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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏
plz cont asap 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
awesome fic yaar......love it totally...... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
hi
ur fic is really nice
please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
nikki pls jaldi cony karna.can't wait.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
nikki wats dis??tune abhi tak cont nahin kiya 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Nikki,

i jus read ur fanfic rite now... n i regret for not reading it frm the very begining..s***y for dat 😭

btw, ur fanfic totally rocks!!! 👏

continue soon
cant wait anymore

Divz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
lol
u guys!!!!!!i hav an xam a few days from now! lol
i need to study u knw..........
btw
i was wunderin y hasnt divya^ posted in this topic so far...... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
im really sorry Nikki,

but now, count me in your "regular reader" fanfic list 😳 😳

n Best Of Luck For ur Eggjams 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
oy! ohk ohk....
here it is.........
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Part 9

"Ashi!" he called out to the girl who was running away from him….he looked back at his dad who was not even bothered that he hurt the feeling of some one his son happens to….like…….. 😳 😳

He ran after her with his guitar clutched in one hand…he saw her running into the gym room where they go for practices there he glanced at her as she went to the stereo and turned on a song….slow and romantic… 😳

He went up to her and sat down beside her…Ashi tried not to looked at him…Yuvi just softly said "Ashi….um…." he didn't know what to say…… 😕 😕 😕

He cant just apologize for that rude thing his dad meant…..for one stupid image u cant judge a whole person 😡 😡 😡 …he looked at her….rebellious…yeah….naughty…..oh yeah! 😆 ….sweet….sometimes….wonderful….all the time…. 😳

He smiled and he got up….he either had two options…play a song for her….like he usually does…or!.....he showed his hand in front of Ashi….n he slowly said with a big smile on his face…."can I have this dance?"

Ashi looked up with a weird expression….is there something wrong with him? Yuvi looked at Ashi who was pretty much uncomfortable with the whole dance idea…."please" he said as he looked deeply into her wet eyes…..and made a small puppy like face…."pretty please"….. 😳

Aaaahhh she had to say yes! Who can't say no…. with a small smile she got up with her hand in Yuvi's….."I don't know how to dance…."she looked at Yuvi who was grinning at her….nice try…he thought….she's jus giving an excuse…."oh sure! As if I know……"Yuvi replied with a wink…. 😉 😉 😉

"Let's do what we learned in class today" he said…as he put her hands behind his head and held her hips….then slowly both of them swayed to the music…."uh….Yuvi…your dad…..um…..what he said…." 😕 😕 Ashi looked at Yuvi who was just smiling at her…. 😊 😊 😊 "well….whatever he said can we just forget it?" "But what if he finds out?" "I'll have to talk to him about that…"

"But what if he…." Yuvi put his finger on her lips "ssshhh….u talk to much…" 😆 😆 😆 he whispered and tightened his grip around Ashi's waist… 😳 .

Ashi looked down…at her waist…then she looked back up "umm…." No harm! 😉 😉 She thought…she went closer to Yuvi…as her arms automatically tightened her grip around Yuvi's neck as well……

Some one was closely watching them from the corner of the door….
"aaaahh young love isn't that sweet??"

"Yeah….I told you….they have something going on between them…."

"What do u mean?? Anyways what can we do about it…..???"

"We have got to make them realize that before its too late…."

"So any ideas??"

"Yeah…actually I do…..but we need someone's help….make that….a few peoples help….."

"Are u sure this is gonna work?"

"Positive!"

Ashi and Yuvi enjoyed there very own 'slow dancing'….they were happy that they picked this type of dance to do….then suddenly they heard a small gong….it was the old grand fathers clock in the center of the room…. 😕 😕 😕

It was 12! Both of them looked at the clocked and wished that this time comes again n again….
"well….I think we have to go…" Ashi said…."awww..do we have to" Yuvi said with a sad smile…

As soon as they exited the room…a voice from behind boomed out loud…"may I know what u were doing here in the middle of the night??!!"…………….


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ohky!!!!!!

long enuf now??

plz plz plz be honest!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeee part 👏
loved it,plz cont asap. 😊

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