmi...wow..atlast tia n ranny are back to gether..luved it.. 👏
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PART 20 POSTED

I GUESS ALL UR DOUBTS REGARDING THE GIRL IN RANVEER'S ARMS IS CLEARED 😉 😃 .
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areee mere khayal se yeh bahut kam claps the.. 😉
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🤗😊 i have no words to express how awesome this pt is

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