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Posted: 18 years ago
Welcome Back Nikki😉

continue soon😛

Divz
Edited by divya_92 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 17

There was about 1 more day left to the much awaited semi-finals and this got everyone tensed up….not Ashi n Yuvi….but Sid, Raj and Priya!!... "Costumes…costumes….aha! There you are!" Priya screamed as she spotted the twosome namely Ashi n Yuvi walking down the corridor…. "hey Priya!

Wassup??" Yuvi casually asked… "WASSUP! UR ASKING ME WASSUP!!! Are you guys even bothered that the semi-finals are tomorrow!! Let alone your costumes aren't even ready!!!"

"yeah yeah…we know..we know…Ashi said…but we practiced right? So we are gonna rock tomorrow!" she smiled…. "that's not going to be easy…" a voice said from behind…. They turned to look and were a least bit surprised to see aria and Arun with a smug face right behind them….

'Why are they always in our school?' Ashi started to wonder…. 'Are they like snooping around or something…?' Yuvi began to think as well…… "Hey guys!" Raj perked up from behind…. "Aria n Arun…what are you doing here…." Raj asked them…. "Were here to meet you…" aria promptly replied….

Niki's Recap: aria and Arun Vanaj are Ashi n Yuvi two rivals from Mideals high school. A couple of twins who have a lot of attitude…more that they can handle…use to study in Maurya but got kicked out by jumbo for leaking out a question paper….

"Don't u guys have any work to do??" Yuvi asked… "Yeah like you know….GET A LIFE MAYBE…!" Ashi replied…. Now it really started to bug her…why are they always here!! She has to find out….. It was really getting weird…
" I'll be back in a min" Raj replied and left with the pair of twins…..

Later that day….. (The final preparations)

"now!!!!...why now!!! why not tomorrow!!!"

"because…um…I dunno!!! Their your parents!!"

"but the semi finales are tomorrow! This could be our big break!"

"yeah I know….but-"

"but what! We haven't finished rehearsing them yet"

" Raj! Now stop it! And hurry up! We have a lot of driving to do!"

" yeah… we might as well tell them…"

"tell who?" Yuvi asked….as he looked at the two dancing couples fighting as if their was no tomorrow…… "tell you…" Priya solemnly said… "tell us what?" Ashi popped up beside Yuvi….. "that we wont be here to give you the last rehearsal before your dance tomorrow….." she slowly said again…

"WHAT!" both of them chimed at the same time….. "Why!" Ashi demanded….. "um….because Raj's parents are going to be here in a few hours and we have to go pick them up from the airport and bring them home and-"Priya paused "ohk ohk we get it" Ashi and Yuvi said as they slumped down a chair next to them….and waited for their impending doom….

"ohk! I asked jambwal sir…the gym is free for you to practice for today….sorry you guys…but we really have to go…." Raj said as Priya dragged him to the parking lot…. "we will be here tomorrow morning with your costumes….GOOD LUCK…." Priya called out as they left……

"great! Now we are stuck here without a choreographer!....what are we gonna do now??" Yuvi said…. "have no fear…Sid IS HERE!" Sid said as he approached Ashi and Yuvi "I will help you guys rehears today!" he said…. Ashi looked at Yuvi and said "oh great! Now we have a bigger reason to fear……."

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Posted: 18 years ago
finally!!!
i posted!!!
sayantika dunt kill me!!! :P
she was abt to!
now u happy?? 😆 😆 😆

yes....my fic is getting boring...
lol
ill perk it up soon!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome cumback Nikki 👏

n plzzz the fanfic is not at all getting boring

oh Gawd!!!!! Sid is here 😉 😆 😆

continue soon

cant wait 4 da next part to cum up 😛

Divz
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr888 part.... 👏
been waiting sooooo long......
hope ur examz gud....
cont soon

Dolly 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nikki gr8 part
continue soon

luv
sonam 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey u guys........
lol
this part and the next is sort of close to me........
i kinda wrote in on a reality basis.... 😳 😳 😳
hope u lik!!



Part 18

After one helluva practice Ashi n Yuvi and Sid went back to bed….imagining what the actual feel of being on a stage in front of soo many people will feel like…..

In Ashi's room…..

Ashi slowly crept in to see Vrinda sleeping soundly…so she decided not to disturb her…instead she went to bed…pulled up her covers and held out a torch light with a book in her hand and a pen…
"If anyone found out Anvesha writes a diary…my reputation is soo ruined" she giggled…. And opened the book which contained many heart and squiggles and all of them some how said the name…Yuvi…

And this is what she has to write….

Heya diary!
Guess what! Today we had a practice late in the night…I know it is getting hectic at times but its soo much fun especially dancing with Yuvi…. U know what? Dancing with him is like something I've never experienced before.....its like going into another world…where only me n him exist… and today something just like that happened but not with him….but with me….

Sid as usual was making fun of the romantic theme we had planned for our song n of coarse there were a lot of couple-to do steps which their was this one step I couldn't get the hang of not even now….I need to tell Raj tomorrow otherwise ill ruin the whole dance……anywaz: in this step he had to spin me and slowly lay me down in his left arm….and then he would gaze deeply into my eyes and slowly run his hands over my face and pick me up……I luuuv this step!!!!

Yeah…it was sooo romantic!! I would start blushing from the moment he would look into my eyes…..but the problem here is that when he slowly touches me….I get all numb and fall!!!......it is stupid! But I can't help it…….his eyes are soooo soft…..they would start mesmerizing me and I feel soo lost…..

"Ashi"

"maate?!"


"tum kahaa ho??"

"huh?"
Ashi turned around to see Vrinda sleep taking..

"hey bhaggu! maate go back to sleep"

'THUD!' and that was the sound of Vrinda falling back into her pillow and going back to sleep….
Then she went back to her deep diary writing…….
"Aah now where was I?? Aha! Here" Ashi picked up her pen and was about to write when she heard Vrinda snore….REALLY LOUDLY! This was really starting to bug her! "ahh! I am never goin to finish this…I might as well leave the room and let her sleep in peace!!"

But the only problem now was that the dorm guard must be patrolling the area and there would be no proper place to write….then it hit her…. "the GYM!" she whispered….there would not be single guard and she sort of felt like listening to the song Yuvi made for her….as she was writing about him… so listening to his music would aggravate Ashi to write…..

So now she went to the gym, sat in a bag couch next to the stereo and made herself comfortable and played yuvi's song on a low volume and began to write……
Edited by a.r.t.y - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 19

Ashi started to write from where she left off…….

Diary:

I feel soo lost…its really a weird feeling….I never felt like that before…a sudden warm and fuzzy feeling would creep up behind my back….and then I would fall and ruin the whole moment!!! I curse myself for being so weak….I am never like that…but when I am with him….my legs turn into jelly!

Oh well….the good part of the late night practice was that we have perfected the dance except for that step but it is the ending so it is just a matter of making ran and Priya panic by telling them I dunno the last step…and watching them freak! Hahahaha that would be fun….

Ohk diary! Either I continue writing about 'him' in you and how he makes me feel or I find something else to do cuz I am soo not sleepy! I don't think I even need rest for tomorrow's big day! I am perfectly fine…. Uh….on second thought…I think I'lll take the chance of trying to fall asleep…hehehe..
Cya!

Ashi read through the whole entry again and blushed…. "love makes people do really weird things" she said to herself and smiled she cant even imagine writing about something like this…… and then she realized "did I just say 'love' ??" her eyes grew really wide….

"Omg! Anvesha bannerji ray….is in love!" she whispered
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol 2 parts!
hope u lik!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey nikki,awesomeee part re 👏 both d part was rocking,plz cont soon.

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