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ADITI

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Posted: 19 years ago

#71

waise the part was touchy also...my heart cried 4 Uv and Aashi both

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Divya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#72

awesome part Gopi, 👏

ya, as Adi said, the part was emotional 😭 😭 ..

waiting to knw wht happens next 😳

continue soon

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

#73

Very very good yaar 👏 👏 👏 plzzzzz cont soon 😃

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rumi.love

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Posted: 19 years ago

#74

wata awesome fic...
i mean it's totally different 2 da oda fic's its really really awesome...plzzz cont soon

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vanu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#75

really really good yaar............... 👏 👏 👏

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ritushree sarkar

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Posted: 19 years ago

#76

really very gud part gopi 👏 plz cont soon.

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Yaar tum sab log bohot der lagate ho jaldi jaldi cont kyu nahi karate????? Kyu hamare patience ka test lete ho??????? 😭

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Gopi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#78

Part 11

So Ashi and Yuvi are in their rooms thinking about what to do......

In Yuvi's Room...

Yuvi is sulking on his bed thinking 'Oh God! What do I do? Mein Ashi ko wapis kaise laoon......Ashi kabhi mujhe maaf karegi?......I think I should go.....maybe I should go talk to her now....shayad ab calm ho chuki hai....hopefully woh mujhse baat kare. I love you Ashi.I don't know how, but I'll get you back one day.'

Meanwhile in Ashi's Room....

Ashi is sitting on her bed with her hand in her face thinking 'Maybe iss bar mera plan......no....usse sabak sikhana pada.....Mujhe Yuvi ko bhool na hoga.....I love you Yuvi....but mein tujhe kabhi maaf nahi kar paongi..... tum hamesha mujhe hurt karte rehte ho.....aaj se mein Yuvi ko avoid karoongi, I'll only say something if it has to do with Remix, or music class'

Yuvi got up and left his room.....he didn't know where he was going but when he stopped, he ended up in front of Ashi's room. He decided to go ahead and see if she would listen to him....he knocked on her door....there was no answer....
Yuvi opened the door and saw Ashi with her face in her hands....he held her shoulder...Ashi turned around and saw Yuvi standing there with tears in his eyes. She was shocked to see Yuvi there.

Yuvi: "Ashi...I'm sorry-"

Ashi decided to act like nothing was wrong, and to stay friends with Yuvi...because if she avoided Yuvi....the same problem would happen like one month ago.... "Yuvi, it's ok....hum dono ne-"

Yuvi: "Ashi, please mujhe maaf kardo....I love you Ashi"

Ashi now starting to get irritated that Yuvi brought up that subject again for the 100th time that week "I don't want to talk about it! Iss subject ke bare mein baat karni hai toh shut up"

Yuvi: "please Ashi....please sirf ek baar meri baat suno"

Ashi turned around to leave the room, and said "Yuvi kuch din ke liye leave me alone" and left Yuvi there.

Yuvi thought that he should do what Ashi asked him to do since he wanted her to listen to what he had to say to get Ashi back. When he is about to leave Vrinda is on her way into the room and...

Vrinda: "Ashi ka peecha kuch din ke liye chhod do...mein jaanti hoon ke tum usse kitna pyar karte ho, aur mein yeh bhi jaanti hoon ke woh tumse bhi pyar karti hai... lekin mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha hai ke tum dono ke beech kya hua, jo Ashi-"

Yuvi panics and quickly leaves saying "Bye"

A few days pass...

end of part 11...i know that it was boring.... the next part is more interesting

Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago