A-Y Fic***.:Part35=Pg51:.***

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Posted: 19 years ago
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so this is my first fic...and i have been reading them until now...
i was told to post a fic...so here it goes......


PART 1

Ashi: "I will KILL you PSYCHO!!!" (chasing Yuvi with her tennis racket in her hand, waving it fiercely as if she was about to hack him into pieces)
Yuvi is running as fast as he can, when he staggers and crashes into Latty. Yuvi catches Latty before she falls.

Latty: "Yuvi, sorry maine tumko nahin dekha" (she really did see him...saw him staggering...thought it was the perfect opportunity to make her move)

Yuvi: "No, it's ok" he looks back to see Ashi coming closer...he studders out "I-I have to go now"...he jets out of there and turns the corner before Ashi realizes that he was just stansing next to Latty.

Ashi: "Latty, kya tumne Yuvi ko yehin pe dekha"

Latty: "Kyon"

Ashi: "Because i NEED to KILL that PSYCHO"

Latty afraid for Yuvi quickly replies to Ashi in a rude tone "No"

Ashi leaves just as irritated as she was before her words with Latty. Ashi starts to think about the thing that Yuvi had done to get her ion this state....which was her wanting to kill him and bring him back from the dead just to kill him again.


okay..well that was the end of part one... please let me know if you guys like it...

Edited by gsoni - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part gopi,plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yipee,me d first one 2 reply 😳
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hey awesom part nice fic ............... it seems to be interesting 👏 plzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome start Gopi 👏

continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
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kya baat hai gopi 😆 😉 😆
the starting was rocking 👏 pls jaldi cont karna, aur haa
belated happy b'day{sorry for wishing u late}
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee beginning gopi 👏 will be waiting 4 ur next part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awsome Gopi!!! To akhir tumne meri advice le hi li!!! Thank God!!! I can see ke tumhe abhi tak koi naam nahi socha. Anyway, sorry yaar I couldn't come today. 😭
Next week pakka chalenge. 😃 Jaldi continue kar!!!!

luv u,
Komal
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Posted: 19 years ago
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greatttt start yaar.......plzzz go ahead with your fic as soon as possible..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY GUYS THANKS FOR THE REPLIES
I AM TYPING THE NEXT PART NOW

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