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vanu

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Posted: 19 years ago

#51

greatttttt part........awesome........ 👏
kinda funny tooooo...but tragic for yuvi........lets see what happens next....... 😳 😳 😳

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Gopi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#52

i will continue on friday morning...i have only one class that day

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neha puranik

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Posted: 19 years ago

#53

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plz plz cont soon

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Gopi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#54

Part 7

As soon as Rhianna told them about Ashi's plan, and what had just happened as she left, Ranveer, Sid, Tia and Vrinda left to go and break up the fight....hoping that they would get there before anything serious happened.

On the way to the shed......

Tia: "Tia ko lagta hai ke usse mama aur papa ko phone karni chahiye"

By the time they got there Yuvi and Adhi were both attacking each other, throwing things, and trying to strangle the other.

Tia: "Oh Tia's God!!! Ashi ko bachao!"😭

Ranveer and Sid run to Ashi and Yuvi...

Ranveer: "Ashi, Yuvi ko chhod do"

Sid: "Bro let her go."

Ashi and Yuvi didn't notice them or what they were saying. They were focused on killing each other.

Ranveer and Sid had to drag Ashi and Yuvi away from the other, taking them to opposite sides of the shed. Tia had told Sonia and Sumeet everything that Rhianna had, and they had rushed there.

By the time Sonia and Summet reached there, Tia was waiting outside to recieve them, and take them to the shed. They heard Ashi screaming for Ranveer to let her go and kill Yuvi. Sid, Vrinda, and a couple other people were surrounding Yuvi, so he couldn't get to Ashi. None of the other kids could calm either one of them down.

When Summet and Sonia entered, Ashi and Yuvi were at each other's throats for the fourth time....

end of part 7....
coming in part 8...Ashi and Yuvi....calm down?

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sayantika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#55

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 plz post fast babes. 😊

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sayantika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#56

yipeeee,me d first one 2 reply 😊

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Divya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#57

awesome Gopi 👏

continue soon 😳 😳

Divya

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ritushree sarkar

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Posted: 19 years ago

#58

awesome part gopi 👏 plz cont soon.

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Rimli

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Posted: 19 years ago

#59

awesum part gopi.plz cont asap.

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Gopi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#60

Part 8

Sumeet and Sonia ran towards Ashi and Yuvi to separate them from each other. Sumeet was very angry and started yelling, while Sonia was worried and concerned about why this was happening.

Sumeet pulling Ashi to the other side and yelling "Ashi yeh kya hai!"

Ashi also yelling "Please papa let me go and KILL him!"

Sumeet said nothing to Ashi, he just held her hand and went to tell Sonia that they are going to take Ashi to her room, and to tell the boys to keep Yuvi in the shed and calm him down. Sonia informed the the others of what the plan was. Sumeet and Sonia left with Ashi,and Tia and Vrinda were following them.

When they reached Ashi's room, she was still very angry and hard to handle.

Sonia: "Mummum, tum shant ho jao" calmly

Sumeet angrily "Yeh tum kya kar rahi thi"

Tia: "Tia thinks ke Ashi ab 100 percent pagal ho chuki hai"

Ashi: "SHUT UP TIMBO. wiase tumhe brains chahiye think karne ke liye"

Sonia: "Mummum yeh kya hai, tumhare aur Yuvi ke beech- yeh sab karneka kya matlab tha"

Sumeet now calm "haan Ashi, yeh sab karne ka matlab-"

Ashi then told them, after 10 minutes of cooling down, what happened while she was practicing for tennis. That she was minding her own business and Yuvi started hugging her from behind, and then he kissed her, and why he said he kissed her. On hearing this Summet became very angry.Sonia was confused on what to do when she heard this...she thought they should talk it out, then handle Yuvi.

Sumeet: "mein usse dekhte aata hoon" storming off before anyone could stop him, getting ready to do something bad to Yuvi for kissing his daughter.

Sonia to everyone else "tum sab mujhe aur Mummum ko akele chhod do, kuch baatein karni hai"

Everyone else left, leaving Ashi and Sonia alone to talk.

Sonia: "Mummum, mujhe pata hai ke tumhe Yuvi ke liye feelings hai"

Ashi: "Mamma! Mujhe uss psycho ke liye kuch feelings nahi hai! I HATE HIM!"

Sonia: "Achcha baba, tum usse hate karti ho! par Mummum, apne aap ko sazaa mat do, kyon ki tum usse pehle pyar karti thi"

Ashi: "Mamma, I don't think I can ever forgive him"

Sonia doesn't say anything to Ashi, she just hugs her and tells Ashi that she loves her.

Ashi: "I love you too mamma." Ashi hugs Sonia back and a couple tears go down Ashi's cheeks.

A couple minutes later Sonia goes to find Tia, Vrinda and Sumeet to tell them that Ashi has calmed down.

Meanwhile in the shed.........

end part 8. in part 9: Yuvi calms down...Sumeet and Yuvi

Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago