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Part 16

Ashi just stood there saying nothing. She was thinking 'How could Yuvi believe all that stuff the person said about me......doesn't he understand me...doesn't he know that could never do that to him'

Then Tia came in, she heard the whole thing.....

Tia: "Yuvi! yahaan se chale jao!"

Yuvi: "But Tia"

Tia: "NO But TIA! Tia kehti hai ke tum yahaan se chale jao aur Ashi se tang mat karo!"

Yuvi opened his mouth to speak, but Tia "Don't even try to talk to Ashi. Tia tumhe Ashi ko hurt karna mauka nahi degi."

Tia then grabbed Ashi and took her away from there. After she dropped Ashi to her room, Tia went to find Ranveer to tell him everything she found out, and to ask him to help her keep Yuvi away from Ashi.

As she was walking towards Ranveer's room, she bumped into Soham.

Soham: " Tia! Tumne Anvesha ko dekha"

Tia (nervously):"Haan, woh apne room mein hai...Tia abhi wahaan se aa rahi hai.....Tia ko ek zaroori kam hai....bye"

Soham made his way to Ashi's room, now that he had cooled down from earlier.

Meanwhile...

Tia found Ranveer and told him what she heard Yuvi tell Ashi.....

Ranveer was shocked to find out that Tia knew all this: " Tia...aap... yeh... sab... kaise....kab"

Tia: "Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi waise baat nahi. Tia ne sab sunliya.....jab tum Tia ke papa se-"

Tia: "Ranveer, hume kuch karna chahiye"

Ranveer: "Haan Tia, hum bhi yeh sochte hai."

Tia now showing that she was angry with Yuvi: "Tia ko pata hai ke Yuvi Ashi se pyaar karta hai.....Yuvi ne jo kiya....Tia will never forget ke Yuvi ne Ashi ke saath aisa kiya"

Ranveer: "Tia hum sochte the ke, hume Ashi aur Yuvi ko phir se ek karna chahiye"

Tia: "Ranveer...you--you...CAMEL!" Tia not able to think of anything else to say to him, left slamming the door behind her.

Meanwhile..... in Ashi's room

Soham was kneeling on the floor in front of Ashi, holding her hand, and showing her a ring...

Soham: " Kya tum hamesha....will you always be with me...If you say yes....Mein tumhe hamesha kush rakhoonga....tere aankhon mein kabhi aasoon nahi honge.....tum jo kahegi mein woh karoonga.....tumhe tang kabhi nahi karoonga....."

End of part 16......

Edited by gsoni - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: gsoni

Part 16

Ashi just stood there saying nothing. She was thinking 'How could Yuvi believe all that stuff the person said about me......doesn't he understand me...doesn't he know that could never do that to him'

Then Tia came in, she heard the whole thing.....

Tia: "Yuvi! yahaan se chale jao!"

Yuvi: "But Tia"

Tia: "NO But TIA! Tia kehti hai ke tum yahaan se chale jao aur Ashi se tang mat karo!"

Yuvi opened his mouth to speak, but Tia "Don't even try to talk to Ashi. Tia tumhe Ashi ko hurt karna mauka nahi degi."

Tia then grabbed Ashi and took her away from there. After she dropped Ashi to her room, Tia went to find Ranveer to tell him everything she found out, and to ask him to help her keep Yuvi away from Ashi.

As she was walking towards Ranveer's room, she bumped into Soham.

Soham: " Tia! Tumne Anvesha ko dekha"

Tia (nervously):"Haan, woh apne room mein hai...Tia abhi wahaan se aa rahi hai.....Tia ko ek zaroori kam hai....bye"

Soham made his way to Ashi's room, now that he had cooled down from earlier.

Meanwhile...

Tia found Ranveer and told him what she heard Yuvi tell Ashi.....

Ranveer was shocked to find out that Tia knew all this: " Tia...aap... yeh... sab... kaise....kab"

Tia: "Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi waise baat nahi. Tia ne sab sunliya.....jab tum Tia ke papa se-"

Tia: "Ranveer, hume kuch karna chahiye"

Ranveer: "Haan Tia, hum bhi yeh sochte hai."

Tia now showing that she was angry with Yuvi: "Tia ko pata hai ke Yuvi Ashi se pyaar karta hai.....Yuvi ne jo kiya....Tia will never forget ke Yuvi ne Ashi ke saath aisa kiya"

Ranveer: "Tia hum sochte the ke, hume Ashi aur Yuvi ko phir se ek karna chahiye"

Tia: "Ranveer...you--you...CAMEL!" Tia not able to think of anything else to say to him, left slamming the door behind her.

Meanwhile..... in Ashi's room

Soham was kneeling on the floor in front of Ashi, holding her hand, and showing her a ring...

Soham: " Kya tum hamesha....will you always be with me...If you say yes....Mein tumhe hamesha kush rakhoonga....tere aankhon mein kabhi aasoon nahi honge.....tum jo kahegi mein woh karoonga.....tumhe tang kabhi nahi karoonga....."

End of part 16......

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Part 17

Ashi: "DUH-UH! kissi ne tumse koi baat par 'no' kaha"

THUD! a loud noise came from outside of Ashi's room...it was Yuvi...he had come to have Ashi listen to a song that he had made for her....after he heard the conversation that just happened he dropped his guitar...

Soham (a little creeped out)"What was that, Pinky-"

Ashi: "Stop calling me Pinky!!...dekhte hai ke woh noise kya tha"

Yuvi realizing that he had made a noise, grabbed his guitar and left....the conversation he heard between Soham and Ashi kept replaying in his head....

When Ashi and Soham opened the door, they saw that noone was there.

Soham: "Yahan pe koi nahi hai"

Ashi: "Duh-uh! Tum pehle kitna smart the.....yeh tumhara brians ko kya hogaya.....Timbo jaise baat kar rahe ho....main tumhare liye ek brian surgeon ka number doondhti hoon"

Soham: "Pin-" remembering that Ashi would yell at him again stops before he calls her Pinky again... "Ashi..."

Ashi: "Go andWoh kam kare ke aao....aur mein party ka intezaam karti hoon...waise tumhara birthday 2 din phele....aur aaj ki khush baat ke liye" Ashi gave him a teasing look.

Ashi pushed Soham out of the room and called up Yuvi and Sid to ask hem to help her organize a party for tomorrow night.

Yuvi was reluctant, but he didn't want Ashi to know that he was the one who was outside her room so he agreed and acted like nothing happened between them...they met in the shed

In the Shed...
They had decided to have the party in the pub..and now...

Yuvi: "But Ashi, Jumbo-"

Ashi: "Leave that to me"

Sid: "Ashi yeh party....i mean it's a cool idea..but kyon"

Ashi: "Party mein sab kuch pata chalega.....Sid tum aur Yuvi sab ko invite kar dena....mujhe kuch kam baaki hai"

Ashi leaves the shed.



The next day.....

Everyone (except Ashi) is in the ccd discussing about the party. Yuvi was staring at Soham, looking sad.

Vrinda: "Soham, kya tujhe pata hai ke Ashi ne yeh party kyon."

Soham trying to act like he doesn't know "umm...No"

Purvi realizing that Soham is lying "Soham...stop lying...tujhe pata hai...and you're not even telling me"..getting angry, she gets out of her seat to leave, but Soham stops her...

Soham blurted out " tum jaanti ho..party kyon...Humara yesterday ka conversation"

Purvi: "KYA!!! How does she-"

Soham giving her a pleading look "not here, we'll talk later"

Everyone: "Hum sab ko batao naa"

Ashi came in with a smile on her face "Kya bataana hai"

Soham knew he had already said to much to everyone "Nothing...kuch bhi to nahi"

Pri: "woh jooth bhol rahe hai"

Ranveer: "Ashi, hum yeh poochte the ke aapne yeh party-"

Soham: "Ashi....maine kuch nahi-"

Ashi: "Great! ab jo tumne sabko kehne wale the toh-"

Purvi: "Sach Ashi, Soham ne kissi ne nahi bataaya, mujhe bhi nahi

Ashi now with a relieved look on her face... "Good!"...giving a look at Soham, and grabbing his arm "Chalo mere saath"

Ashi left the ccd with Soham, leaving everyone confused about what had just happened....even Soham was confused on why she was dragging him out of there.




end part 17

Edited by gsoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this part was gr8
plz continue soon 👏

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