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Posted: 19 years ago
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k.will be waiting 4 dat subh moment 😉 😉
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PART 13

As Ashi was screaming those words, Yuvi was walking by and he instantly recognized Ashi's voice....he could tell that she was troubled in some way so he went running inside and saw the guy he had seen enter Maurya earlier that day. The guy who looked perfect in every way.Yuvi saw Ashi was trying to get out of this guy's grip.

Yuvi thinking 'Who does this guy think he is? I guess you can't judge a person on looks. I'm going to kill him....Ashi ke saath aisa karne ka himmat-'

Before Yuvi realized it, he was clutching the guy by the neck....the guy loosened Yuvi's grip long enough to say "PINKY"

Ashi knew his face was familiar...but didn't recognize him, until he said "Pinky".....she went running to him... and somehow pushed Yuvi off of him, knocking Yuvi to the floor stunned at what she had just done.

Ashi was so elated....her best friend was actually here standing in front of her....she wished he would come and visit her for 3 years...and finally he came...but why? Ashi didn't care......she screamed out "PINKY" and hugged the guy so hard he had to push Ashi off him to breathe...

Everyone was standing there so shocked...they stood there floored to the ground with thier mouths open...thinking 'we have never seen Ashi get so excited about any guy like this before......what just happened here....first she was screaming and now she can't stop smiling?....this guy looks perfect.....'

Ashi pulled the guy to introduce him to her friends...

Ashi: "Everybody this is PINKY......"

the person: "Waise mera naam PINKY nahi hai...sirf yeh Pinky mujhe PINKY bholati hai" he said hitting Ashi lightly on the back of her head...."Mera naam Soham hai...Soham Oberoi Singh"

Everybody still stared at him in a weird way...except Yuvi...Yuvi stared at him like he wanted to be in his spot because Ashi seemed to be so happy and carefree with him...Yuvi also wanted to kill this guy....what had this guy done to Ashi? Now she's sticking up fofr him..whay did he call her pinky???

Soham: "Tia app bohat SEXY lag rahi hai"winking at Tia, and going up to her.....

Ashi broke out into laughter...Everyone was confused by it...

Ranveer: "ASHI! Yeh Tia ke saath batameezi kaar rahe hai aur tum has rahi ho!"

Tia: "OHHH! Tia ko ab pata chala ke tum koun ho....Tia remembers...tumne woh din ghar pe phone kiya tha aur mujhe SEXY bhoola....phir Tia yelled at you....and tumne Tia ko samjhaya ke tum Mumma ko SEXY kehte hai...right???"

Soham: "YES that's right!"

Vrinda: "OHH! Toh yeh woh Pinky hai.....jo tum roz phone pe baat karti ho...maine socha ke Pinky ek ladki hai....lekin woh tumse Pinky kyon- aur tum isse Pinky kyon-?"

Soham : "Tumne mujhe vada kiys tha"

Ashi: "Toh phir muhje Pinky yahaan mat kaho....varna-"

Everyone lightened up except Yuvi who was looking at Soham thinking 'Did Ashi forget everything? has she moved on?'....seeing Soham's arm around Ashi.

Ashi introduced Soham to everyone....and then came to introduce him to Yuvi....When they got to Yuvi...Ashi gave Yuvi a stern look like apologize to him and be nice.

Ashi: "So this is-"

Soham: "Ohh...so this is the Psycho?..Yuvi..What's up bro?"

Yuvi forced a smile and was confused on how Soham knew his name... "Nothing much...bro...sorry about---....tumne mera naam-?

Soham: "Ashi ne muhje photos bheja....and i recognized you from some of them...."

Ashi suddenly got a worried look on her face "OH NO! Muhje abhi jaana hai....kuch kaam tha....Soham stay here....mein aati hoon" giving him one more big hug and leaving.....

Yuvi thought this is the perfect moment....he'll ask Soham what his relationship with Ashi is.....

Yuvi: "So Soham...tum Ashi kab se jaante ho......aur-"

Soham: "I love Anvesha."...saying this on purpose, wanting to see the supposed love Yuvi has for Ashi....
(Soham really did love Ashi...but only like a best friend...there was nothing more to it than that from his side or Ashi's side....they knew everything about each other...except he hadn't told Ashi one thing yet...he was afraid of what Ashi might think....but he had to tell her...)

Yuvi looked really sad now and left without saying anything....he started thinking 'I have to get rid of this Soham.....Ashi can't love this guy.....does she?...No Ashi sirf mujhse pyar karti hai' Yuvi tried to comfort himself


end of part 13


sorry😭 i know this part wasn't that great
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part gopi👏
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yayyyyyyyyyyyy,i am d first one 2 reply 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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This part was very good yaar 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooon 😊
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me 2 liked da part pls cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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arre boring......who said so.......this was awesome yaar,.............. 👏
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Part 14

As Yuvi was walking down the hall, he saw Ashi on her way back....he saw that she wasn't paying attention...

Ashi was thinking 'should i tell Soham everything about me and Yuvi......NO!.....if he gets to know......woh Yuvi ko kill karega.....last time jab hum outing pe the.....he almost killed that guy for trying to flirt with me...it's good ke maine sirf yeh kaha ke maine apne boyfriend se breakup-'

Ashi felt something tugg her to the wall.....

Ashi: "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho Psycho!"....Yuvi had pulled her and had her against the wall with his face a few inches from hers.......

Ashi (angrily..pushing him away.....not wanting Soham to see this) "Yuvi leave me alone from now on....Maine Soham ko nahi kaha ke humare beech kya hua.....he should never find out anything......I told him ke you are only my friend...toh aise behave mat karo!"

Ashi left....Yuvi was there thinking 'here i am trying to tell Ashi how much i love her...aur woh Soham ke baare mein baat karti hai....kya isse pata nahi ke-'

After Ashi reached Soham and everyone else....

Soham: "I have a surprise for you! Tumhare room mein hai....chale"...he gave her a mischevous and suggesting look....

Tia: "Ashi wait!...Tia tumhare saath aati hai....kuch zaroori baatein karni hai"

Ashi, Tia and Soham go to Ashi's room....when Ashi opens the door, she is once again stunned.....she sees a beautiful girl...about her age sitting inside...the girl turned around....

It was Ashi's other best friend.....Purvi.....

Purvi ran up to Ashi and hugged her.....

Ashi pushed away from Purvi irritated....

Purvi: "Pinky...yeh kya hai?...we're meeting after 3 yrs and this is how you tell me hello..."

Ashi: "In the past 3 yrs....tumne mujhe kitna time phone kiya....ya e-mail kiya?..you didn't even say good bye to me...Mein tumse baat nahi karoongi"

Purvi: "I'm sorry..." holding her ears, giving a puppy dog look

Ashi's anger melted away at this look and she hugged Purvi......After they said thier hellos.....

Purvi: "SOHAM! tumne Anvesha ko bataaya?"

Soham: "Abhi nahi....."

Ashi was now confused as to what they were talking about....she was also getting angry because Soham had kept something from her....but Ashi had also kept something from him...but that was a different story

Ashi: "what are you guys keeping from me"

Soham and Purvi: "Nothing...." trying to cover up for themselves...

Soham: "I'll tell you later"...looking at Tia..."akele mein... But abhi hum dono ko jaana hai...unpacking"

After they both leave...after a couple minutes...Tia goes to Ashi

Tia: "Ashi....tumne Tia ko kyon nahi bataaya ke Yuvi ne tumko slap-"

Ashi surpised that Tia knows about this "Timbo! yeh kisne bataaya"

Tia: "Tia ne sun liya....jab Ranveer aur Sid ne papa ko kaha ke tere aur Yuvi ke beech mein kya hua...Ranveer ne yeh Tia se kyon chupa..kya woh Tia se trust nahi karta-"

Ashi: "KYA!!! Sid aur Thakur jaante hai.....iss liye woh aise behave kar rahe the...Hey BHAGGU! Who else knows......"

Tia: "Ashi...Tia only know that Tia Ranveer and Sid jaante hai....Tia ke kyon nahi bataaya....hum sisters hai...Ashi Tia ko sister nahi-"

Ashi: "I didn't tell anyone.....Tia....jo bhi mere aur Yuvi ke beech hua...i mean everything.....Soham should never know.....woh bohat over protective hai..."

Ashi stopped in the middle of her sentence....she saw Soham there with an angry and shocked look on his face.....he had heard everything....he turned around, and made a fist....

Soham was cursing Yuvi while walking and thinking 'I knew he was bad news as soon as he saw me and Pinky toghether...uske himmat....Pinky se haath lagana...Pinky kitni achchi ladki hai....I saw that look he gave me when Pinky was hugging me...maine uske ankhon mein pyar aur achcha insan kaise dekha.....Anvesha ne mujhe yeh pehle kyon nahi bataaya...I would have killed him long ago...why is she protecting him....'

end of part 14

Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very good yaar👏 cont soooooon😊

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Part 14

As Yuvi was walking down the hall, he saw Ashi on her way back....he saw that she wasn't paying attention...

Ashi was thinking 'should i tell Soham everything about me and Yuvi......NO!.....if he gets to know......woh Yuvi ko kill karega.....last time jab hum outing pe the.....he almost killed that guy for trying to flirt with me...it's good ke maine sirf yeh kaha ke maine apne boyfriend se breakup-'

Ashi felt something tugg her to the wall.....

Ashi: "Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho Psycho!"....Yuvi had pulled her and had her against the wall with his face a few inches from hers.......

Ashi (angrily..pushing him away.....not wanting Soham to see this) "Yuvi leave me alone from now on....Maine Soham ko nahi kaha ke humare beech kya hua.....he should never find out anything......I told him ke you are only my friend...toh aise behave mat karo!"

Ashi left....Yuvi was there thinking 'here i am trying to tell Ashi how much i love her...aur woh Soham ke baare mein baat karti hai....kya isse pata nahi ke-'

After Ashi reached Soham and everyone else....

Soham: "I have a surprise for you! Tumhare room mein hai....chale"...he gave her a mischevous and suggesting look....

Tia: "Ashi wait!...Tia tumhare saath aati hai....kuch zaroori baatein karni hai"

Ashi, Tia and Soham go to Ashi's room....when Ashi opens the door, she is once again stunned.....she sees a beautiful girl...about her age sitting inside...the girl turned around....

It was Ashi's other best friend.....Purvi.....

Purvi ran up to Ashi and hugged her.....

Ashi pushed away from Purvi irritated....

Purvi: "Pinky...yeh kya hai?...we're meeting after 3 yrs and this is how you tell me hello..."

Ashi: "In the past 3 yrs....tumne mujhe kitna time phone kiya....ya e-mail kiya?..you didn't even say good bye to me...Mein tumse baat nahi karoongi"

Purvi: "I'm sorry..." holding her ears, giving a puppy dog look

Ashi's anger melted away at this look and she hugged Purvi......After they said thier hellos.....

Purvi: "SOHAM! tumne Anvesha ko bataaya?"

Soham: "Abhi nahi....."

Ashi was now confused as to what they were talking about....she was also getting angry because Soham had kept something from her....but Ashi had also kept something from him...but that was a different story

Ashi: "what are you guys keeping from me"

Soham and Purvi: "Nothing...." trying to cover up for themselves...

Soham: "I'll tell you later"...looking at Tia..."akele mein... But abhi hum dono ko jaana hai...unpacking"

After they both leave...after a couple minutes...Tia goes to Ashi

Tia: "Ashi....tumne Tia ko kyon nahi bataaya ke Yuvi ne tumko slap-"

Ashi surpised that Tia knows about this "Timbo! yeh kisne bataaya"

Tia: "Tia ne sun liya....jab Ranveer aur Sid ne papa ko kaha ke tere aur Yuvi ke beech mein kya hua...Ranveer ne yeh Tia se kyon chupa..kya woh Tia se trust nahi karta-"

Ashi: "KYA!!! Sid aur Thakur jaante hai.....iss liye woh aise behave kar rahe the...Hey BHAGGU! Who else knows......"

Tia: "Ashi...Tia only know that Tia Ranveer and Sid jaante hai....Tia ke kyon nahi bataaya....hum sisters hai...Ashi Tia ko sister nahi-"

Ashi: "I didn't tell anyone.....Tia....jo bhi mere aur Yuvi ke beech hua...i mean everything.....Soham should never know.....woh bohat over protective hai..."

Ashi stopped in the middle of her sentence....she saw Soham there with an angry and shocked look on his face.....he had heard everything....he turned around, and made a fist....

Soham was cursing Yuvi while walking and thinking 'I knew he was bad news as soon as he saw me and Pinky toghether...uske himmat....Pinky se haath lagana...Pinky kitni achchi ladki hai....I saw that look he gave me when Pinky was hugging me...maine uske ankhon mein pyar aur achcha insan kaise dekha.....Anvesha ne mujhe yeh pehle kyon nahi bataaya...I would have killed him long ago...why is she protecting him....'

end of part 14

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