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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
rocking part gopi 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
AWESUM PART GOPI.
PLZ CONT SOON.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
awesome part gopi 👏 pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part Gopi 👏

waiting to knw wht happens in da shed

continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 9


Meanwhile in the shed......


Sid left a minute after Vrinda and Tia left with Ashi. Yuvi still hadn't calmed down, and Sid thought of a way to calm him down.


A minute later Sid had come back with a bucket filled with cold water. Sid threw the water at Yuvi, and got a little water on Ranveer too.

Yuvi: "Sid! What the-...Why did you do that?"

Sid: "Chill bro, tumhe cool down karna tha"

A couple minutes later Yuvi had calmed down, and changed into the clothes that Sid had brought him.

Ranveer: "Banaa, ab tum calm down ho, toh mein pooch sakta hoon ke tumne yeh sab kyon kiya"

Yuvi opens his mouth to answer but-

Ranveer: "Matlab hai ke tumne kal raat mujhe toh kaha that ke tum Ashi se bohat pyar karte ho aur usse kabhi hurt karna nahi chahte ho."

Yuvi: "I know bro, but mujhe pata nahi ke mujhe kya hua"

they all sat silent for a couple minutes then...

Sid: "Dude! Maybe tum possessed tha!......by a ghost!"

Yuvi: "Sid, bro. that is the stupidest thing I have ever heard you say"

Sid didn't make any comment after that.

Ranveer: "Haan, aur banaa, Ashi kuch ghalat toh nahi kiya...sirf thooda zyaada-"

Yuvi: "Bro, mujhe pata hai...par kya Ashi mujhe maaf karegi?"

Yuvi started thinking and reminiscing on the good time he spent with Ashi and how happy they were together before-....yuvi started crying, thinking that Ashi would never forgive him...

just then Sumeet had entered the shed with and angry face.When Sumeet noticed that yuvi was crying, he decided to figure out what had happened.

Sumeet: "Yeh Yuvi ko kya ho gaya hai"

Yuvi didn't notice that Sumeet was there..he was still in his own world.

Ranveer and Sid asked Sumeet to sit down and they would explain the whole situation, and for that they would have to tell Sumeet what happened three months ago....


end of part 9




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Posted: 19 years ago
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yipee,me d first one 2 reply 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
awesum part gopi.
plz cont fast.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 10

Ranveer and Sid began to tell Sumeet the story...

Everything happened three months ago.It was the day that had changed Yuvi's life forever. He got a call saying his mom had been in some type of accident. Yuvi disregarded this, considering that Yashwant had people call and say this same thing. Yuvi went on with his day normally. He hadn't met Ashi yet that day. A couple hours later, a couple of police officers had come to Yuvi's room, and they took him to a police station.

At the police station, Yuvi heard and saw things that shocked him. First he saw his dead mother's body in the coroner's office. She had a few bullet wounds. The police told himwhat had happened; She was drivingdown the road when a escaped felon came to her car and told her to get out....she refuse..andcalled the police immediately.....the guy shot her and stole her car. Then the police had found the car in a lake, but the felon with the gun had disappeared.
Yuvi had to leave her body at the station until further notice. The two officers dropped Yuvi off at Maurya.

When Yuvi reached Maurya, he was angry, yet sad at the same time.He was angry because the guy who had killed him mom was still out there unpunished. He then saw that Ashi was laughing and playing around with her friends. Yuvi got angrier. The first thing that popped into his head was 'How could Ashi laugh at a time like this?'. Yuvi went up to Ashi rudely and dragged her to the shed. As he was pulling her, Ashi had asked
Yuvi many times what was wrong, but he didn't respond. His grip was hurting Ashi.

In the shed...
Yuvi closed the door, then he SLAPPED Ashi. He then started yellingat her, saying that it was Ashi's fault his mom was dead, and that Ashi should stay away from him. He then told her that he hated her, and never wanted to see or speaek to Ashi again!
Ashi hearing all this and trying to recover from the slap, felt her heart break into millions of pieces. She could not believe that Yuvi's mom was dead...she remembered talking to her about the plans they made for later that day. She left the room without saying anything, with tears filling her eyes.
From after that point, Ashi ignored Yuvi. She didn'tstay in the same room as him. If she had no choice, she would stay at least 20 feet away from him. She wouldn't even look at him. She had told none what happened in the shed. The only thing she told anyone was that
Yuvi's mom died, and that they had brokenup.
A coulpe weeks after the incidentin the shed, Yuvi realized what he had done with Ashi, and tried to apologise to her, but she would leave the room when she saw him enter it.
It was only one month ago that Ashi had accepted to being his friend, but she wanted him to forget everything that ever happened between them, and that she wanted to start as strangers. Ashi was only doing this because the avoiding had affected Remix meetings and music classes.

Ranveer and Sid also said that they found out about all of this just 2 weeks ago.They found out because they heard Yuvi crying and breaking things in the shed.

Sumeet was shocked to hear that so much had happened, and Ashi hadn't told anyone about this. He didn't want Ashi to hide her feeling, and let them get so overwhelming for her, that she would one day do something she would regret.

Sumeet: "W-well...I don't know what to say...lekin mein Ashi ki baat samajta hoon"

Yuvi: "Uncle, please tell me what I can do for Ashi"

Sumeet: "I don't know...mujhe abhi jaana hai,baad mein bataonga."
Sumeet left to find Sonia and tell her everything that he hda found out. A couple minutes after he left, Ranveer and Sid left thinking that they should leave Yuvi alone for a while..

so now Ashi and Yuvi are alone in their rooms.... thinking about what had happened.........


end of part 10

what do u guys think of it??
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part gopi 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
me the first one to reply...and gopi plz next part jaldi post karna

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