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Part 28

Yuvi to Ashi "Wacko tumhe itna samaj mein nahi aaya ke tumhe medicines leni chahiye....especially jab tumhe yeh big wound hai...kya tumhara brains koi vacation pe chala gaya hai"

Ashi "mujhe koi medicine nahi leni" she left the room in a bad mood.

The guy with the medicine was shocked at Ashi's behavior. He was also concerned since not taking the medicine meant bad news. He turned to Yuvi "yeh Anveshaji bachchon se bhi ziddi hai....bachchon lete hai do teen baar kehne ke baad, lekin isne liya hi nahi....listen agar Anveshaji yeh sab medicine time pe nahi leti toh she will have to go to the hospital...Main yahaan iss time pe aaya toh mein dekh sakta hoon ke woh apne medicine leti hai, aur usse samjaonki yeh medicine lena kitna important hai."

Yuvi was now worried at hearing that Ashi could end up in a hospital if she doesn't take any medicine. He put a fake smile on his face and told the guy "Don't worry, main Ashi ko samjaonga aur yeh sab medicine time pe bhi legi"

The guy opened the door to leave, and just then everyone else had come back from the movie. The guy left without saying another word because he trusted Yuvi to take care of Ashi. When everyone came back they saw that Yuvi was a little lost...he was trying to think of what to tell Ashi to make her take the medicine.
Everyone noticed Yuvi was worried about something.

Sid "Dude, what's wrong....aur woh kaun tha jo abhi yahaan se chala gaya"

Yuvi "huh...nothing bro....woh sirf yeh medicine Ashi ke liye dene aaya tha"

Vrinda "Toh kya Ashi yahaan hai"

Yuvi "Yeah, aur ussne yeh saare medicine lene ka mana kar diya"

Vrinda shocked and worried "Kya?! Ashi ne mana kar diya, woh abhi kahaan hai"

Yuvi "Shayad in her room, mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hai...how do we convince Ashi yeh sab medicine lene ke"

Vrinda left for Ashi's room, and opened the door to find no one in there. She auickly ran downstairs to everyone else.

Vrinda "Ashi unke kamre mein nahi hai.....ab woh kahaan chaligayi"

Everyone scattered throughout the house and looked for Ashi, but no one could find her.

After an hour of searching everyone met up in front of the stairs.

Tia "Tia thinks we should call Ashi"

Vrinda tried Ashi's cell "Lagta hai unki phone off hai, ab kya karenge, Yuvi uski medicine kab lena hai"

Yuvi "usse tab lena tha when that guy came, but Ashi ne kaha ke woh koi medicine nahi lena chahti"

Just then Aditya and Sam came. They had heard what Yuvi had said and also were confused.

Yuvi was now angry at seeing Aditya "ADITYA!!"

Varun and Ranveer took Yuvi to the side.

Ranveer to Yuvi "Banaa, abhi nahi....abhi hum sab ne Ashi ko dundhna padega, uski halat kaise hogi"

Yuvi "You're right bro but uss Aditya ki wajhese Ashi is hurt....agar woh Ashi se baat karne ki koshish ki toh-"

Sid came there "Hey guys, yahaan kya ho raha hai"

Varun "kuch nahi Sid, chalo hum sab Ashi ko dundhte hai"

They go back to where everyone is standing there waiting for them. Ranveer says that they should look for Ashi once more.
Everyone splits up and goes looking for her.

Aditya goes towards Ashi's room and sees no one in there...then he remembers the room that he took her to last night.....and he remembers Ashi being shocked that he knew about the room. Aditya opens the door to the closet and then opens the secret door to her secret room. When he walks into it he is left with his mouth open. He hadn't paid attention to it earlier. He looked around and all he saw were pics of Remix, the lyrics to their songs....he also saw a door for a closet that read "DO NOT ENTER....BEWARE"....he saw Ashi sitting on a small couch.

Aditya "Ashi?"

Ashi turned her face towards Aditya adn he saw tears coming down her face. Aditya went to her and gave her a hug.

Ashi now wiping her tears "Aditya, Rocky ne mujhe kyon nahi bataaya ke woh zinda tha....usne mujhe koi baat kabhi nahi chupaayi"

Aditya "Maine bhi usse poocha ke woh tumse kyon nahi kehna chahta, aur usne mujhe yeh kaha ke woh tumse pareshaan nahi karna chahta, and he didn't want to give you false hopes ke woh hamesha tumahre saath reh sakta tha....usne ek heart aur ek kidney ki bohat zaroori thi, aur doctor ne kaha ke agar uske koi heart ek mahine ke andar nahi aata toh woh mar jaayega...woh chahta tha ke heart aur kidney aane ke baad woh tumko bataayega ke woh zinda tha....he didn't want your heart to break again"

Ashi was now feeling even worse...she couldn't be with the person who knew her better than she knew herself in his time of need.

Aditya "Ashi sab tumhare liye pareshaan hai....tumhe doondhne mein paagal ho gaye hai...come downstairs with me"

Ashi and Aditya went downstairs together. Ashi was trying to put a smile on her face but everything that happened today was taking a while for her to get used to.

Yuvi saw that Aditya's arm was around Ashi, and he got angry and confused.

Vrinda ran upto Ashi "Ashi tum theek toh ho na"

Tia "Ashi tum theek ho....tumne Tia ko darra diya...Tia sochne lagi ke agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh-"

Ashi "Toh Tia ka make up kaise milega kyon ki Ashi ne kahi chuppa rakha hai" in Tia style

Tia "You punk, tum abhi mazzak kar rahi ho aur tumne Tia ka makeup kahaan rakha hai"

Ranveer ignoring what Tia had just said "Ashi tumnhe apni dawaiyaan kyon nahi li"

Soham and Purvi just came in...they went to get ice cream after the movie....then they ate some pani puri

Soham "Kya! Ashi tumne medicine nahi li"

Ashi "Everyone please shut up...mujhe koi medicine nahi leni" she once again left from there

Aditya followed her and then stopped her "Agar Rocky zinda hota toh woh kya sochega....think about what Rocky would want you to do"

Ashi "Aditya tum sahi keh rahe ho....Rocky would want me to take the medicine. Thanks Aditya"

They went back to where everyone else was.....

Ashi "ok fine, mein apni medicine abhi leti hoon"

Everyone was so happy that Ashi had agreed to take her medicine they didn't even notice that Aditya was the one who went after Ashi to convince her.

After Ashi took the medicine...all were sitting and talking

Sam "Aditya, tumhe Anvesha ke kya kaha ke jad tumne uske wapis laaya toh woh medicine lene mein maan liya"

when everyone heard this, they were astonished and realized that they had completely dismissed that it was Aditya who brought Ashi back to take the medicine.

Now everyone was curious and only wanted to know what happened between Aditya and Ashi, especially since yesterday she was ready to kill him.

Vrinda "haan Ashi, tum Aditya se rudely baatien nahi karti, aur usne marne ki koshish bhi nahi ki.....kya hua tumne"

Ashi "kuch nahi Maate, Aditya ek achcha insan hai"

Yuvi "KYA! ASHI yeh tum keh rahi ho.....jiss aadmi ne tumhare saath-"

Ashi "I know Yuvi, lekin maine Aditya ko maaf kardiya aur yeh achcha hoga ke sab usne maaf karde...mujhe Aditya se koi problem nahi hai"

Ranveer "Ashi yeh aap keh rahi hai"

Ashi "yes thakur and I mean it...Aditya ab mere friend hai"

Ranveer "lekin Ashi-"

Ashi "no Thakur, mujhe kuch nahi sunna"

Tia "agar Ashi ko Aditya se koi problem nahi hai, toh Tia thinks humne Aditya ko ek chance dena chahiye"

They all talked for a while longer and ate dinner...

It was time for Aditya and Sam to leave. After they left Soham took Ashi to the side. Purvi came with them.

Soham "Ashi toh mujhe sab kuch batao...why are you being nice to him...yeasterday you tried to kill him"

Ashi "Tumhe pata hai ke Jaan came..lekin tumhe yeh pata nahi hai ke why Jaan came. Lekin woh mein tumhe baad mein bataongi. Rocky ki wajah se mein Aditya ki dost hoon. Jab maine Rocky ko Aditya ke baare mein bataaya, toh woh Aditya ko sudhaara...aur Rocky ne uske saath message rakha ke mujhe Aditya ke saath ab dosti karna chahiye..aur puraani baatein bhooljana chahiye"

Soham and Purvi understood everything now....especially if Rocky was behind it....whoever Rocky set out to help, that person always ended up to be a better person than anyone could have ever thought that person could be. They also knew that if Rocky said somethign to Ashi once in anyway....Ashi did what she was told.

Purvi "Ok toh abh hum dono bhi Aditya ka dost hai"

Ashi "Great ab mein jaa sakti hoon" She left and now was on her way to her room

Yuvi came to her and asked her "Ashi tum uss Aditya ko kaise-"

Ashi "Yuvi abhi mujhe kuch nahi sunna humme bohat kam baaki hai, aur kal se hum sab ne humari projects bhi start karni hai"

Yuvi "but Ashi-"

Ashi's phone then rang..it was her mom "Yuvi mein tumhare saath baad mein baat karoongi...Mumma ka phone aaya"

She went to her terrace and she told her mom what happened earlier during the day....then Ashi complained about the doctor.

Sonia was shocked about what she heard adn wanted to go there right away, but couldn't...they decided that after Sonia and Sumeet come back from London, then Ashi, Sonia, and Jaan would go and perform the last rites for Rocky.

The next week...

Aditya "Ashi yeh tum kya kar rahi ho....get off"

Ashi "Aditya tum ek minute ke liye shutp up nahi kar sakte"

Yuvi was standing outside of the room hearing this....

Ashi "See dekha.... we should go, sab humara intezaar kar rahe hai"

Ashi and Aditya walked out of the room and they noticed Yuvi standing outside looking sad.

Ashi "kya hua psycho...tum yahaan kahde kyon ho....movie dekhna nahi...we finished our project so fast....mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi aa raha hai"

Yuvi sadly "yeah me too"

The three of them left together to go to see a movie.
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Part 28 is up...another long part

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Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago
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yipeee,me d first one 2 reply 😃
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GREAT PART GOPI CONTINUE SOON 👏 SAYA 😡
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great part Gopi please continue
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awesome!!!gr8888!!!sufi...
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Part 29

When the movie was done, all the girls, except Ashi, were walking out holding onto the guys so tightly that the guys started to complain. Ashi came out with a huge smile across her face, and she started talking about the different parts of the movie.

Tia "hum sab tum jaise punk nahi hai jo iss movie ke baare mein baat karna chahte hai"

Ashi "shut up Timbo, kissine tumse nahi kaha ke tumne iss movie ke baare mein baat karna chahiye, lekin mein toh bhul gayi ke mein ek brainless Timbo ke saath baat kar rahi hoon"

Tia "you punk, tumne Tia ko brian less kaha....Tia ke paas tumhare saath waste karne ka time nahi hai, Tia jaa rahi hai...chalo Ranveer"

Tia pulled Ranveer from there and they both left.
Aditya also left....he had to go for a job in Dehli and his flight was in 3 hours.
Then Everyone else made their way home...on reaching the house....Soham got a letter from Jaan which was from Rocky before he died...

Soham and Purvi went to Soham's room to read the letter...in the letter Rocky told Soham evrything that Ashi had ever told him, that was a secret from Soham... it was mostly about Ashi's relationship with Yuvi and everything that had ever happened between them. He also had told them about Aditya, and that he had changed Aditya to a good person. In the end of the letter, Rocky asked Soham not to let Ashi know that he had let Soham know about her and Yuvi. Rocky also said that Purvi was probably there too reading the letter...and for her not to say anything also. Rocky then told them he had a plan that could once and for all get rid of all of the misunderstandings between Ashi and Yuvi, but now that he is dead since they have this letter, Soham and Purvi have to think of a plan. Rocky also told Soham to stop thinking of getting Ashi back with Sam because Ashi would never do that since she never loved him, and Yuvi is the only one who can keep Ashi happy.

After reading the letter Soham and Purvi were shocked that Ashi had kept so much from them. They knew of the incidents but they were never told of who the incidents were with. Now they also understood the tension that was between Ashi and Yuvi. Soham started to feel sad for them, and decided that he would fulfill Rocky's wish to get Ashi and Yuvi back together.

He and Purvi just sat there trying to think of plans. Then Purvi suggested that they ask Yuvi, and that they should get some more information on what is going on.

Meanwhile....Ashi, Tia, Yuvi and Ranveer had gone to the recording studio to record a the Boom song. Their cd was going to come out in about two months and they still needed two more new songs for the cd. The producers wanted one of the new songs to be a slow song. Yuvi said that he would write it since he had an idea already.

After recording, they were all taken to a party because their agent wanted them to meet some people in the business. At the party, Sonu Nigam and Saapna Mukerji were going to sing (Remix had also performed one song). When Sonu and Saapna got up to sing, couples went to the dance floor. Their agent saw that Ashi and Yuvi weren't dancing, and went to tell them to dance too. He brought a guy to dance with Ashi.

Their agent: "Ashi, why don't you go on the dance floor with Sahil"

Yuvi was sitting at the same table and blurted out "Ashi mere saath dance karne wali thi, right Ashi"

Ashi "Yeah right, sorry Sahil, Mayank(their agent)"

Yuvi took Ashi to the dane floor. The song changed but Sonu and Saapna were still singing. Ashi was avoiding looking at Yuvi.

Ashi "thanks psycho, ab mujhe dance nahi karna padega" She was about to leave Yuvi when she saw that MAyank was looking at them, she quickly went back into Yuvi's arms, and started slow dancing with him...

the song madbhari raat thi was playing

Ashi was looking down, Yuvi put his hand under Ashi's chin and lifted up her face to look at him. Their eyes met and they became lost in thier own world.

Yuvi and Ashi were both lost in the moment "Ashi, I love you"..."Yuvi I love you too"

When the song was about to end, Tia noticed that Ashi and Yuvi were actually dancing together, and they were lost in their own world. She showed this to Ranveer and he looked quite pleased.

When the song ended Tia and Ranveer went to Ashi and Yuvi.

Ranveer "Banaa yahaan pe kya ho raha hai" teasingly

Ashi and Yuvi immediatly broke apart.

Ashi "Thakur jaise tum soch rahe ho na aisa kuch nahi hai, aur kabhi nahi hoga" Ashi left from there in anger....she couldn't believe that she told Yuvi she still loved him.

Yuvi was about to leave to go after Ashi, but Mayank came there and told them that they have to go to the recording studio again tomorrow. He then noticed that Ashi wasn't there and he asked where she went...they told him that Ashi left, and that she was angry.

Mayank "Yuvi jab tum Ashi ke saath ho toh usse gussa aata hai...now fix whatever problem there is between you two...it should be fixed before next month. People don't want to listen to a band where the members don't get along...agar tum dono ka problem fix nahi ho jata toh i will stop this launch"

Yuvi "don't worry, main sambhalunga"

Mayank "You better...agar iss cd ka launch ruk gaya toh pata nahi company ka owner kya karega"

Yuvi, Tia and Ranveer left from the party and went back home. When they reached the house everyone was sleeping. It was about one in the morning. Yuvi made his way to Ashi's room, and noticed that she wasn't in there. He called her and heard her phone ringing in her room. He followed this sound of the ring and he reached the closet door, when he opened it he saw that there was another door in there. He went to open the door, but Ashi had opened it from the other side.

When she made her way out of the secret room, her head bumped into Yuvi's.

Ashi was shocked to see Yuvi there...he was about to go into her secret room. She pushed Yuvi out of her closet.

Ashi "Psycho tumhe koi manners nahi hai kya...tum mere closet mein kyun the...tum mere room mein kyun the"

Yuvi was confused about what just happened "Ashi woh door"

Ashi "Look just don't come into my room again"

Yuvi "Ashi tum-uss door--uss door ke peeche kya hai"

Ashi "Uss door ke peeche jo bhi hai tumhe kya"

Yuvi "Sorry Ashi.....Mayank ne kaha ke agar hum dono ke beech jo arguments ho raha hai...ussne kaha ke next month tak all fights should stop warna woh humara cd ka launch stop karega"

Ashi "Psycho tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya"

Yuvi nervously "Ashi aaj jo tumne mujhe kaha dance floor mein...kya woh sach tha...Ashi please tell me the truth"

Ashi wanted to avoid the whole subject all together. She was angry at herself for letting Yuvi know the truth....she was about to confess, but then she remembered the conversation she had with Yashwant Dev. "No Yuvi woh sach nahi tha....mein tumse pyar karti thi...lekin ab nahi karti"

Yuvi "Ashi I love you, aur mujhe pata hai ke tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho. Why are you lying to youself....mujhse aur sabse jooth kyun bhol rahi ho ke tum mujhe pyar nahi karti"

Ashi had tears in her eyes...she could never be with Yuvi even if she wanted to because of the conversation. "Yuvi main tumse pyar nahi karti....nahi karti...nahi karti....I HATE YOU YUVI...mujhe alkela choodo" Ashi was screaming by this time, and everyone got up adn rushed over there. They saw Ashi crying telling Yuvi to leave, and Yuvi with tears in his eyes.

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Part 29 is up

hope u guys like it

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wow awesome part continue soon
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WHAT WAS ASHIS CONVERSATON WITH tHAT YASHWANT DEV.

i REALLY WANTO KNOW

COTINUE FAST PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Edited by rockingrebel - 19 years ago

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