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Posted: 19 years ago
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In Ashi's room……………

Ashi enters her room and plops on her bed. As she was on her back staring at the ceiling she started to wonder….the dance class was amazing…..slow dancing is amazing……Yuvi was amaz-…"Yuvi!" she loudly said as she sat up straight…..why an I thinking about him?...again she laid back down on her bed….she unknowingly blushed…he dances great…his eyes were so prett- "WHAT!" she screamed as she sat up straight again…not again! 😆

Then again she laid back down but this time she closed her eyes…again images of Yuvi appeared as the way he was dancing with her….suddenly the door opened…Ashi knew who it was…must be maate...she thought then she said "hi maa-" "mumum!!" the voice bellowed. 😕 😕

Again she sat up straight…."mumma" she angrily whispered to herself. There goes my daydreaming about yuv- "Yuvi!...not again!" smack! She hit her head… 😆

In Yuvi's room…………..

Yuvi enters his room and sits on the big floppy yellow…most-comfortable-chair-in-the-world…..unsurprisingly picked up his guitar which was right next to the chair….and began to strum a few strings as he stared into deep space thinking about Ashi…. 😳

"The class was awesome!"...he thought…"Raj and Priya were awesome!"…"Ashi was-"…he hesitated and then gave a big goofy smile to his guitar….."-more than awesome……. 😳
Suddenly Sid entered the room…"hey dude! Wazzzup? Dance class kaisa tha?" he looked at Yuvi who was still smiling at his guitar thinking about Ashi….. 😳 😳 😳 "Dude! Whatever u do…you still can't date a guitar!" 😆

Smack! One pillow went flying towards Sid's dufusy face 😆 😆 😆 "ouch! Yuvi! What was that for!" he said as he rubbed his nose..."that was for acting like a dufus!" he laughed…. 😆

After a while Yuvi went to the canteen to eat something…there he saw Ashi…..he looked at her as she was talking to maate…she seemed depressed about something….as soon as Ashi looked back at him…he looked somewhere else….

Then again he looked at Ashi and this time a voice said from behind….."looks like u love her" Yuvi's head turned as he saw Raj! "R-Raj!" 😕 😕 Yuvi said in surprise "wow! U know my name!" he teased…"so! Ashi and Yuvi eh?" 😆 😆

"noooooo its nothing like that!" "Well….ok whatever u say….I just came here to tell u that u will have a new partner because-" "WHAT! NO!" 😕 😕 he loudly screamed that everyone in the canteen including Ashi stopped what they were doing and looked at him….. 😕 😕

"hehehehe" 😃 😃 Yuvi said as he pulled Raj to an empty classroom…and Ashi followed them…stood behind the door and listened what Raj was talking to Yuvi about…..

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ohky!
now how was it???
loong enuf sayntika?? 😆 😆 😆


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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Hey nikki 😃I read all the parts of your fic now. becoz of the title I thought it was a TR fic 😉 Anyway it is amazingly written brought back all my memories of AY slow dancing 😳
Plz continue soon na 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
AWSOME PART NIKKI!!!!!!!! Yaar jaldi continuekaro naa. Itne small parts kyun likhthi ho??? BUT EITHER WAY IT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ashi-coolest

Hey nikki 😃I read all the parts of your fic now. becoz of the title I thought it was a TR fic 😉 Anyway it is amazingly written brought back all my memories of AY slow dancing 😳
Plz continue soon na 😃



nehallllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!how..dare..u..say..tht.."my"..frd.. .harshada..bendre's..frd..will..write..a..fic...on..TR
when..she..can..write..so..amazigly..abt..AY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!😉

i..wt..allow..her..to..u..see😆im..sucha..hitler😳

hey...nikki...awesome..parts...read..them..2gether!!!!!!love d..them!!!!!!!!👏

ur..writig..is..wonderful!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part nikki.plsssssssssssssssssssssssss cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
yup nikki,awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
no,its not long enough 😳
plz cont asap. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ashi rocks


nehallllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!how..dare..u..say..tht.."my"..frd.. .harshada..bendre's..frd..will..write..a..fic...on..TR when..she..can..write..so..amazigly..abt..AY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!😉i..wt..allow..her..to..u..see😆im..sucha..hitler😳 hey...nikki...awesome..parts...read..them..2gether!!!!!!love d..them!!!!!!!!👏ur..writig..is..wonderful!!!


Grave mistake Harshu 😆 😆 😆 Plz forgive me na 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58

ohky!
u guys m sowy if my parts are lik small....
ill try to grow them! 😆 😆 😆

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Part 8

Ashi kept her ears on the door as she tried to hear what Raj was talking to Yuvi about. She heard……

"What! Why?? Why can't she be my partner!!??"
"tumare dad se pucho..uh…Yashwant Dev na?"
"magar kyu?? Dad ho Ashi se kya problem hai??"
"tumare dad ko lagta hai ki Ashi ke paas vo theek 'image' nahi hai… .you wont win if she is ur partner…and if u win….with some one else…it will be good for ur dads campaign ......." 😕 😕 😕
"kya! Dad is changing my partner for his stupid campaign!"

Ashi heard and assumed that Yuvi was stomping towards the door so she ran away from there. 😭 😭 😭

Yuvi knew thanks to Raj that his dad was in the school in jumbo's office. He stomped his way thought Gloria….he was sooo angry! 😡 He cant do this!....he thought….I like Ashi…..as my partner….. 😉 😉

Yuvi went in to see jumbo in deep conversation with Yashwant dev…..then suddenly Yashwant noticed Yuvi's angry face and excused himself from jumbo's office…held the angry teenager by the arm and brought him to his room. There the father and son fury began…………..

Yuvi held a deep breath and began to say in a normal tone…
"dad abhi mene kudh suna ki Ashi meri partner nahi hogi"
"haan tumne sahi sune…."
"magar aapko Ashi se kya problem hai?? She dances well!!"

Yuvi's tone was now increasing….and equally so did his dads….. 😕

"dancing ki baat nahi hai! Anyone can move an arm and a leg! Her look….her hair…rebellious nature….and voh- voh Sonia ray……voh actress ……agar tum Ashi ke saath dance karogo to mere image ke liye theek nahi hoga!"


"IMAGE! IMAGE! IMAGE! You only care about your image…..you don't even care about the dance! 😡 ..... his voice became softer…."you don't even care about me" as soon as he said that he grabbed his guitar and made his way to the door. 😕 😕 😕

He needed some time to himself….he grabbed the handle and turned it and opened the door…. 😭 😭 😭
The 1st thing he saw were a pair of familiar deep brown eyes…..but something was wrong…those beautiful brown eyes were filled with tears…..

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m really really sowy if its boring!!!!!!!!!!!!!


il try to make the next part romantic
😳

Edited by a.r.t.y - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
wow it was amazing..u have described it so well yaar..must say..mind blowing it was..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.me first one to reply..

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