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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 plz cont asap.
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Posted: 19 years ago
good part gopi continue soon👏 v
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey.......a greattttttt part yet again........ 👏

plzzzzzz continue soon...... 😛 😛 😛
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Yaar cont kar na kitani der ho gayi hai aur kitana wait karayegi??????????? 😭 😭 😭
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hey gopi the part was awesome yaar 👏 plz cont soon
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sry i didn't continue for a while...my computer was getting fixed and i have been using my really old computer that is really slow...but now my regular computer is back!!!
i will continue today!
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Part 15

Soham was cursing Yuvi while walking and thinking 'I knew he was bad news as soon as he saw me and Pinky toghether...uske himmat....Pinky se haath lagana...Pinky kitni achchi ladki hai....I saw that look he gave me when Pinky was hugging me...maine uske ankhon mein pyar aur achcha insan kaise dekha.....Anvesha ne mujhe yeh pehle kyon nahi bataaya...I would have killed him long ago...why is she protecting him....'

Ashi: "NO!... Soham STOP!"...but Soham had already left...

Ashi and Tia left to try and stop Soham..

Ashi: "Timbo...Soham se pehle...we have to find Yuvi"

Tia: "Oh Tia's God! Yuvi ko bachalo"

Ashi and Tia split up going to different parts of the school to find Yuvi.Tia went towards his room then to the ccd...while Ashi went towards the shed.

Ashi decided to call Purvi and tell her to stall Soham, as she would find Yuvi. Purvi left her room to go and find Soham.

After searching for a few minutes, Ashi saw Soham was still searching for Yuvi (Purvi couldn't stop Soham), and that Yuvi was right next to him. ( Soham was turned to the other side looking for Yuvi)...She quickly ran there to make sure that Soham didn't see Yuvi.

Yuvi hadn't noticed Soham next to him. As he was walking he felt something pull him towards the empty class room.

When he got into the class and was shocked to see Ashi there...out of breath.........

Yuvi yelled "WACKO!"

Ashi said nothing...as she was still catching her breath.

Yuvi: "ASHI!!!-"

Ashi put her hand on Yuvi's mouth to shut him up.

Ashi: "Listen Yuvi. Stay away from me and Soham kuvh din ke liye... Soham ne tujhe dekh liya toh-"

Yuvi confused: "Ashi what are you saying? mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaya"

Ashi now getting irritated... "Jo mein keh rahi hhoon woh karo..okay"

Yuvi: "toh pehle you have to listen to me...mujhe explain karnedo"

Ashi: "NO....Yuvi-"

Yuvi: "Mujhe explain karnedo...." Yuvi explains that the incident that happened three months ago...what she knows was not everything that happened....he told her that he was a little drunk when he came back to Maurya, ane some guy came up to him adn told him something....poisoning his mind against Ashi...and that she knows what happened after that..."

end of part 15......i know it is not that good it will get better

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey nice part yaar👏plzzzz cont soon😛

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Part 15

Soham was cursing Yuvi while walking and thinking 'I knew he was bad news as soon as he saw me and Pinky toghether...uske himmat....Pinky se haath lagana...Pinky kitni achchi ladki hai....I saw that look he gave me when Pinky was hugging me...maine uske ankhon mein pyar aur achcha insan kaise dekha.....Anvesha ne mujhe yeh pehle kyon nahi bataaya...I would have killed him long ago...why is she protecting him....'

Ashi: "NO!... Soham STOP!"...but Soham had already left...

Ashi and Tia left to try and stop Soham..

Ashi: "Timbo...Soham se pehle...we have to find Yuvi"

Tia: "Oh Tia's God! Yuvi ko bachalo"

Ashi and Tia split up going to different parts of the school to find Yuvi.Tia went towards his room then to the ccd...while Ashi went towards the shed.

Ashi decided to call Purvi and tell her to stall Soham, as she would find Yuvi. Purvi left her room to go and find Soham.

After searching for a few minutes, Ashi saw Soham was still searching for Yuvi (Purvi couldn't stop Soham), and that Yuvi was right next to him. ( Soham was turned to the other side looking for Yuvi)...She quickly ran there to make sure that Soham didn't see Yuvi.

Yuvi hadn't noticed Soham next to him. As he was walking he felt something pull him towards the empty class room.

When he got into the class and was shocked to see Ashi there...out of breath.........

Yuvi yelled "WACKO!"

Ashi said nothing...as she was still catching her breath.

Yuvi: "ASHI!!!-"

Ashi put her hand on Yuvi's mouth to shut him up.

Ashi: "Listen Yuvi. Stay away from me and Soham kuvh din ke liye... Soham ne tujhe dekh liya toh-"

Yuvi confused: "Ashi what are you saying? mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaya"

Ashi now getting irritated... "Jo mein keh rahi hhoon woh karo..okay"

Yuvi: "toh pehle you have to listen to me...mujhe explain karnedo"

Ashi: "NO....Yuvi-"

Yuvi: "Mujhe explain karnedo...." Yuvi explains that the incident that happened three months ago...what she knows was not everything that happened....he told her that he was a little drunk when he came back to Maurya, ane some guy came up to him adn told him something....poisoning his mind against Ashi...and that she knows what happened after that..."

end of part 15......i know it is not that good it will get better

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Posted: 19 years ago
oh its an excellent part...... 👏

plzzzzz continue soon........
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part gopi. 👏
plz cont soon.

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